CYOA General

Last Thread Pastebin: pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

Mystery box.

Holy Hell! you got the title, pastebin, link to last thread and a newish cyoa all in the first post!

Congrats!

Anyone have the second version of this

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>Kitsune
This is one of the rare times where I wish I had picked the picture box. Jjune is a great artist.
Sadly I can't post most of his stuff

Been gone for half a year, my friends.

What's new since august 2016?
(anything dark lord/god- like)

Eldritch abomination - 50
Divine beauty - 10
Living nightmare - 10
Father of plagues - 20
Apex predator - 10

Devourer + 75

Immortality - 50
Divine resilence - 20
Martial prowess - 5

Demonic pact + 25

Telekinesis - 25

You're really better off just checking the pastabin. There are things that get posted one thread and then the next are lost literally forever. Though I'll post this because I like it.

Was this made by that chinese guy? Cause if so, he improved a lot.

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Yep, that's him alright.

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Now that I've posted five CYOA's despite only going to post one you should see how much good work has been done. A lot. Seriously, check the pastabin.

More than one waifu will ruin your laifu

Divine Speed
Shadow Form
Illusionist
Godly Mind
God's Eyes
Sixth Sense
Ancient Mysteries

I'll monopolize all cubes ASAP. And ruin the fun for all of those Devourer and FoP motherfuckers with my new phenomenal cosmic power.

The "point awarding gifts" still cost points. They award points based on use, ie your demonic pact costs 25 but gives you 1 point for every 10 souls you obtain, paying for itself after 250 souls and maxing out at 1000.

Immortality
shapeshifting
godly mind
divine memory
god's eyes

I'd rather not PVP or really compete in any way. I'm pretty much content just to live out my immortal life and be left alone. Devourers can't eat me and I'm not really doing anything to bother anyone else.

>this stale meme again
I made this just for you, user

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>Monogamy is a stale meme

Did you miss the last Veeky Forums orgy? We all performed abortions for great satan and swore an oath to only have sex outside of marriage

>user thinks my cyoa is good

Aw no one ever tells me about these things

It is good, it looks pretty too. It's too bad you shut down the nascent RP imo. IIRC people wanted to marry and have phoenix children and stuff.

Immortality
Ascended
Divine Memory
Artistic: Storytelling/Writing (like, fiction novel writing is what I'm aiming for.)

Pretty much just gonna enjoy writing stories and experiencing stories like I do now, but without having to worry about food or sleep or aging, and just generally continuing to relax and enjoy life for forever if possible.

I'm on to you, user in a devil suit!

It's a single player cyoa. It made no sense

So what? People RP based off CYOAs all the time. Shutting that down out of autism makes no sense, you're just subtracting fun and adding nothing.

>Familiar Face (10)
>Human
>Vacuo
>Witch

>Ferocity (10)
>Strength (20)
>Energy (20)
>Combat (40)

>Melee: Reinforced gauntlets (100)
>Weight enhancement (100)
>Collapsible: Wristbands (50)

>Scroll (0)
>Wilderness gear (50)
>Rebreather (50)
>Armor (100)
>Motorbike (300)
>Targeting glasses (150)

I AM THE FUCKBRINGER, BRINGER OF THE FUCK.
I WILL PUNCH MY WAY TO GLORY.
I WILL PUNCH THE SUN.

I didn't "shut down" anything. They could have kept going if they wanted. I told them the exact same thing I told you.

Question for the author: Can "Alternative Discharge" be used to add more than one fluid/location to the energy discharge list? If yes, would you get an extra point for each additional fluid/location, or just the one point regardless of how many you'd add?

Actually you said "No. There's one person. This is a single-player experience." which is basically a shut down.

I felt the same way for a while - I picked the kitsune then looked at the mystery box out of curiosity. So much more fluffy!

But... A kyuubi is an elder kitsune, no? More tails come with seniority, with many years of experience and growth as a kitsune; they're a record of your achievements and accomplishments, every one of them telling a story of wonderful times gone by.

Starting out with nine tails feels wrong. It would be like playing somebody else's saved game. I'm uncomfortable with the whole idea.

