CYOA General - /cyoag/

broken promises edition

pastebin: pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

Have some OC.

I still need to shorten down the intro. It's way too long. You can technically skip the first three text blocks if you want & just sorta infer what happened.

As always, please inform me of any typos so that I may fix them. Thanks!

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I'm that user from ages ago who asked if anyone would be interested in a CYOA where you are the Sealed Evil in the process of breaking free from your prison.

Anyone have any styles of ancient evil they like? Any ideas on different forms of imprisonment?

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Off the top of my head:
>Lovecraftian
>Blight
>Fallen Angel

>Imprisoned deep within the earth
>Imprisoned in an alternate dimension
>Stripped of your powers and memory and placed into the body of a mortal

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beri, are you making an entire series of "A New "

Also, I gotta say, I always love the care you take in selecting pictures for your works.

My idea is that is you want to make a cyoa make it and stop trying to brainstorm ideas in the thread.

>care you take in selecting pictures for your works
>Generic anime girls
yeah lots of care indeed

An ordinary man who took every opportunity he could to grab a little more power until he finally transcended his humanity. Imprisoned by his mortal nemesis who even he respected, only that mortals descendants can be the ones to stop him should he return.

AM-style evil supercomputer
Evil Wizard King from when magic was real

Bound in a mortal body, slowly getting powers back.

The amount of brainstorming in thread has really dramatically increased over the last few months hasn't it.

A non-evil entity whose very existence has a terrible effect on the world such as causing a plague to spread or just fucking with the nature of reality.

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I think I'm gonna sleep now. I'll respond to things in the morning.

Considering it. Don't know how far it'll go.
Thanks. Finding pictures is always the longest part of the process.

>Generic anime girls
That's more of keeping to a theme. It's intentional. Switching to something else partway through would be weird. You're saying you'd like more western art or?

Styles of imprisonment.

>Magically sealed, coffin, cave, big hole
>Prison world
>dangerous/improbable location, bottom of the sea, core of the moon
>Separate dimension
>Simply nailed and chained to a wall in some fuck off remote location

Also, would being evil and exacting revenge be mandatory once I get out. Or can I save the world Furi style or even just go on vacation?

>Any ideas on different forms of imprisonment?
Tin can.

I read a thing that had some nearly-god dude that got imprisoned in a house in the middle of nowhere because someone fucked him up, but since he was just god enough to be immortal, they drove a big fucking metal spike through his chest and pinned him to the floor.
In the end, he had enough godliness to project his image/will a certain radius around his house, but some magic bs kept him from removing the spike.

It might be an idea if you can find a more condensed version/way of saying it.

With "Do not touch, contains impossible cosmic evil" written on it in sharpie.

Exactly.

Probably should have specified; when I said styles of sealed evil, I meant what made them so dangerous that they had to be sealed. Stuff like destroying or corrupting the world with their very presence, or commanding untold legions of dark armies.
Similar stuff with the style of imprisonment. Try to give general ideas that could cover any builds you could think of, not a description of a build
The CYOA is primarily focused on your prison and the hurdles you would face. The only thing hindering what you choose to do with the world once you're free is whatever resistance it could devote against you.

Or "mad scientist/wizard cannibal and his two minions who decided to go to sleep for a while, but in such a way that waking them was virtually assured because of what schmuck bait their preserved state and associated artifacts presented".

Basically guarantees a wizard is going to open it.

Or "Gramma Nummin's Cosmic Horror in Tuna Broth" with an expiration date expressed in complex numbers.

I guess there was something about a disappointing genie CYOA a few threads back?
I can do genie CYOAS.
no lewd plz

fucking wizards, am I right

The reason it was disappointing was because it was a lewd genie CYOA with a bunch of different images submitted.

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Or the dimension-hopping President of the United States of America.

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one job
ONE FUCKING JOB

Good doggo! Pierce the heavens with your sniffy!

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>No lewd
>uses the genie template that has the lewdest art.
C'mon. Take this image.

Be the greenest lantern

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Beri I thought you said you were going to bed?

>no lewd plz
Screw you I really wanted to see this one get in.

>no lewd
>posts lewd
Hmmmm.

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It might be a gif, but it's still too outrageous to leave out.

