It's that time again where we make fun of people, mostly children, who are doing the exact same shit most of us did at their age but we didn't have the internet so our retardation is only known to ourselves, our parents, and our various respective deific beings.
It's time for cringe, except this time, let's take some of these cringy concepts, give them actual critiques, and TRY to improve them.
Just think on it a little. I'm gonna post a couple more from my folder and then I'm gonna let the thread sit for a bit.
Andrew Wright
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Luis Russell
I'm pretty sure this is a parody.
Landon Walker
The saddest part is that I find them difficult to tell apart.
Noah Taylor
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Jacob Carter
Does it count if it's an adult doing cringeworthy things?
Andrew Mitchell
17s the limit because if we go Higher it will become a chris-chan thread
Alexander Reed
>wyvern >four legs and two wings
Chase Moore
>Creepypasta OC
You can make OCs for creepypastas? Is that allowed?
Benjamin Lewis
Well, it sounds Fucking Retarded, so unfortunately... yeah, probably.
Samuel Johnson
It's an unexpected goldmine of cringe. Creepypasta, Sonic, and Homestuck OCs are amazingly bad.
Steven Universe and Adventure Time seem to have more than their fair share of cringe OC characters as well.
Austin Clark
This /b/ now
Shit thread, op. Not relevant to the board at all.
Xavier Phillips
well....the Veeky Forums Discord has OC roast nights each week so maybe tangentially???
Lincoln Martinez
Report me then.
Jayden Morgan
SU has it bad because the show is unashamedly the most gay show on any kids network. I still enjoy it though. Still better than TT:GO or most anything else that's airing
This is how Steven walks in the latest episode. Granted it was a Ronaldo(read: Meg) episode, so the whole thing was Shit.
Adventure Time is really no more worse than the next fandom, it just has more fans and an easy art style.
Jayden Morris
Well, maybe that's not a bad thing. At least we're having fun, which is more than can be said of most Veeky Forums threads.
Cooper Allen
The problem with SU is that all of the social commentary is sort of lost once you consider that the Gems, although feminine, are actually genderless. Their life cycles just don't sync up with any known lifeform on our planet except for maybe single celled organisms.
Eli Roberts
Oh, totally. Somebody post the /pol/ Critic of SU, now that's something worth reading.
Jordan Jackson
I'd like to read this if anyone has it.
Caleb Bailey
Sometimes I feel like it'd be fun to play an rpg where everyone is full of OC Donut Steal Mary Sues. While I think it'd be fun for ironic reasons, I could see it being refreshing going full retard and playing against the grain of what makes a good character.
What system would would be good for this. On one hand you could go Gurps with every source book or maybe something like Mutants and Masterminds if you wanted full autistic crunch behind it, but I feel like something more rules light would be in the spirit. Maybe a reworked MAID wouldn't be a bad place to start.
John Rodriguez
>trolls having siblings >fucking rainbow blood
>letting your mate fuck around yet not getting culled
God damnnit, I don't even WANT to remember how to nitpick that shitty comic, but I do.
Sebastian Sanders
SU is bad because it's bad. There's no better way to put it; it's terrible on every level. We should not do that creative abortion the honor of discussing it. Just post cringe.
Adam Cox
>Daughter of Gordon Ramsay he is a chef but he is a full demon
Brandon Price
Yes, I am getting these from the Bad Roleplayers FB page
Camden Phillips
NOPE. /pol/ review incoming.
Here you go, part 1 of 2.
Isaiah Richardson
Got a version that isn't for ants?
Josiah Garcia
DISHONOR ON YOU. DISHONOR ON YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY.
Austin Kelly
Yes, I was just being considerate of the ants also there's three images now.
Cooper Reed
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Carson Baker
And Ta Da. Enjoy, discuss, and ragepost.
Kayden King
There were so many fan Jeff the Killers that the Creepypasta wiki banned them.
Christian Moore
You're stained forever user.
At least the music was good.
Camden Smith
Go sit in the corner and think about what you've done.
William Hughes
He comes to the wrong conclusions for the right reasons. The show doesn't play into the typical SJW misandrist/psuedo-communist ideal, but it doesn't really play into traditional roles either. It generally assesses each character as an individual rather than their identity. I think almost every character would be essentially identical if switched from male to female and back.
I want to fuck Connie's mom.
Gabriel Anderson
>I am 17 years (in rp but if you want change for the rp we will doing, you can) Man, that's asking for some very weird shit
Jason Smith
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Carson Gomez
Okay, this can't be real, this is some kind of joke. Right?
Levi Ward
Ok. I can work with this. > Lesser villain for WOD, he's a creepy little degenerate who had a horrifying encounter with some monstrous creature. > became a cannibalistic serial killer as a desperate attempt to imitate the power of whatever he encountered. >Basically, emphasize that he's gross and kind of pathetic. > ferocious when he attacks, but fundamentally cowardly. He can be dangerous to other mortals, or people who manages to get the drop on, but most pcs would walk all over him.
Adrian Reyes
Pretty sure this one is satire, but it's too funny not to post.
Zachary Allen
At this point it's hard to tell which is real and which is satire. Coldsteel is satire, if that's news to anyone.
Asher Hughes
Here's the artists gallery, choc full of similarly bad OCs. At lest Mona Lisa is torn apart in the comments section.
There's a certain point with satire or pretending to be retarded where if you spend your day making joke OCs, you're equally as brain damaged as the people who make them for real.
Ryder Bennett
Somehow, the proper spelling and capitalization makes this one even sadder.
William Powell
Monster High is a cringe motherlode.
Liam Russell
In all honesty this seems genuinely harmless. It's just a punky skeleton rocker chick. It's fit right in with some kid show on CN or something
Camden Jenkins
Wow. Her legs are legitimately unnerving.
