Game Creator here

Game Creator here.

If a new Role Playing game was getting ready to come out, promised 12 playable races, 40 classes with a primary/subclass system, and an emphasize on creativity, would you be interested?

Just gauging hype for a game like that. The following is an example of a sales pitch for the game, feel free to give advice:

SALES PITCH
ANONYMOUS GAME is a ready to use fantasy board game that can expand into one of the most in content packed games you’ve ever played. In this game, 2-4 Hero Players will create and roleplay a Hero, while 1 GM (Game Master) Player coordinates the story and controls fierce monsters for them to battle.

The setting takes place in a post-apocalyptic, early steampunk and dystopian future, were the civilized society fights a losing battle against Neon and her Fusion Born Sentinels, an organized group of super mutants. Featuring 12 playable races, 40 classes, and over 200 character defining traits, this game offers a rich number of choices for players to create their own Hero. Taking this one step further, a primary/subclass system challenges your creativity, while 18 rank-able feats extend your character’s individual potential.

This game encourages creativity. Want to play as an axe-wielding Paladin of glaciers, that’s also an Engineer with the ability to hack computers? Go for it. Rather be a beautiful half-elf half-felion that can summon animal companions as a Druid, but still relies on her bladed guitar as a Bard? That’s a thing too. As a GM player, guide Hero Players through the sample campaign, or feel free to use the monster creator, ability creator, and NPC (non-player character) creator to build your very own!

ANONYMOUS GAME invites you to challenge your creativity against the brutal forces of this gritty world. Will you survive, or will you and the rest of your party succumb to the wastelands?

>class-based RPG system
>when it's almost 2020

Yeesh.

One that is lose though, and only there for an identity purpose and a few starting abilities?

For example, a Warrior/Ninja that wants to pick up Necromancer abilities easily could. Does that still sound as bad?

Nice pitch. Is the game done yet?

Serious question, how many RPG systems have you played, or at least read in their entirety?

This sounds horrible.

Please elaborate, I'll listen to any criticism.

You've told me absolutely nothing about the mechanics or why this game is distinct from others on the market. It's a very vague, generic pitch which sounds good but doesn't really hook me. Then again, I'm a jaded asshole who has played so many games I'm really on the look for things which are innovative in some way, and do things differently, so when it comes to a pitch like this that's what I always look for. It's not going to be what most people are thinking about.

Just because you have many options to jam in together does not mean it would be a great idea.

It is, mostly optimizing and further play testing at this point. It's a small hit, even had a shop owner test it. Pretty much all positive feedback, with of course everyone has opinions on optimization. Heavily listening to feedback.