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here is one

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Yeah.

Why are you posting the worst art of this card?

here

well, is it?

But I didn't post your card.

relevant to brainstorm

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I love that the plot of Let it Die is basically him learning to love.

Now if only any of those Well clicked with me.

>plot of Let it Die is basically him learning to love.
never thought of it that way
also the game is within a game in a mind fuck sort of way.

Needs lewd well.

Is there more sci fi + fantasy cyoa like this?

Don't know, probably not, I'm not the author.

The plot of Let it Die is literally

> A frustrated otaku has given up on humanity, but one day a beautiful and mysterious senpai moves into town! Together they will grow closer and come to realize their feelings, as hope for the future and love blossoms between them.

It's fucking great.

Space Refugee if you squint
Traveller's Tale
Last Star
Ujimodan
Bounty Hunter
ZombieRPG
Conduit
Dead King's Offer
Pic related

The plot is:

>An uncle known as Death falls in love with a Senpai. Unable to confess his feelings he is gifted with the Deux Ex Machina that allows his Senpai to die repeatedly in a large tower that he funded in a game. Now Senapi must climb to the top of the tower while Uncle Death tries a way to find to confess his feelings, while questioning of the nature of love.

I love that all this shit we're saying is pretty much true.

Finds a way.

I love the first two but I never saw the other ones, will look them up. Thanks!

All this recent lewd OC makes me feel like the luckyest fag in the world. Thanks guys

blind pick

> No lewd
>Uses the goddamn harem djinn header

PICK ONE, DAMMIT.

blind pick
i-it was the only one I had okay

Looked them up. I've actually know Last Star, Ujimodan, Bounty Hunter and Conduit but had forgotten about them. I like Ujimodan and Bounty Hunter, Last Star is weird and never got the hang of Conduit.

Couldn't find ZombieRPG and Dead King's Offer is new to me.

> Uncle Death.
> Lady right next to him.
> GLORIOUS ARMY MARCHING TO ANTHEM OF GLORIOUS CONQUEST

Hal Jordan, Yelling black dude, and Outrageous.

I hope I get POWER!

Anyone still up? I just finished a first draft for a magic CYOA and want to post.

Been writing this one for a while,

>fucking great days

Terry Crews, Hal, Anzu

>michael's head made it in

Kinda a long read but I wanted to do a text heavy one

VSAUCE, DECAPITATION HERE

>I shall Grant you a wish
>a wish
>everyone is asking for three

I pick top left, black and white chick.

The standard for these genie images is three.

Both Doggos and Terry Crews.

Here you go.

>left
????????

I blame the other retards for making me retarded. Top right...

>Form Age: Older
>Well: Hope
>Magical Rites: Luna B, Tempora S, Shift A, Astra C, Arma B, Warp B
>Physical Traits: Mind A, Stamina S, Reserves A, Dexterity A
>Tool: Gun
>Outfit: Thematic (Tempura)
>Familiar: Pip & Pop
>Deeds: Help People, Slay Phantoms, Purify Rogues

>obligatory Magical Dio

Other than that, just live life to the fullest and help those in need.

>Vrenelmancy
Sounds nifty, at the very least.
>Agil
I need more money.

Overall, rather nice. I like the unique magic options.

>Outfit: Thematic (Tempura)

Fuck.

>it will yield random coins equal to the note's assigned value and the coin's actual value to a vrenelmancer.
>Coin's actual value

What did you mean by this?

Why do I feel tempted to make some kind of edgy counterpart to this?

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which option lets me be Kid Marvelman

The blurred edges for the pictures aren't doing it for me.

>pic
Izzat some kind of edit?

too late

Go ahead, I always liked the concept of magical girls up to the actual always young girls part of it. If I can be a chosen defender of humanity by night and keep my dick that'd be great.

As long as I can draw from pure rage, go ahead.

Yes. I can tell without even clicking man, open your eyes.

Like a quarter is worth 25 cents, but if its a rare quarter that summons a dragon, you need to burn a 100$ to have a chance to get it.

I can see why it might be confusing. I'll change actual to magical next draft

Yes, user. Make a league of evil magical boys so I can become the edgy shota I've always wanted to be

Hey I have another one I made a few days ago and forgot