Ethan Myers
>Secretly glad I did all my autistic roleplaying before the days of social media.
Leo Wilson
Yeah, and the idea of the skeleton girl tripping and falling apart is amusing.
Liam Lopez
Alissa G. must be the most ruthless motherfucker on that list.
Dylan Peterson
A good amount of cringy characters are attempts at D&D edgy OC inserts so its close enough and just let people have a bit of fun
John James
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Julian Phillips
This one isn't so bad. Not quite good, but it's at least thought out a bit more than your typical OC.
Easton Davis
Oh I didn't realize there actually was a cartoon about monster high schoolers. I was giving it some credit for a fairly cute and unique idea. Either way I still wouldn't classify this one with the others in the thread.
Gavin Wood
This
I
I don't even
Just
What
Adam Jones
The template comes from Monster High, a webseries/Netflix series. I agree that the skeleton girl there is mostly inoffensive. The worst Monster High OCs come from real life serial killers, I remember a Zodiac Killer's daughter and a Black Dahlia ?daughter? But didn't save it.
Brody Russell
What the fuck are you holding? Does he plan to bludgeon something to death with a modern art sculpture?
Jaxon Perry
Dammit. And Skulduggery Pleasant was pretty damn charming too... Now that's what I call a Skelebro.
Jason Allen
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Sebastian Bennett
>Character is member of race where your place in society is determined by blood colour >She is usually the highest of nobility, but becomes a complete outcaste when angry.
He's holding this.
Gavin Carter
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Benjamin Ward
It's a sword made from a bunch of angels fused together, if I recall. It's magic, I ain't gotta explain shit in weapon form.
Camden Perez
Real talk 'Tyrantopphirus' sounds like a neat name for a weapon.
The rest of that makes me want to kill myself though.
Michael Fisher
>my parents kicked me out of my house cause I trying to seduce my father >I live in the street and with my body Wait, I've read that doujin!
Jaxson Ward
Okay ignoring literally everything about this being the stupidest thing I've ever seen, is it supposed to look like an orgy got frozen in carbonite, and is the tip of it actually supposed to look like a jizzing dick or is that just coincidence?
Austin Miller
No. Fuck you.
Aaron King
It's from an H game where you fuck monster girls, so that might not be entirely wrong.
Nolan Lee
Considering that the sword is from Monster Quest? Probably, yeah.
Ryan Ramirez
It looks like another variation on having to engage your 'inner darkness' in physical battle, which is a classic. You might disagree on whether or not it's a /good/ classic, but it's a classic. So, broad strokes around that core idea: edgy loner somehow stumbles into a power he wasn't ready for and tries to do good with it. However, his own edginess and power-overload-related brain damage make him get increasingly unstable and dangerous to those around him, despite his good intentions. Ultimately, he makes a last desperate ploy to 'split himself in two' and purge the darkness of his soul from himself by physical violence. Succeed, he becomes a well-adjusted individual in full control of his powers; fail, and the opposite happens.
Tried to retain some of the 'teenage edge' flavor while moving out of cringe territory. Not sure if I succeeded.
Hudson White
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Evan Davis
Oh so it's actually perfectly appropriate for its setting. In that case keep up the good work.
Although Now it just adds the question that someone would seriously make an OC for a fucking monster girl H-game.
Tyler Green
Is she sure she's human and not some sort of Jersey Devil?
Aaron Brooks
Yes. It is supposed to look like an angel orgy dripping semen, because that's what it actually is. It's a weapon made out of angels that were melted tigether while fucking, designed to fight angels and monsters.
It's from Monster Girl Quest, a 2010 porn game.
Dominic Smith
>Is Demon >But is also MTF
That seems like an unnecessary tag on considering that, if there are demons, there is likely an easily explainable way for one such demon to appear as any gender they wish.
Unless, of course, the demon chooses to look MTF, in which case it must be among the trickiest of devils for what better way to disguise one's gender changing abilities than too appear as a transexual.
But I'm pretty sure I put more thought into that detail than the author did to that entire character, so oh well.
Isaac Barnes
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Hudson White
NJ fag here. Not even the Jersey Devil has legs that horrifying
Christopher Sanchez
You know, Devils advocate (forgive the pun) what else would something literally called a disaster be but a bright neon tranny catgirl?
Gabriel Parker
He should only be a cannibal based on fear that unless he disguises himself with the smell of others god will come back and hurt him again. He makes scrolls out of human skin in a childish attempt to summon Satan to protect him. Jokes on him he's not dealing with Abrahamic forces.
Juan Foster
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Ryan Hill
>right conclusions for the wrong reasons That's /pol/ in a nutshell
Jack Bell
I had an OC like this before. She was sort of a testing character, if any other character ideas popped up and I fleshed them out, I'd put them against her.
If any of them had an inkling of a chance for surviving past a second, I considered them too strong.
Dear lord I used to be so autistic.
Hunter Gonzalez
Bad OC creators have this obsession with giving their characters fancy/obscure genders or sexualities, probably because they think it's a decent substitution for personality.
Isaac Johnson
I'd pay for a statue of Slender Lady as a 40s housewife
Grayson Collins
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Robert Butler
This is obviously intentional, but I can't stop laughing
Easton Anderson
>walking through woods >female spook shows up >remind her that being a spook is a man's job. >take her home and put her in the kitchen. Set her to work. >five years later and we're happily married. >best part is I can imagine any other woman's face during sex.
Carson Gomez
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Alexander Hughes
Reminds me of this
Jayden Wilson
>New Battleborn Character
Jaxson Richardson
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Joseph Jones
'I win'
Cooper Diaz
>can turn into a snake lady I don't remember that bit.
Easton King
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Kayden Russell
It's not an OC, it's the main character being presented in the style of one.