Jumpchain CYOA Thread #1542: Internet Police Edition

So I've chosen to go with Cute Zergling being a Meatball + Fiber Body for maximum spook potential. Going to try to become the Pillar of Peace. Any advice?

>shitposter antagonizes man who accepts, admits, and apologizes for being wrong

Limit the amount of traumatic takedowns within public perception, like crumpling people into flesh balls until they're in custody and such.

>for example, Amnesia in Negima made sense, but here it really doesn't
Speaking of, would you consider adding a few more drawbacks to Negima? It's just annoying that you can't take max drawbacks without being both amnesiac and powerless because that effectively means you're just a normal person.

i have conquered the world of Warhammer fantasy in its entirety, next step is to get my populace soul stones so that their safe from the predations of local spirits when they travel with me

Speaking of DI, Jumpers, have you ever did a large ritual to empower yourself? Could you detail what did you do? Was there any special external conditions (planets aligning, eclipse), places or sacrifices needed for the ritual to succeed?

Wait Dies Irae is getting translated? Holy fuck this is a nice surprise. The Japanese is way beyond my level.

Befriend deku and allmight.

It's on Steam right now. First Chapter is free.

One route's free on Steam, the other 2 packs that hold specific routes are like 17 bucks each
or you can just download the trial version and apply the appropraite bypass patches

It 'got' translated actually, the translation just came out a few days ago. I think it's already on Steam.

We landed in Worm a few weeks ago. The new powers are pretty nice, but some of these villains we're running into on the streets are really dangerous. I've never read or heard of this universe before so maybe that's just the way things are here. It's like a way more intense version of Batman, but a ton of people have superpowers and major developmental issues.

So, Batman, basically. Rim shot.

>Marceline: "Hey, Yoro, you might want to look at this."
Hmm...?
>M: "Been going through that free copy of the Canon material we all got..."
Yeah?
>M: "Well, I mean, just read this part."
Leviathan? That doesn't sound good. Brockton Bay is just across the border too, isn't it?
>M: "Mmhmm."
... You can't be serious.
>M: "Oh, it gets worse."
YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS!?!
>M: "Wait until you get to Jack Slash."
Who?!
>M: "The bookmark. Flip to that."
....
>M: "Wow. I've never seen someone rip a tablet in half before."

Excuse me for a little bit Board. Something has just come up.
Drawback Added: You Needed Worthy Opponents.

the thing is, you're both at least half right. So be cool. Everyone Speaking of DI, Jumpers, have you ever did a large ritual to empower yourself?

nope. Those things are usually pretty evil,I did pack a micro-verse battery with paragon resource generators and machines that turn electricity into mantra that incorporated into my cyborg-HinduGod body.

Could you detail what did you do? Was there any special external conditions (planets aligning, eclipse), places or sacrifices needed for the ritual to succeed?

Sacrifices? That's the kind of crap were trying to avoid!

Cool.

Elaborated upon, will update momentarily.

No, I actually do that intentionally. Drawbacks are (or at least were) supposed to truly be difficult. I don't design for people to be able to just take a bunch of minor annoyances and end up with 1600 CP: in my opinion, if you want max CP, you should be having to spend serious time planning or taking major risks. In this case, I might end up changing things just so you don't end up with the limitation, but even then I'm unsure; as it stands you're basically paying 300 CP and working injump to get what's inarguably the best companion in the setting.

Yes, and... not sure, but probably yeah, otherwise it would just be too easy. At the least it definitely stops all the "if you lose it it turns up in your pocket in 24 hours" stuff, or even the Warehouse key would magically reappear.

Possibly, but probably not; see above for my rationale. That particular combination is harder than most, but is also pretty thematic with the jump.

Didn't the Zergling Jumper die ages ago?

And it'll keep happening until the fucker gets the message and leaves. Nobody wants him here, and even his fucking shrink told him to stay the fuck away. But he JUST. WON'T. LISTEN.

Neat, there goes my evening.

I prefer to support VNs but I'll keep that in mind.

Just left Shadow Realm, now I'm an incredibly buff Blue Eyes White Dragon, having taken both the Blue Eyes perk tree and the Wild perk tree, thus being an alpha predator even among their ranks. Next I'm heading to Generic Zombie to introduce the legions of the undead to my "Fuck You Dragon Beams".

I've saved Hitler,stopped the Jews and secured the future of our white children and now I am making mobile suits so that the future can continue to be secured. And then I can continue my chain and not worry about Jump chan getting angry at me.

