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Useless feedback but "the human/hunter world" in this part of the cyoa ruins this otherwise great cyoa, or at least makes it a lot more shit.

Before that part it seemed the vampire world co-existed with our world, but now it seems all these worlds exist in a reality of their own independent from our Earth.

Can I please get a link to interactive Magical Realm CYOA? I have no idea why it's not in the pastebin.

>Before that part it seemed the vampire world co-existed with our world, but now it seems all these worlds exist in a reality of their own independent from our Earth.
I'm pretty sure it's all in a parallel dimension(s) or whatever that is(/are) connected to Earth in places.

>it seemed the vampire world co-existed with our world
But it does, they are connected and people can go back and forth. Other relams are mostly seperate it seems, but the vampire country is not even if it is actually in a different realty.

Sock somehow convinced me to fuck a clown. I don't know how that crazy bastard did it, but damn if I don't want it

Let me get these out of the way:

>Necromancer update when?
>SDA with letters reversed and a smug anime girl
>If I can't be a dragon in a CYOA then it's shit
>Pokemon Personified Factorial Factorial when?
>cuckoldry
>Why the CYOA I want still isn't made lol
>Why don't you make it yourself lol
>What CYOA would be a good VN/book/movie/anime/sumerian clay tablet
>Conduit was the best thing ever
>WIPs
>I can't keep making my CYOA because I'm a lazy cunt
>Post CYOA ideas that will never come into reality
>Name your favourite author
>Art galleries
>angel is cute
>angel is disgusting
>The Culling
>make more waifushit
>make less waifushit
>comfy meme

/thread

You forgot mind control, memory death, and specific whining pretending to be objective criticism.

Good list, though. A+ would pasta

>Necromancer update when?
B-BAKANA!

He captured my secret technique!..

When was the last time anyone even talked about Monster Hunter or the Culling?

A month ago.

Now

>the Culling
What's that?

>Left out fetishshit entirely
Your CYOA-fu is weak.

Next you'll say "but he mentioned cuckoldry".

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Thank you for this.
Fuck I was gonna ask if you could add the dragon guy but you already did. You know your stuff!

But he mentioned cuckoldry.

>Spoiler
なに!?

FULCRUUUUUUUUUUM

Need more cowgirls!

You forgot the people arguing about flat tits vs cow tits.

Vyora Arfaris

Class
>Sorceress
Attributes
>Str +++
>Def +++++
>Agi ++++ (+++)
>Int ++++++++++ (+++)
>Ski ++++
Blessing
>+1 Skill Point

Skills
Magical
>Catalysts
>Finesse
>Arcane
>Combine
>Barriers
Spiritual
>One With Nature
>Poisons
>Bloodlust
>Bindings
>Soul Spirit
Ethereal
>Indomitable
>Recall
>Pocketing
>Blessed
>Unleash
>Healing
>Wings

Monsters
>Arachnid 20
>Wolf 40
>Cerberus 70

Persona
>Age 5 (22yo)
>Beauty 10
Resources
>Library 20
>Alchemy 30
>Training 35
>Scavenging 40
>Map 45
>Bounty 50
>Low 70

Adventure with group more than alone. I can use Healing, Barriers, and Bindings to help the party. For fighting I mostly spam arcane bolt type stuff from the air. I can also make potions at the alchemy to help party out or to sell and trade.

DFC > DCT

Is this a continuation of last thread's argument about human cows?

I'm being peer pressured to repost my build.
My god forgive my autism.

Class: Noble
Bless: +1 INT/+2 SPD

Physical:
Toughness (+1 DEF)

Magical:
Catalysts (+1 SKL)
Arcane (+1 INT)
Detect Magic

Spiritual:
One With Nature (+1 DEF)/Poison (+1 DEF)
Monster Within/Bindings (+1 INT)
Killer Instinct

Weaponry:
Marksmanship (+1 SPD)
Ancient Weapon (+1 SKL)/Enchantment (+1 INT)
All-Seeing Eyes/Ancient Armor (+1 DEF)
Skull Weaponry

Ethereal:
Recall (+1 INT)/Pocketing (+1 SPD)
Unleash (+1 SKL)

Stats:
STR: 1
DEF: 6
SPD: 7
INT: 7
SKL: 7

Hunting License:
Underground Caves (Threat 3/+45 T)
Underground Desert (Threat 4/+60 T)

Persona:
[090 T]Visitor

Resources:
[050 T]Forge/Library/Alchemy/Market
[035 T]Healing/Training/Scavenging
[020 T]Campsite/Map/Teleport
[015 T]Bar

Write up to follow.

