CYOA General /cyoag/

new thread, reposting my old OC

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I don't get this cyoa. Why wouldn't I immediately go with her? The cyoa even suggests doing it.

Well, I know I heard of Case from somewhere here, but I can't remember from where. I know Weeping orc made that one cyoa involving his namesake, though I don't have it saved. And I know I'm NRG.

Does that help.

Not really, I got no clue what you made.
I need some kind of description who all these people are.

>Not really, I got no clue what you made.
I'll get to posting.
1/3

There's more, but I'll only post three of my projects.
2/3

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Here is the one I see reposted the most.

And here is the first image cyoa I did.
1/2

2/2

>The Everwalking Knight

If I pulled off his armor, would he die?

Thorgrima Sigurdurdottir

>Vengeance

>Sword
>Brawling
>Throwing
>Unflinching
>Fearsome

>Chastity Rune
>Watcher Rune
>Berserk Rune

Greatsword
>Vampire
>Burning Pain
Throwing Axe
>Barbs
>Seeker
Fist Claws
>Atlas
>Crusher
Leather Armor
>Supporting
>Blood and Guts
>Absorbent

>Titan
>Strength 3 (2 free)
>Speed 3 (2 free)
>Toughness 3 (1 free)
>Regeneration 3
>Natural Weapons 2

>Healing Bolt (heal, missile)
>Fire Storm (harm, cataclysm)

>Lord Pilecki
>Lady Montepellier

>The Shieldmaiden
>The Sister
>The Summoner
>The Wolfmaster
>The King's Daughter
>The Bombarder
>The Living Wall

FUCKING DAESH RUNNING AROUND BEHEADING INNOCENT PEOPLE AND ENSLAVING AND RAPING WOMEN!!!!! LETS SEE HOW YOU BASTARDS LIKE BEING RAPED AND BEHEADED WITH MY GREATSWORD!!!!! WITH SUPERHUMAN SPEED, STRENGTH, TOUGHNESS AND REGENERATION FROM MY GODDESS I WILL PUMMEL MY WAY THROUGH YOUR STUPIDLY UNARMORED HORSE ARMY AND LAUGH AT THE YOUR BLOODY SUICIDE EXPLOSIONS!!!!!! THERE WILL BE NO MERCY UNTIL EVERY ONE OF YOU RAPING, TORTURING MURDERING SCUM ARE COMPLETELY ANNIHILATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHHA

For vengeance!

Because you got shit to do nigga.

Has SDA said anything about Star Dust (the quest)?

I don't know.

It would be extremely painful.

>female character
>line after >>
>hates rapists
It's Angel alright. I wonder why the Daesh specifically and not the faction led by a snakepenis Oni.

OC posted sorta late last thread.

I'm asking again because I didn't get a response last thread. Why do (some of you) think Travelers tale has good companions? What makes them good?

Know most of those.. Here's some info on them.

MaidofCharts did Mad Science Waifu cyoa

Case did the following cyoas: Bread Waifu, Devoted, Space Station Construction, Be The Dark Souls Boss and drug waifu.

3-tankista did 3 cyoas: Blood Magic, Time of Trouble and Worm cyoa #5.

PDF user has a few cyoas in pdf format: Energy, 4horseman, political party, 7 sins virtues.

Weeping Orc did the weeping orc's girly goblin giveaway cyoa. - orc slaves.

Pallas did the following cyoas: Bells, Identical Twins, Armored Insurrection and has some wips.

Rosanon did the Magic TG Order Form and the Chill Zone and some meta cyoas.


No idea about Ruse, Leah or Tanasinn and I can't remember what super perverted user did and can't seem to find a folder with his name on it, though I remember him doing some.

>Squire Sidekick
>Ruth Ravenrend
>Demons
Hopefully I can shank one or two demons while they are distracted by a magic fire show.

You did wealth too didnt you?

>been away. did lewd genie get posted?
>nope
Probably a troll gallery. Has happened before.

Description / list here
Wasn't able to answer you before thread died.

Yes. Among others.

Daesh is Not!ISIS in they enslaved and raped hundreds or maybe thousands of women irl just recently! But if I had some free time I might swing by and cut off rape prince's "snake" to.

Long time lurker working on my first OC. Has to do with mechanics in space and scrapping together your own junk heap of a ship with the image related aesthetic in mind. Inspired by the Space Opera and Star Dust CYOAs. Give me ideas for any of the following before I burn out and if I like them enough I'll find a way to fit them in all snugly and cozy like.

>Alien races, original or stolen. idc.
>Companions - be they engineers, gunners, pilots.
>Images for cool space scrap.

Thumbs-up. But then MaidOfCharts wans't actually an author when the cyoa was made!?
And most of these only made one??

Yes they did but it was a "community" project where community members who made something donated a character and a gift, which SDA organized. I think maid was working on theirs about the same time.

Ruse is the author of Muscle Wizard cyoa.

I don't know about Leah or Tanasinn, but one of is in the process of making their first cyoa.

iirc, someone made a tool to create fairly simplistic CYOAs, and they noted that all of their CYOAs were created with this tool.

Do you search for images on any sites not already linked in the pastebin?