So I'll stick with my first choice. I'll be a kitsune waifu with only one tail. If I become a kyuubi in the future it'll be as the result of a kitsune's long life well lived, and those tails will be truly my tails.

i can't argue with dubs

>So I'll stick with my first choice. I'll be a kitsune waifu with only one tail. If I become a kyuubi in the future it'll be as the result of a kitsune's long life well lived, and those tails will be truly my tails.
I can't argue with that. I change my mind and agree with you

>tfw I will never get a pet dogoo and go adventuring with the Nep-Neps.

>Admitting wrongdoing in an online argument.

You're doing it wrong, user.

what new on cyoag since hero university cyoa released?

A shitton.

You're right user, I've changed my mind and wholly agree with you now.

fuck i would make cyoa if i have good english and weren't too lazy to make one

Make a CYOA entirely in pictograms.

nah guess i'll remake my old cyoa

y-you too

I really wanted to add more choice to the cyoa - specifically a "you found an artifact" and a "you gained an ally and an enemy".
But I couldn't implement the first one without feeling like the cyoa became too generic, and I couldn't figure out how to implement the latter without feeling I shoehorned it in. It just felt weird and out of place.
I think it's weird to hear someone say a cyoa is "good", then see how few builds it got. but that's just me being an author living off headpats i think

You tend to get few builds with CYOAs with few choices. I think someone pointed out before that only two of the choices you can make actually matter as seasons change and you can go somewhere else

An artifact section and enemies/companions might feel generic but there's a reason they're a staple and if they had been included you probably would have gotten a lot more builds/headpats.

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Reincarnation
Divine Engineer
Godly Mind
Divine Memory
God's Eyes
Divine weapon which is a 6 barrel minigun loaded with with explosive rounds using metalstorm technology capable of firing 4600 rpm complete with a auto deploying ground brace and a pivoting point.

Ill just build an army of robots and bring forward a new dawn of mankind.
Also if shit gets in my way I always have the minigun.

Anticipating whoever did this continuing it.

Wondering if this guy did anything else., though. Anyone know?

>seasons change and you can go somewhere else
I somewhat disagree with both points. The beginnings of your adventure matter.
but eh, better to cut my loses

It's on the back-burner for now since I ran out of steam halfway through.

The entire thing is about becoming an elder god and building an elder god name along with an epithet through which you gain your powers. The whole span is massive and has at least four hundred options worth of titles and words and name components, but I cower in anticipation of the image hunt that will ensue.

That image was a servants page I made using the system of titles and names I had written down as a test of sorts to see how aesthetically pleasing they sounded and to test out if the epithet system was sufficiently diverse for a variety of titles.

I've made a few other small things like the Gentle Femdom CYOA, Elf Slave CYOA, Netorare Quest here and berserk apostle here as well as a few other things.


I'll keep working on it ONCE I'M DONE WITH MY CURRENT PROJECTS

I'm glad you liked it.

>but I cower in anticipation of the image hunt that will ensue.
maybe... don't have pictures for all 400 options?

Ambitious. I like the idea, for what it's worth!

This.

Group them by category, and add a picture for that, or only tag avery fourth or fifth option with a picture.

If you go the latter route, maybe stagger them semi-randomly, like pic, skip four, pic, skip six, pic, skip five, to keep the pages from becoming a boring grid. Grids are fine, but when you have a big one like yours it might help to spice the visual appeal up a little.

>no saber option
fuck you

>Abomination

>Ahegao-induncing dick, Mindbreak specialist, Handsome motherfucker

>Your tears feed me

Despite being a scumbag who fucks other people wives, I will still follow a honor code, I will only fuck the wives of people who I know deserve the suffering, corrupt politicians, criminals who have avoided the law, that sort of thing.

And my nature as a monster will keep me safe from being killed as revenge.

You can't just add saber to everything.

Do you even Nasuverse?

>and has at least four hundred options worth of titles and words and name components
Maaaan.