My first order of business is to trace out the town's sewer system/underground cave network and set up a campsite somewhere comfortable preferably near a fresh water source, the first season will be spent mapping out the entirety of the sewer system, finding out where the drain pipes start and end, killing level 3 threat and lower monsters with my arcane enchanted gun and getting trained and healed when necessary.

Once I have established a safe perimeter and camp, its time to set up my piss bomb making workshop. Buy the necessary equipment from the alchemy shop and large cauldrons from the market. Reagents remain the same, nitric acid/aqua fortis, mercury/quicksilver. ethanol/rectified spirits from the bar and aluminum shavings and get to work.

My daily routine will probably be to place the large cauldrons underneath the drain pipes from men washroom urinals, let the cauldrons collect the piss as I go about hunting to meet my quota, at around the evening when the cauldrons are full, start boiling the piss down, study at the library researching ways to extract and store monster souls in arcane binding traps and do a little hunting on the side, at night filter the boiling piss through a hopper lined with fine linen cloth, let the filtered piss cool and slowly pour in nitric acid, urea nitrate will precipitate out as yellowish/whitish crystals because its not very soluble in water solutions wash the crystals with cold water and filter again, collecting and storing the crystals away in my pock dimension. Once every week I make a trip to the town to buy more reagents and supplies.

Continued.

A couple a seasons in, start making mercury fulminate to act as my explosive primer, dissolve mercury in nitric acid and slowly pour in ethanol, do this in the open air with a lot of ventilation if possible but the poison skill would mitigate a lot of the harmful effects of the toxic fumes, let the reaction cool down and wash with water, mercury fulminate will precipitate out as pinkish crystals, filter, extract and store wet in water.

In the season leading up to the culling is when I start manufacturing my bombs, the visitor perk is going to be extremely useful in this regard, I can pop into a public library, access the internet and memorize the public domain and free publications on improvised explosive devises and explosively formed penetrators, thanks to recall and relatively good int I should be able to retain and write down all the information with constant back and forth trips.

Head to the blacksmith and use whatever tributes I have collected to commission containers, bowls and brass caps to be made. The basic pipe bomb will be filled with a 4:1 mixture of urea nitrate to aluminum shavings, sealed with candle/bee wax with a brass percussion cap filled with mercury fulminate affixed inside each bomb through a narrow tube with a spring loaded striker pin held in place by a firing pin needled above the primer. I can rig up trip wire landmines or throw them like grenades or set them off manually with my gun.

EFP traps are just going to be metal drums filled with the urea nitrate and aluminum explosive mixture packed in and sealed with a inverted copper bowl with the same mercury fulminate primer and detonating mechanism.

Hopefully by the time the culling has started I'd have a few monster souls captured alongside a wurm soul for digging out tunnels and defensive perimeters and enough explosives to last until the culling is finished.

Warrior
+3 stat points (STR)

STR 11 (16)
DEF 4 (9)
AGI 4 (9)
INT 2
SKI 3

Physical:
T1 Toughness (DEF+1), Martial Arts (SKI+1)
T2 Flurry (AGI+1), Athletics (AGI+1)
T3 Enhanced (STR+1)
T4 OVERDRIVE, IRON MASS

Magical: T1 Finesse (INT+1), T2 Psionic, T3 Blink, T4 ZA WARUDO
Spiritual: T1 Bloodlust (STR+1)
Weaponry: T1 Blunt Arms (STR+1)
Ethereal: T1 Indomitable (STR+1)

YOU CAN'T DODGE 16 STRENGTH IF THE TIME HAS STOPPED, JOTARO!

>tfw no points for STANDO POWAH

Nah I just like the CYOA

>sex
>breeding
>calf
>asia
>pale
>brown
>bob
>skittish & submissive
>foreclosure
>with me
>nudie cow
>cowbell collar
>all natural
>no drugs
>ear tag
>by hand
>spanking, humiliation & rape
>affection, outings & sex

Shame, we should continue that argument, it went good places.

>Money
>Whoring
>Yearling
>North America
>Pale
>Black hair
>Braids
>Skittish, ditzy
>Free will
What's better than her WANTING this??
>The barn
>Cow seifuku
>Cowbell collar
>Small dose
>Cow ears
>None
>Milking by hand
>Spanking, reprimand, humiliation
>Affection, praise, sex

Dick = Diamonds. You're real cool author!

I've thrown a few graphical possibilities here. I'm leaning towards lighter boxes (because I think it helps a lot) and sticking with the same font (because the amount of text / word length I used were designed around it & it would require rewrites / not fill the space properly if changes).