>captcha ask for train stations, zero train stations visible, 1 train yard, 1 train junction, 1 train line

Have a symbiotic alien race that you can pick as a companion and share a body with. Their gift is functioning as an EVA suit / waifu.

Well yeah, but in this fantasy world the Daesh are definitely not the only rapists.

Ok thanks for that. Didn't have a name and just called him MuscleWizardAnon.

>working on theirs
Aka. not an author YET! He shouldn't be on there.

>posting the version with the cringe-inducing text
Never do this again.

>posting a cringe inducing post
never do this again

>posting on Veeky Forums

delet yourselves

Motivation: Penance

>Combat Skills:
Sword: Against All Odds, Avatar-Slayer
Brawling: Cast Fist, Slamming
Shield: Barrier, Repulsor
>Mental traits:
Unflinching
Self-Controlled
>Demonic Runes:
Efficiency Rune
Watcher Rune

>Armor Enchantments:
Weathered
Unhindered
Cooled

Avatar Form: Titan
>Abilities:
Strength 3 (-1)
Speed 3 (-1)
Toughness 3 (-2)
Regeneration 3
Breath Weapon 2

>Magical Spells:
Harm - Cataclysm
Heal/Fortify - Totem

Faction(s): The Everwalking Knight
Companion(s): The Fairy

No specific target, just travelling the land attempting to bury sins of the past.

I liked this. Wish there were drawbacks so I could get more runes or enchantments, but that's no biggie.

what is that pic from?

Take it up with SDA then. He'll just laugh at you and post a smug anime face.

aaaand now im aroused

gannadene.deviantart.com/art/Hey-Leon-636749837

I think Tanasinn is the author of pic related.

Aaand furry porn.

>only posting first image

I haven't met a Veeky Forums drawfag that hasn't drawn commissions for furfags.

That's where all the money is.

Contribution accepted. Finding an image might be a challenge but I don't care at this stage of development. For now this one works, but if I find a better one I'll toss it.

Thank ya kindly user.
Still taking ideas.

>Alien races
An all-woman race of extremely strong women (but they don't look the part) that are submissive/lovey-dovey to her husband but extremely protective of him and won't let any woman touch/harm him.

How about a robot made to adapt to circumstances so he could serve as a mechanic in an ever evolving series of ships, but he has been around for a long ass time so the people he served no longer exist.
He adapted to fix himself but only had scrap to work with. He further adapted to work socially once it became required of him, and eventually started developing a personality and a soul.

Meng Ah Er Xuan, Dream Chosen of Darkness, aka the Devouring Darkness.
>Penance
Combat Skills
-Brawling: Crusher, Atlas
-Throwing (Darts): Seeker, Barbs
-Polearm (Spetum): Against All Odds, Vampire
Armor: Weathered, Absorbent

Mental Traits
-Self-Controlled
-Fearsome

Runes
-Chastity
-Cleaning Rune
-Efficiency Rune

Avatar Form: Amorphous
-Regeneration 3 Free
-Toughness 2 Free +1
-Natural Weapons +3 (Avatar Slayer, Burning Pain)
-Strength +3
-Speed +2

Spells
-Cataclysm (Soothing Wave of Shadows): Heal+Fortify
-Cataclysm (Acidic Rain of Blood): Harm+Madness

Allies:
-The Everwalking Knight
-The Hidden Blade of Woadheim

Companions:
-The Shieldmaiden
-The Mutant Child
-The Wolfmaster
-The Living Wall
-The Bombadier
-The Escaped Gladiator
-The King's Daughter

Where she comes from, there is not even a hint, save that she returned from the lands of the dead with a task to complete before she may return to the goddess she claims is her lover.

Reborn with unholy skills and impossible strength, she travels the land seeking allies in her task, collecting the damaged, the maimed, and the estranged as friends. She has no one enemy, seeing all that torment the lands as her enemies.

But the Avatars fear her as they fear no other, for when she discards her human guise and takes on the form she claims her beloved gave her, not even the most powerful can withstand her terrifying, awful onslaught for long...

Do you prefer fetish cyoas where there are multiple waifus but each fetish has only one waifu (e.g. only one goo girl or only one futa """"girl"""") or cyoas focused on one main fetish where waifus correspond to different shades of that fetish (e.g. femdom cyoa with humiliation, big mommy and bondage waifus)? I'm not thinking about making one now, just wondering if there is any point in adding that one token slime girl to all waifu cyoas.

I prefer the kind of cyoa that gets made and not posted about for (You)'s.

The latter. Having a cyoa cover a single fetish in depth is better than a cyoa that shallowly covers everything.

>just wondering if there is any point in adding that one token slime girl to all waifu cyoas.
Yes. It can literally not be considered a cyoa if there is no slimegirl waifu in there.

>Not loving your shipfu to post the second page

Where's that third page?!

Very possible. His name is in russian or something so nothing that's easy to type on an english keyboard, so I didn't bother making a folder for his stuff.

Contribution accepted. Tweaks pending. Might make this an insect-esq race for that bug waifu option. Regardless of how I fuck it up, I appreciate the finput. Thank ya kindly user.

