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Lasto threado: Sister threa/d/:

Please delete this thread, as there was another new thread up already: .

Please keep such things in mind in the future and check before making new threads.

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Making a magic weapon cyoa right now.

Yours has two IP's. This one has three. Yours is already spammed with old cyoas causing less activity in the future.
Please keep such things in mind in the future :)

I like this thread better too desu, it was linked properly and everything

It's not mine, I was just commenting. This is missing pastebin, and adds a link to /d/; but in any case, I don't see the point of moving the goalposts.

OP of this thread doubleposted a thread. Excuses are irrelevant.

It was already too late to delete the thread when you started this so it's irrelevant. We're gonna have both either way, just like we always do.

It's never to late for someone to recognize they're wrong. Even if they can't undo what they did, they can avoid it in the future.

I haven't done anything wrong though. You're really autistic you know that? Par for the course I suppose but still. You should try to control it.

That only applies to making bad decisions, not getting timing wrong.

It's not really a matter of timing, just check before making a new thread. Just like checking to see if someone is walking in front of you before walking into them. It's basic human competence, not rocket science.

That is a matter of timing. If you need to check to not walk into someone invisible, you'll need to time it.

Threads are readily visible, you just have to bother to look.

At the precise moment you're making a thread. Don't make this out like it was the guy who made the thread 30 minutes later out of spite, this was less than 5 minutes here. Or something, I don't remember exactly.

Yeah, look before making a thread. And it's not like OP missed the other thread by 10 seconds, they missed it by about 5 minutes. The other OP even bothered to call it out in the old thread well in advance of this one being made.

A low-effort check would give plenty of time to avoid double posting.

>look before making a thread
>make a thread
>get an autist complaining you didn't look

Look man, I get you're angry but please, control yourself. No one benefits from you shitting up the place. It's embarrassing to look at.

>look before making a thread
>create a duplicate thread 5 minutes after another thread already exists
>wonder why people thought you didn't check
If you did check, you fucked it up lol.

Wasn't me.

Just because you're posting on your phone, too, doesn't mean it's not you.

Well no. But the fact that I didn't make the thread does. I wouldn't have made the OP like this one, I'd either include the pastebin or make it a completely sparse throg copy to piss autistics off.

Even if that were true, it still doesn't change the fundamental criticism, which is of the action and not really dependent on who is being addressed.

As a side note, I probably won't be responding anymore for various reasons. Please try not to gloat too hard in my absence.

Uh. Okay?

I still don't think your criticisms were aimed at actions or decisions in general. But don't feel like you need to discuss it with me if you don't want to.

OC inbound. Might make a second page if you guys want.

>Spear
>Moonstone
>Gender: Male
>Handle of Telekinetic Recall
>Affectionate
>Warrior
>Motivational
>Altruistic
>Chivalrous

Really successful thread you got here, fucking moron.

>Shit up a thread with whining
>Bump it
>Whine about it some more for having whining in it
Strange behavior on your part.

Pretty cool, please make a second page! Only quibble I would have with it is that the weapon damages seem really low if an ordinary human is 1k hit points.

>Shortsword
>Bloodstone & Gartin
>Political Ideology
>Cursed Handle
>Authoritarian, Cynical, Suave, Posh, Social.

Forgive him he must be a newbie

Shit thread, kill yourself.

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I made a revised version as well as a second page! Was in the other thread.

I recommend photoshop to you or GIMP

see if you want to know what might be in store for a page 3.

I learned paint.net already. How are Gimp or photoshop superior? (Besides having decent text editing I presume.)

I CALL UPON THEE, MIGHTY VEVO!

GRANT ME THE POWERS OF:

>Aux Raus - This is How This Works
>Pearl Jam - Do The Evolution
>Vitalic - Stamina

FOR NOW SHALL I PEEL BACK THE MYSTERY OF DEATH AND BRING THE KNOWLEDGE OF WHAT COMES NEXT TO THE WORLD

Pokemon Personified Plus+ when?

Better image editing, easy to use, allows you to create better format and appearance, better text editing, etc.

Never ever.

Italics in truth is probably doing what they did when they made Order and working hard on it.