Thoughts?

My only thought is that the AI character is disgusting, and it's the reason I'm not interested in this CYOA.

I was looking more for graphical feedback. Still, I'm sorry you don't like it.

I'd make box borders 1 pixel bigger, I think. They kinda blend with the grey background on my monitor.

Definitely not felna. Maybe if the inner text was light too but that currently looks horrible. Then again I'm on mobile rn

That's actually expected. The boxes have no borders. They just have a glow-effect on them, which should be blending. It's nothing specific to your monitor.

I think using the usual font with the thicker lines in places helps with the readability. The other font is ok for headings or whatever (like in the Tundian intro box). Also I think not having the stroke (as it is in the aforementioned Tundian intro) is a bit better on the eyes.

Ok. Now go away.

Ah, so that's why they look so weird. I guess I just prefer sharp borders instead of gradients in general.

Fun

Farming
Milking

Yearling

Europe

Pale

Red

Braids

Submissive
Loving

Free Will

With You

Bikini Combo

High Heels

Large Dose

By Hand

Restraints
Spanking
Chores

Affection
Sex
Outings

By "usual" font, you mean the round one I normally use?

Much more legible, good job. Not really a fan of your font choices but I'm not picky about other people's CYOAs unless you want me to be.

Yes.

the one in the tundu text

It's in the first two intro boxes, too. Plus in Heat Immunity.

I'm just not much of one for font-searching and only have so many on my computer. If you have any suggestions, I'm all ears.

That's what I figured. This is what I get for trying to mix things up.

I always suggest basic fonts for body text cause they allow for legibility at decent font sizes. It's the standard for most mediums for a reason, but that's basically it. Essentially you could fit a lot more on the page just by using 10-12 point Helvetica or something similar. On the flip side, if you're not up for writing more, it just means you can downsize everything to smaller image dimensions.

That isn't to say that the font you're using is impossible to read, it's just slightly distracting on text that shouldn't be distracting.

TL;DR it's fine now since it can be read relatively fine, but if you want to be anal about design choices then you might wanna go with different font choices.

>if you want to do anal

>This is what I get for trying to mix things up.
Mixing things up is fine. If you figure out another easily readable font, you could try using that instead of the usual.

But my computer only has so many & when I look for more online, I only seem to find extravagant ones...

Do you have Arial?

No one will care if you use it. That's its purpose.

Have you tried Silom or Slicker? Those are two that I'd think would suit a futuristic theme well.

Fucking disgusting serial killer shit made by a total creep.

Can you add "screaming about one option in a CYOA"?

It's one thing not to like something, it's another to say I DON'T LIKE IT AND WON'T PLAY IT over and over again trying to guilt someone into doing something for you.

At least be honest about being a whiny bitch and wanting to force things to fit your tastes.

I really have no idea how people have issues reading these simple fonts.

Hi, tumblr.

>over and over again
That's my first time saying that, but I agree with anons in the previous thread. I don't want to force the author to do anything for me like an entitled cunt you obviously think I am, and I loved other CYOAs by the same author, but if a lot of people don't like something it's a food for thought, not an excuse to be overly defensive. It doesn't mean they're right or you need to change everything to cater to their tastes, just a signal to maybe think about the reason they don't like it. And the disgust for the AI character, in my opinion, is completely warranted.

You forgot
>Why is this thread AGP af?

Here's the original version of that page for comparison.

Speaking of, I posted this far too late for comfort:
Anyway.

It includes literally killing women for meat and EATING them! That's incredibly fucked up. There's absolutely nothing normal about including something like that.

Entitlement. The fonts aren't *that* bad but user will get mad because he knows it works.
You know how you're not supposed to give in when a kid throws a tantrum? Authors never learned that.

Oh for fucking hell Angel haven't you gotten enough attention by now? Can anyone roleplay raping her or something so we can get rid of her for a day or two?

You're forgetting the one guy who always posts Traveller at some point even though it only ever gets one reply every three threads.

That guy is me.

>People endlessly obsess over and shitpost about someone even when they're not in the thread
>Implying they're the attention whore
m8..

Angel evokes a weird feeling in me. Something between pity, extreme annoyance, the desire to hug her, and then ban her from 4chin forever so she could lead a better life.

Number Four; One those white haired bitches on the throne, maybe even the one in the middle.

>Bride
Tertia, Tertia, and Tertia.
I'm not really in to harems, I just /really/ like matching sets.
And they are adorable...

>Symbol of Office
The Book.
I like having the Rule Book. It should cut down on inter-species friction if I actually have control over vampire's hunting rights.