Contribution accepted. Pic related. I like this one. Good work. Thank ya kindly user.

Still taking ideas.

>Finput
meant input

>insect
lost all interest, may as well not add it.

God dammit I go to bead early and miss the discussion last night.

I don't know if you want them...

But in case you feel like adding enemies, a Scrapyard Overlord would be nice. Crazy scientist who turns people's brains into "computers" for his scrap golems.
He hoards nice parts and taking him out could get you some of that.

Did you make a necklace?

>I'm finally present for a genie gallery

>it's a fake gallery

it's not fair

If it makes you feel any better, I've pretty much missed every gallery from late 2015 to now due to my conflicting work schedule.

>tfw I want to actually make a gallery to make up for that unfortunate circumstance, but I want to finish my current project, too.

Don't listen to this user, I like the sound of it.

We all know what you want to do

He said he was doing it to get the /d/ out of our systems

WE HAVE TO REJECT HIS PROPOSAL

MORE LEW/d/ CYOAS

NON STOP UNTIL HE MAKES THAT GALLERY

I'll play around with the idea and do my best. If I can't make space mantis waifu work then I'll come up with something else. Just remember that no matter what I put into the final project, you can always imagine whatever you like

Shit nigga which one'll you make ! ?

I'll choose the Unlocked mind 'cause drawback is minimal and I can actually control it
I also choose Analytical Mind for the world gift; we shall become a race we were meant to be.

Already on it famalam. Expect it by tomorrow.

Leah did Hivemind.

Indefinite hiatus but it's certainly not out of possibility for me to run it again. The quest was fun but took a lot out of me and I'm going to be very busy for the next year.

I miss the crew, though.

>So I do hope you keep interest in this little project of mine
Yeah I do but I ain't reading a bug waifu. Like a black girl or a fattie I would never be attracted to her.

This is a question for the battlemage user. For the hybrid option on the custom weapons. Does it cost the total amount of all weapons combined, on top of their initial cost?

What does /cyoag/ think of modern fantasy and Spire?

I'm sorry if I offended you Italic-chan, I can feel the amount of time and effort you put on your CYOAs, it's just that the characters doesn't work for me.

I feel like describes, though not in a very polite manner, how I feel. It seems all characters have too much ambition or are a pawn for someone else, so I keep asking myself why they are tagging with me and why should I let someone who would not hesitate to betray me if that meant pushing their agenda stay around.
I think it's missing some kind of neutral character like the adventurer's from Pokemon Personified.

>Until

No, not until. Just more, non-stop, forever. Lewd CYOAs are always the best CYOAs.

>modern fantasy
Did it come out yet?

>Spire
Not my cup of tea.

I'm sure it's total amount plus 1

>I do have alcoholism
yeah just rub it in why don't you...

It's just the total amount of weapons added together, but SDA did say something about adding trick weapons

Looks good!

That's my problem with most large Italic made cyoas.

I get that in real life, people obviously have their own goals and ambitions and actively try to pursue them in order to actualize their own happiness but I feel like Italics has emphasized way too much on those characterization aspects in order to make incredibly real and life like companions, which ultimately is their own downfall; the more italics talks about their own ambitions, goals and agendas and how much they strive to achieve them, the more they feel less like trustworthy and loyal friends that you want to journey with, that you'll know will stick with out through thick and thin as you have awesome adventures and more like competing parties or friends with benefits.

I think I understand Italics now, he's literally the Tolstoy of cyoas and creating companions, they are very fascinating and interesting to read and discuss about, he writes alot of them and gives each of them too much detail that its suffocating.

Reposting this one from yesterday 'cause why not

did i miss the genie gallery

It was a dud.

>Gentle femdom
>towering giant

Is Tok'Haar around? If so I just want to say you kick ass, man. I just got finished with that drow CYOA. Soooo good. I think I would have dedicated more time to the drow waifus and the incest, holy fuck that bit was hot, but overall 10/10 job.

Holy fuck, I LOVE your CYOA
keksimus maximus.jpg, especially Melody Heavenheart hahahah, great stuff user, sincerely.
One thing I don't get; "Don't eat the pomegranate seeds"
I choose
Mage sidekick, although I do bath regularly;
Firo Finderfoot for Hero, 'cause he's the only one to make this adventure fun and Undead as the Threat.
One thing though; there are a few grammatical errors, just correct those and you'll have a 10/10 CYOA imho.
Fuck, I can imagine these as a book series

You conveyed what I meant to say better than I did.
Taking Tier 1 companions for Ivera as an example: Aidan will stab you in the back if you piss off Fafnir, Noa is a nuke and Villain literally treats you like a maturing wine.
I feel like picking them wouldn't amount in forming an alliance with them but an unilateral decision of their part that you can't do anything about.

>and the incest
Wait, I missed something.

Hesh up, beri.

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Make that anal too and I'm in
Btw.That faggot Leon, after all he went through in that game he declines Ashley's offer 'cause he's a beta faggot for Ada. Un-fucking-believeable.

So you're already making a new CYOA right?

Tell me more.

Sometimes too much information is worse than not enough information.

>Leah did Hivemind.
Thanks! All I have for hivemind is a tripcode and no name.