We set out to write an alternate WH40k Heresy story, starring an all-new cast of Primarchs. Along the way we got new abhumans, new xenos, and all kinds of other 40k-ania that people thought were cool. You are welcome to join in.
Is there anything you think needs improvement so far?
Dominic Adams
Well I'm not too good with feedback, but just finish up the remainder of the page and we'll see if there's anything out of place.
Since you seem to be onboard with the Vetrovnak Incursion, you can take a look at 1d4chan.org/wiki/Second_Vetrovnak_Incursion and maybe see if there's anything that you would be interested in contributing to the main story. Work on that is temporarily paused while the Heresy gets finally sorted out, but a fresh look can't hurt.
Christian Mitchell
I can't draw shit right now, my wacom is broken. Again.
Looks good! I'll drop by with some formatting tips later after I get home.
Juan Gonzalez
Some thoughts I had on the drive home after a final:
Olmer can be a reference to Alexandria, being a center of knowledge and learning. It holds plenty of arcane knowledge too, stolen from various Legions during the Heresy. Before the planet is destroyed, it's saved by the Herald's New Librarian to be stored away. The planet has a title "The Second Terra". This is a set up for one of my future contributions, a powerful Lost and Damned Empire based on the Turks, who call their home planet "The Third Terra".
Juan Mitchell
Out of interest, how long exactly was the Second Vetrovnak Incursion?
Matthew Williams
Dunno, but if you don't get an answer you could hop into the IRC and ask Rawk, she'd almost certainly know.
Cameron Torres
WHO THE FUCK IS IRONSLUG
Carson Sanchez
Hasn't been settled yet. I would guess something like two to three years, long enough for the Imperium to hit a crisis point and muster a substantial response. After-effects last a lot longer, of course.
Ian Rodriguez
Hate to criticize your timelines again, but considering it took the imperium three thousand years to get a crusade up and going to push back the tau's expansion spheres, and they NEVER effectively pushed back against the tyranids in three centuries.
So doesn't three years seem like a *crazy* fast response time for the imperium?
Noah Myers
WAAAGH! The Beast is about three years.
Nathan Cox
Yeah but that was also happening in segmentum solar, right next to terra and under the highlords' collective noses.
When did the second incursion begin?
Levi Morgan
What part of "Hasn't been settled yet" and "I would guess" did you fail to understand? If you want to get out the slide rules and figure out a robust chronology for the conflict, nobody is stopping you.
Isaac Price
That is... shorter than I thought. I'll have to revise some of what I've been writing. Damn.
Josiah Nelson
Do you respond to all criticism with "we aren't done yet so stop criticizing and go write your own", or are timelines just a soft spot with you?
Nicholas Torres
I think it was more "we haven't worked it out yet, and are working on something else, this is a ballpark, if it bothers you work it out yourself", but I could be wrong
Jaxon Anderson
How do I get on IRC? It says BAD END
Easton Long
Step one: get an IRC client. I use BYRD because I like chrome.
Step two: input the server info ( www.thisisnotatrueending.com )
Step three: pick a nickname.
Step four: As soon as you're in, input "/join #hektorheresy"
Juan Robinson
Judging from the fact that you aren't in yet, try the following:
Make sure the channel and server are correct (channels are case sensitive).
Try using a different client.
Jayden Gutierrez
My internet is crap, I'll try tomorrow night
Isaac Nelson
No comment?
Nathan Wilson
Work on the Legion Lists continues.
Legiones with a finished first draft include: Heralds of Hektor War Scribes Sons of Fire Thunder Kings Black Augurs Eternal Zealots
Tonight I'll be polishing up and posting the Void Angels and Steel Marshals.
Jason Reyes
I think a decade or two seems like a more reasonable time span.
Andrew Thomas
See
Matthew Morris
Ongoing evidence that IRC is terrible.
Jack Bell
Considering that the Vetrovnak retreat with their first major loss, perhaps a decade is a little short.
Gabriel Nguyen
I meant long, perhaps somewhere around 5-10 years would be more appropriate
Ethan Gutierrez
bump
Benjamin Long
Never bump with bump. There's plenty of content in thread to engage with.
Ayden Perez
You Lumey, I've been working on the Void Angels, and while their Rites of War and special rules are pretty much done, as far as unique legion gear and units, nothing on their page jumps out at me. Even the Chosen don't seem to be specialized enough to warrant their own unit over just using a Legion Command Squad.
Blake Rivera
My phone autocorrects yo to you.
Nathaniel Long
Can't wait till we reach it.
Liam Reyes
Is that happening? I thought the implications on the vetrovnak page was that they had sterilised Ullanor in some way, so no Orks would grow there?
>Suggested Topic: Discuss the symbols of your chapter/warband and what they mean to them. Hmm. Admittedly I haven't created many characters, but I haven't thought much about symbols. Then again, the Four themselves kind of ARE symbols for different aspects of their respective patrons, so there's that. Don't think I've made any characters or warbands other than that. I might expand upon the Crimson Host idea a bit though.
Joshua Price
I recall seeing somewhere in the lore that we've used Fenris for something. Do any of you recall what it's been used for?