>Silver Ichor
It really does taste terrible...
Well, I'll be a Mirror. More specifically, I'll look exactly like the Tertias.
I /REALLY/ like matching sets.

>Estate
The High Tower.
I love books, and I love to hate heights. This should be fun.

>Vampire Country
Bloodsprings
A good early source of blood. We won't starve while we set up.

Bloodfruit
Nicer agriculture. I think we could water the seeds with blood springs as well.

Bats
You can't stop here. This is bat country.

Lost
What kind of ruler would I be if I abandoned my people?

>Borders
Werewolves
Where wolves? Here wolves, there wolves, everywhere a woof woof.
But seriously, they seem like alright neighbors. Big bros to their pasty nerd siblings of the night. Also, animal blood to go with our Blood Fruit and Blood Water.

Fairies
The Tertias and I agree, Titania is not long for this world. I wonder what the new Fey Lord will be like?
Either way, I'd like to look into splicing fey plants with our Blood Fruit, just to see what happens.

Pale Ones
Goes well with the Lost. Territorial expansion, while saving what relatively sane people we can find, and putting down the ones that are too far gone.
These lands will see red once more.

This is going to be both work, and fun.

I think pretty much everyone here would be better off if Veeky Forums didn't exist.

Veeky Forums helped me find out that Dominions 4 has the greatest TBS multiplayer in history, so there are some bright spots.

It's ok, I like you. Even though I only post a build for it once every twelve threads.

>Warrior
>Blessing: Stat points (3 AGI)
>Stats
Strength: 8
Defence: 9 (14 with Iron Mass)
Agility: 5
Intelligence: 1
Skill: 3
>Physical
Toughness
Willpower
Enhanced
Sixth Sense
Iron Mass
>Magical
>Spiritual
One with Nature
Poisons
Monster Within
Hybrid
>Weaponry
Blunt Arms
Stamina
Ancient Weapon (Warhammer)
Ancient Armor
>Elemental
Primal Power
Affinity: Water
Infusion
>Etherial
Indomitable
Blessed

>Bounties
Tiger
Behemoth
Dragon

>Vacation: Winter

>Resources
Forge
Market
Healing
Training
Scavenging
Campsite
Map
Teleport
Club
Low class accommodation

15 left over, just in case.

DARE YOU FACE... THE WALL?

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>when you finally get the look of your image juuust right

I know nobody else cares but this makes me feel good

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Sex
Milking/Breeding
Yearling
Europe
Tan
Black
Straight
Bratty, Skittish
Kidnap
The basement
Lewd Bikini
Cowbell collar, high heels, ball gag, cowboy hat
Small dose
Septum Piercing, Ear Tag, Nipple Piercing, Branding
By hand
Whipping, Rape,. Spanking
Rest, Sex, Food

I just think the cannibalism thing is to far. That's all.

Hugs all around!!!

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>Gadgets
>lawyer
>Pornstars

ezmode

I'd post more builds myself, but my autism demands that I wait until the newest update is out.

Plus, I've been really busy lately and have like half a dozen builds finished but without the companion cards.

Holy shit, I remember this one. Do you realize that when this came out, "girlfriend options" were still considered never-seriously-chosen trap options in CYOAs and the idea of having more than one was seen as ridiculous?

I think this might actually be one of the very first to even entertain the idea of multiple waifus, and even it seems to treat it as more of a joke choice.

And the GitS movie adaptation was good.

Of course cannibalism is fucked up you collosal mong. No one denies that.
Now go away for a few days. Please. The last two threads were about you. You've had enough attention.

I didn't think it was terrible.

'hate Hate HATE' edition

Motivation: Hate
Income: Milking, Meat
Age: Yearling
Origin: Africa
Skin Color: Black
Hair Color: Black
Hair Style: Straight
Personality: Bratty, Submissive
Acquisition: Foreclosure
Living Quarters: The Barn
Clothes: Nudie Cow
Accessories: Ball Gag
Breast Hormones: All Natural
Transformative Drugs: Udder. Extra Breasts, Bull Cock x2
Surgery: Cut Tendons
Milking Technique: By Machine
Punishments: Whipping, Isolation
Rewards: Food, Drugs

Nope, but I DO remember someone making this exact post last time the thing was posted.
Crazy how that works huh?