>but I cower in anticipation of the image hunt that will ensue.
I understand. This is why I've been stockpiling on pics for WHENEVER I GET AROUND to making that CYOA in my head. Maybe never, who knows. But it'll be nice knowing I've got them images ready to use if I ever do.

The idea of building up my own pantheon of gods and mythical monsters really piqued my interest when I saw that page. Will continue hoping for the day you finish it, then.

kids now a days never learn the might of our lord and saviour saber eh lad?

>You can't just add saber to everything.

U WOT M8

Somebody hasn't mastered Unlimited Saber Works apparently.

that is what you believe, infidel

Ew.

Still a work in progress. Anons kept asking for a xeno character, so I added it.

Says who?

>all these saberface old hags instead of everyone's favorite dragon-vampire idol/halloween superstar/hero liz

Hell, she even comes both saber and BBA flavors so you don't have any excuses.

NO SABER IN THIS ONE EITHER.
FUCKING SACRILEGE

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Good day, citizen, this is the saber requisition division of the SS, all your Cyoa's must contain at least 1 saber or you will be taken to the concentration camps.
thank you for you're time have a nice day
t.saber nazi

This is fucking cool.

>Motivation
Ambition.
>3 Combat Skills
Brawling, Bludeon (Ol' Lefty,) Axe (Ol' Righty)
>2 Mental Traits
Self-controlled + Tactitian. Imma game dis world.
>2 Runes (+ Auto Chastity Rune)
Cleansing Rune + Watcher Rune
Nefs bullshit diseases and keeps me nice and clean should dark goddess waifu check in for an unannounced fuck visit.
Watcher Rune because Spidey Sense thwarts petty assassination attempts.
>2 Enchantments per weapon
Axe and Bludgeon: Explosion + Ressurect on BOTH.
Fuck yeah chain summoning masses of undead.
Brawling: Atlas, Slamming

>3 Armor Enchantments
Feather, Cooled, Unhindered
>Avatar Form Fuck Yeah
Amorphous (base lvls regeneration 3/3, toughness 2/3)
>Base form abilities (9 points)
Regeneration 3/3 (-0) Toughness 3/3 (-1)
Natural Weapons 3/3 (-4) with weapon enchantments Avatar-Slayer and Against All Odds
Wings 3/3 seems insanely overpowered for the fast travel prospects alone (-7)
Strength 2/3 for moderate solo siege capability (-9)
>2 Magical Spells
Missile, Cataclysm
>Up to 3 Spell effects per Spell (Effectiveness diluted for each spell)
BOTH Missile and Cataclysm spell effects:
Push/Pull, Harm (with cosmetic shadow element as a preview of my avatar form)
Redundancy for targeted+aoe versatility.

Alright, I'm ready to fuck! Rate my build guys.

Damn, when did Saber hit girl-puberty?

>Supreme Sorcerer
>Human (+1)
>Empower the People (+2)
>Fair Warning (+2)
>Adventurer (+1)
>I See You (+2)
>Signature (+1)

>22 shards
>Death Realm (19)
>Fire Elementalism (Free)
>Got Style? (18)
>No Guns (17)
>Unbendable Time (16)
>Final Form (13)
>Realm Knowledge (12)
>Legendary Weapon [Magma] (11)
>Legendary Armor (10)
>Pet Dragon x3 (1)

>Agent of Chaos
>Apocalypse (Dragon Invasion)
>Combo Effects (Half Dragon [0 shards], Dragon Lord)

Show up, apocalypse occurs, infinite dragon army, GG.

Fair warning message: Hope u like scaly dragon dick fagget :)

while you were masturbating to impure waifus

Cherished Child
War
Aspect of Obscurity
Abstract, Human
Infused Weapon, Apotropaic Weapon, Sorcery, Causal Sight, Avatar Manifestation
Fragmented Self, Circumstancial Form
The Struggler

When she stopped using shitty swords and switched using lance instead.

>Saber
Isn't that Mysterious Heroine X? They aren't related at all!

That's Mysterious Heroine Z you numbskull.

SILENCE INFIDEL, ALL VERSIONS OF SABER ARE SABER

Never, but Lancer Artoria didn't have her ageing stopped by Excalibur.

Ew.