>don't know how to sage
>can't take criticism
Somehow they're not the one triggering my newfriend proximity alert.

You do realize that it takes italics about 6-8 months to release an cyoa right?

Me and Alice are going to watch tv now

Reminder that we're waiting on not one but TWO galleries!

As I blind-picked before, so too shall I now:

>Pussession
>N-Nyani?!
>Now You're Not Dumb, But You Can't Understand-

CAT.

Thanks. Already found and replied in the other thread .

Look forward to page 3. Great job on the CYOA btw, enough info/pics to get the imagination going, but not so wordy or convoluted as to tempt a preemptive tl;dr.

Blind pick:
>M. Biggens: The Smallest Man
>Biggest Sister
>Halo? It's me you're looking for?

I like big things. (was tempted by the Pacific Rim Megami Tensei, but I skipped it)

> Biggest Sister.
> May I axe you something.
> Halo? Is it me you're looking for?

-Oh, you Beautiful Doll
-Dadzuzu
-Halo? Is it me you're looking for?

It takes Italics 1-2 months to make a cyoa.

What happened to that touhou cyoa that was a wip.

Spear
Bloodstone
Political ideology
Handle of telekinetic recall

Poet
Orator
Utterly devoted
Warrior
Motivational

Name: Gae Assail

Rap God
KernKraft
Stamina

>Woannah
- Ivory Bloodstone Mace
- 85 dmg
- 50% armor ignored
- damage dealt is 21% harder to heal
- gain 5% of damage dealt as health
- +40% dmg to traitors
- Handle of Telekinetic Recall
- Traits: Energetic, Submissive, Street-smart, Utterly Devoted, Motivational
- Water/Serpent

>4 hits to kill a regular human with a two handed sword

wut

>solemate
So.. we'll be making shoes together? not very romantic, that.

Less If you play your cards right. But I mean, it would be most accurate to have it as a one or 2 hit kill, but that wouldn't be fun.

Ava. Kill her with reactive poison made when two types of lube combine. I am willing to die to stop her killing spree, but it's not necessary.

Are the weapons waifus too?

>weapons do magical HP damage
>it's not even some mmo-world, it's real world turned retarded
Sorry, my suspension of disbelief gets shattered. I understand all those HP are for the sake of simplicity but Id' rather have vague descriptions"deals a lot of damage" than some min-maxing with "somehow you need to stab an average person wherever this many times for them to die".

It's up to the player to decide what world it takes place in, really. The focus is the weapon, so he can't really world build for you. Think of it as a supplement to another cyoa, I guess?

That died like a year ago, dude.

Whatever happened to Italics? What was going to be in Pokemon Personified Plus+? Did they say anything before going kill?

Who cares about that? Check out those trips!

Be more patient user.

The weapons ARE the waifus. You weren't looking at the flesh women this whole time, were you?

>Trip 3's = 9
>Dub 9
What does it mean?

Italics is kill

Don't forget the other one! We need to know what got in!

Also, picking:
Pacific Rim Megami Tensai
May I Axe You Something?
Dadzuzu

Quick update, just because I know I'd want one in your shoes. Fox and N-Nyani?! have been prettied up, and Pussession and Black, White, and Red All Over are complete

weapon type spear
metal canter
persecution traitors
handle cursed handle
personality posh, suave, smart alec, urban and joker

element fire

Where are her chestnuts?

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to it.

Also, nice quints.

>remember that no matter how much you love her, your imouto will never have a single friend

>not keeping your imouto for yourself

>not giving your imouto a chance to grow as a person and live a more healthy and successful life that you'll ever lead

jesse

I'm a sucker for lullabies

She rides a flying broom. She's not flat, she's aerodynamic!

>implying your imouto needs anyone else
>implying anyone is even capable of caring for her and loving her more than her onii-chan

Fuck it, I'll bite.

>Spear (gotta have that reach)
>Bloodstone & Gartin (best combo)
>Political Ideology (Fascists can suck my spear tip, pun intended)
>Handle of Telekinetic Recall (being able to recall my weapon after throwing it for massive damage is THE BEST.)
>Affectionate, Altruistic, Utterly Devoted, Motivational, Social (gonna have me the stabbiest cheerleader in the land)

Forgot the second page, as well as to express my desire for a third. Keep it up, user!