Kevin Torres
It may have been old lore, back when things weren't as different
Justin Nelson
Technically that was just one world, not several.
Justin Bailey
I want the Steel Marshal's to have a scabbard as their symbol but I'm shit at art.
Alexander Edwards
Hey can anyone take the symbol from the side of Mike Tyson's head, turn it 45 degrees and post the .png?
Adam Jones
Since Golgothos was the head of his religion back on Sepulchra, would it make sense that he be one of the founders of the Ecclesiarchy or at least this canon's version of the Death Cult?
Easton Powell
Didn't Golgothos live in a cave and survive off orc meat for the majority of his time on Sepulchra?
Cooper Collins
I thought he led his civilization against the zombies
John Hernandez
1d4chan.org/wiki/Golgothos There's that bit about how Golgothos believed that his father was or was similar to Terminus and how the religion surrounding Terminus was one that emphasized oblivion after death. I think it would make sense if our version of the Death Cult was a rebirth of Golgothos' religion within the Imperial Cult as an organization of people who want to atone for their sins by killing and dying in the Emperor's service.
Easton Adams
Golgothos is a crazy person who hardly talks to Space Marines. How would his ideas get spread?
Logan Richardson
I was thinking that he would write some kind of scripture and that it would spread through the Entombed's interactions with average Imperials
Wyatt Miller
Also, it gets spread around because the people are eager to hear the ideas of one of the sons of the Emperor. Not to the point that fatalism is integrated into the mainstream Imperial Cult, but to the point that the Death Cult is a respected, if small, minority in the Faith
Grayson Roberts
Aside from the weirdness of Dreadnought Primarch Man suddenly having literary impulses and writing something coherent through the fog of rage and agony - The Entombed are also crazy people who hardly talk. Lorgar's word had a bunch of guys eager and able to carry it to the masses.
That said, you're not getting something from nothing here. At one point the writer of the Entombed wanted them to found the Ecclesiarchy although it was never spelled out how. The scaled-down version is certainly more promising, but you haven't got a solid chain of events yet.
>it gets spread around because the people are eager to hear the ideas of one of the sons of the Emperor Would that mean a cult devoted to the writings of each of the other (Loyalist?) Primarchs? That might be too strong and probably unnecessary. You could always go with regionalism and have this cult based in the worlds near Sepulchra.
Kevin Lopez
bump
Isaac Lee
If you're running with this idea, consider the differenses between Golgothos's mentality and that of the canon death cult. Golgothos is the best of men, so him founding a cult of literal serial murderers seems a bit... Out of characters.
Brody Morris
If you keep bumping with bump I'm going to take tissue samples from your mouth and implant them into your anus along with a stem cell solution so you grow tastebuds on your asshole.
Charles Parker
bump
Luis Gonzalez
...that's a good point. Maybe this wasn't the best idea.
Christian Scott
I hate you all.
Chase Jenkins
What are the height rankings for Primarchs/Important People? Also, what are our feelings about outlier lore from semi-canon sources. Stuff like the Tyrant Star from FFG.
Blake Reyes
Golgothos > Onyx > The Emperor > Most other primarchs > Pallas and Johannes > Roman Albrecht.
That's my understanding anyway.
Robert Mitchell
On the subject, I've only seen one Primarch that wasn't described as "shorter than average"
Isaiah Brown
Or rather, of the ones whose heights were mentioned
Wyatt Carter
Or I suppose, depending on how you look at it,
Onyx > The Emperor > Most other primarchs > Pallas and Johannes > Roman Albrecht > Golgothos.
Nathan Nelson
OK, I'll stop bumping with "bump".
(Polite sage for off-topic.)
Dominic Thomas
Bump with content! Comment on another person's work! Contribute your own! Come up with creative ways to threaten your fellows!
Jaxson Ross
Isn't Tiran supposed to be a manlet too?
Nathaniel Hernandez
Ah, I guess so. It seems he and Roman compete for the honor.
Colton Russell
By my current reckoning, their heights would be,
Golgothos > Onyx > The Emperor > Hektor > Most other primarchs > Pallas, Johanes, and Merril > Roman and Tiran
Liam Davis
We spend entirely too much time discussing the heights of various primarchs.
Jacob Rodriguez
Agreed. We should spend more time discussing important things, like their blood types.
Michael Powell
I think Voidwatcher is supposed to be among the tallest, but really skinny as far as Primarch's go.
Connor Russell
Golgothos and Onyx are larger as far as I know.
Adam Brooks
Half the legiones are done, and tomorrow I start on the Entombed and Lifebringers if I have time.
Juan Miller
Bumping with Josman.
Luis Sullivan
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Owen Richardson
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Jeremiah Perry
What would you guys say are the tactical (not cultural) differences between the Mastadontii and the Lions Rampant? At the moment they look very similar (two traitor tank-oriented Legions).
I'm not Jos', just curious.
William Brooks
>What would you guys say are the tactical (not cultural) differences between the Mastadontii and the Lions Rampant? The Mastodontii are "drive me closer, I want to hit him with my sword", the Lions Rampant are WW2-type armored warfare.
Oliver Gomez
Pretty much this Mastodontii are mechanized infantry, Lions Rampant are an armored assault force.