(Imagine I posted a smug girl. I need to start saving those)

>Class
Hunter

>Blessing
20 Tribute Points

>Skills (20)
Physical- Tempered, Willpower, Enhanced, Toughness, Flurry, Sixth Sense, Martial Arts, Atheltics (12)
Spiritual- One with Nature, Monster Within, Fleet-Footed, Bloodlust, Binding, Killer Instinct, Poisons (5)
Weaponry- Bladed Arms, Ancient Weapon, Stamina, Marksmanship (1)
Ethereal- Pocketing (0)

>Licenses
Ancient Caves (50)
Sunken Ruins (50)

>Resources (120)
Forge, Library, Alchemy, Market (80)
Healing, Scavenging, Bar, Hot Springs, Bounty (60)
Middle Accommodation (25)
Strange Servant, with Appearance, Personality,
and Knowledge upgrades (0)

Strength- 4
Defense- 5
Agility- 9
Intelligence- 2
Skill- 6

Much as I hate to forgo utility magic, I don't really see room for it in my build. The low intelligence stat kind of bugs me, but since it's a measurement of logic and magical power, I'll put it down to me having bad common sense and almost no magical skill.

I figure having my Strange Waifu will give me a huge bonus in learning to deal with magic. Additionally, I took extra tribute points to live a life of comfort when I'm not hunting. I guess the final thing to note is that I took my licenses where I did because those places sound the coolest to explore.

4plebs doesn't seem to agree with you. Might want to get your brain checked, I wouldn't fool around with memory problems.

Don't forget the second page.

The Now, Watcher (5 free traits, one free companion, low-tech understanding, Human)

>Skills, Perks, and Traits (3 + 5 from Watcher + 1 from True Travellers)
Natural Physique
Adaptibility
Silver Tongue
Critical
Self-Aware
Emotional Sense
Tech Skill Low-->High
Lucky

>Free Items
Traveller's Leathers w/upgrade, Yuta Bracer w/upgrade and Partner Bracer, Foxfire, Pegs, Basic Survival Kit, Basic Bag, ID Card

>Items (2000 credits)
Tartan Cloak (1950), Shattered Yith Conscious (1450), Multiversal Timekeeper (1400), Jetpack w/Rocket Boot variant (1200), Enhanced Occulatus (1080), InvisYUT Cloak (680)

>Drawbacks
Wanting Desire (+250), Decadent (+200), Offworld Obligations (+400), Test Subject x2 (+200)

>More Items (1730)
Low Level ET Teleport (1130), Healing Chip (880), Whale Skin Marks (780), Standard Breather (760), Glepnir Chain (750), M911-Modded (700)
Maori Tattoos (600), Magnetic Boots (400), Alchemy Set (100), Physical Restructuring (0)

>Faction
The True Travelers

>Covenant
Temple of the Wild Gods (Foxfire Boon + Favor)

>Allies (4+1 for Watcher background)
Lethice, 1440, True Traveller, Reforged demoness
Yarihei Neinta, 988, True Traveller, Ancient Fox God
Saint Havel, ???, True Traveller, Juggernaut
Kuro Neinta, ???, True Traveller, Yarihei's Cat
Zachariah Markarov, 912, Void Hunter, Void Walker

Considering replacing Zachariah with Raziel Hythloday. Can't decide.

>District
Ospherous Reserve

>Hubworld
Jagbel – Great Terrible Truths, World Exploration Mission

>Can anyone roleplay raping her

...I volunteer as tribute?

>Chef
>Mansion
>Lawyer

I can just chill from now on, even if I go 100% NEET mode, I still get food & shelter. Hopefully it wont come to that so I can get some cool stuff by looting/insurance fraud/regular fraud/grand fraud/freudian fraud.

Wanting Desire and Decadent mean I'm always looking for an easy lay. Can't even say no to the opportunity.

Offworld Obligations is due to my inability to leave my former timeline alone. I can't bring myself to give up who I was, resulting in constant problems for my former home. Maybe room for an amnesia subplot, or even a homecoming plot. Giving up the life of a Traveller to settle down as a mundane man. Or take a sabbatical every couple hundred years to torture myself by reliving my own life.

My two bouts as Test Subject have resulted in "mood ring" style irises that always telegraph my emotions, which is a blessing and curse for someone with a Silver Tongue, and similarly technicolor blood that seems to correlate with whatever I've last drank.

My items are designed for intrinsic defense, incredibly high mobility, above average human capability, and adaptability. I even used Physical Restructuring to boost up my normal
looks and physical fitness, with the added bonus of my Natural Physique trait to build on and maintain this head start.

Eh, Veeky Forums's the only place I can talk about my prolicivities.

Gif related.

Boat, House, Pornstarts. Can't say no to a free house. Can't say no to a boat. Can't say no to pornstarts at my beck and call. Although, it will make me quite sad knowing they're just in it for the money, but aren't we all?