>Element: Air (gimme that move speed, gurl)
>Familiar: Hawk (IS BIRB)

>12 years younger
>Cousin
>Private Both times
>Friendly and Lustful
>Genki, Tomboy, Kind, Lewd, Clingy, Popular, Kind, Mature, Submissive, Nurturing
>Sleeping, Bathing, Kissing, Nibbling, Handholding, Hugging
>Indoors, Theatres, Theme Park
>Shorter
>Gifted
>Cute
>Thick ( Bigger than gifted, that's a rule)
>Scrawny
>Fair
>Unladylike
>To be with you
>Catfight, Nympho, Bullying, Sickly
>Frilly
>Plump Lips, Good Smile

Age: 10+ Years
Blood Relations: Real Sister
Title: Onii-chan
Relationship: Lustful and Hateful
Personality Trait: Territorial, Popular, Lewd, Genius, Selfish, Mature
Physical Habits: Kissing, Insult, Stalking
Hangout: Restaurant, Anywhere, The Theaters
Height: Shorter
Breasts: Flat
Facial Aspect: Sexy
Butts+Hips: Thick
Physique: Normal
Skintone: Pale
Clothing: Unorthodox
Desire: To Fuck You Silly
Diabilities: Yandere & Yandere*
Panties: Lingerie
Mundane Details: Plump Lips
Bizarre Details: Twins

I'm going to impregnate both my imoutos.

and then another 1-2 months after he's said he'll release it to actually finish it, so like 2-4 months total.

He promised to release Pokemon Personified Plus+ within this month. Its also Spring Break month.

But knowing italics fanboys, 1 month is equivalent to a day to them.

Oh, and I forgot to name my weapon! Dang, I dropped the ball on this one. Let's call her Lucrezia.

>Write description for a character
>Huh, this is a decent size. I think I'll stop here
>479 words
Why do I do these things? I'm only making twelve characters, but fuck.

I think you used "derelict" when you meant "delinquent".
That fits the context whereas derelict does not.

Good, my advice was heeded. Now you have been blessed by quints; may this boon be passed onto your gallery.

>Downside: difficult to fuck a sword
>Upside: not *impossible* to fuck a sword

Shortsword
60ยจ% Iron, 60% Gartin
Uh... traitors, I guess? How come "heathens" and "heretics" are both options, even though they're basically synonyms, yet "wicked/cruel/evil" isn't? Or anything.
Hadndle of Levitation
Joker, Affectionate, Smart Alec, Happy-go-lucky, Utterly Devoted
"Amethyst" is her name.

>panties section

Who made this? I love it!

>Longsword
>Silver
>Heathens
>Cursed Handle
>Chivalrous, Motivational, Warrior.

Time to go witch-hunting I suppose

>Age Difference: 1-3 years
>Blood Relation: Family Friend (a bit of a cop-out, but I'm not into incest)
>Title: First Name (I mean, we aren't related at all)
>Relationship: Protective, Friendly, Lustful
>Personality Traits: Tomboy, Lewd, Genius, Mature, Kind, Nurturing
>Physical Habits: Sleeping, Hugging, Kissing, Teasing
>Hang Outs: The Theaters, Outdoors, Indoors
>Height: Shorter
>Breasts: Gifted
>Facial Aspect: Cute
>Butt/Hips: Thick (always trust a man who likes big butts, for he cannot lie)
>Physique: Normal
>Skin Tone: Fair
>Clothes: Unladylike (wears pajama pants to public places, etc.)
>Desire: To Be With Me
>Disabilities/Drawbacks: Nympho, Messy, Onee
>Panties: none
>Mundane Details: Tattoo, Piercing (tongue), Plump Lips, Good Smile

You need to read things by Highlander and Italics. Over 100+ characters for 1 cyoa.

This man has the right attitude.

How do I make a CYOA that gets played a lot? All of the ones I've made so far were popular for the first two times they were posted but then stopped being replied to afterwards

You can't because that's the nature of this thread's userbase.

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Look at all the ones that ran away with things. The genie galleries, power armor, conduit, jumpchain, domain master, monster hunter.
All of them had at least one if not more of the above.