Of course! It's not like I'm just going at this willy-nilly but One for All on top of my Cuteling Quirk Marriage is going to be great! Because of Fiber Body my body is tougher than normal humans and with Meatball I can, maybe, realign myself with a few hours if I go overboard with the All for One stuff.

Deku might not even exist in the timeline that Pillar of Peace happens in. Not sure. NuBee?

I'm a new Cuteling Jumper! I'm actually still kinda at odds. While Meat Ball + Fiber Body Is cool. Fiber Body + Fiber Master is more potent, in my opinion.

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>That particular combination is harder than most, but is also pretty thematic with the jump.
No? It's not even hard because chances are you won't end up on Mars. You'll probably just be left behind and then live out a relatively normal life for a decade. So you effectively just used the jump as a shopping list, waking up in another jump without having meaningfully interacted with Negima's setting or characters at all.

Anyone else try to learn the magic from Star Wars? Do anything interesting?

>No, I actually do that intentionally.
For shame, man. For shame.

With D-day being today, what did you do during WWII?

There is no magic in Star Wars. Only exotic applications of the force outside of commonly accepted Jedi practice.

What? Sith Sorcery? What can it even do?

Magic nazi time

I stopped Japan from bombing the US and thus prevented the US from joining the war, liberated France, prevented any invasion of Britain by Germany, and halted the Soviet invasion of Germany.

Create shields like pic related, control the minds of thousands at once, summon spirits and the dead, empower people into hulking beasts like Savage Opress, among many other things.

>No, I actually do that intentionally. Drawbacks are (or at least were) supposed to truly be difficult. I don't design for people to be able to just take a bunch of minor annoyances and end up with 1600 CP: in my opinion, if you want max CP, you should be having to spend serious time planning or taking major risks. In this case, I might end up changing things just so you don't end up with the limitation, but even then I'm unsure; as it stands you're basically paying 300 CP and working injump to get what's inarguably the best companion in the setting.
While I vehemently disagree (and I'm not even sure how the current 300cp drawbacks are supposed to be truly difficult. All three of 200cp ones seem worse to me), I suppose I'll accept that for now.

>Possibly, but probably not; see above for my rationale. That particular combination is harder than most, but is also pretty thematic with the jump.
What, why? There's no amnesiac and powerless people in Negima.

At best, you could cite Asuna, and she only lost her early memories before leaving Mars, not any powers.

I don't see ANYTHING thematic there?

Deku still exists in Pillar of Peace, he just doesn't obtain One For All from All Might.

I just started a new Alt-chain, where every jump will have at least a minor amount of writefaggery. A Native Chain, from Assassin's Creed.

He exists, he just doesn't get One for All.

Stalwart Tiger ended up fighting with Britain, with Amaterasu on his side
The Japanese were not happy.

>Honorverse WIP last thread
[obligatory SV "...Mahan exalted as a Solar and beat up some Shinma so Decisive Battle doctrine is flawless and dominant, forever."]

Man, that was a fun Let's Read.

>she only lost her early memories before leaving Mars
Isn't that the entire first half of the series she lost then?

Super Hitler looks like a troll doll

On a scale from 1 to 10, how good do you think Deku would be in the Support class?

>Possibly, but probably not; see above for my rationale. That particular combination is harder than most, but is also pretty thematic with the jump.
How is it hard? You just go to school as a completely ordinary person, and get out fine.

It's not harder than other combinations. It's just more BORING than others.

Platoon was a fun Jump, I started off with the Russians and then Jumped ship to the Germans after killing Stalin and took care of key figures that would made thing to difficult, Except for Patton that glorious man. Pic related was my right hand man during the whole war. Also Mechs

Raise the Dead, Teleportation, Enhancements, Alchemy and much more

I see the drawback rules lawyer is back again.

>Jumper is probably having kids in Naruto. It makes sense in the context in the chain, good time and everything, probably something they'd pour all sorts of love into and whatever. I just have no godly idea what the hell I'm doing in regards to designing the kids or figuring out what's happening in the plot or how to bring them up to speed. I don't know how to deal with this.
How are you gonna bring them along?

What? No. Those memories were erased long before the series started.

Except that you're still a part of class 3A, and even most of the "normal" people in that class ended up going on the field trip anyway (and those that didn't still got involved by the end). Including the person who's an Amnesiac and the person who's Sealed. So while I generally agree that "Amnesia" perks are kind of a cop-out, the fact that one of the big goals of the series is a character struggling with hers (and again, the fact that this jump was very early) made it fit there. Besides, you'll keep your memories of your time in Negima afterwards, so to you it won't be like you slept through the whole thing.

I'm sorry that it's a problem, but I think it's important. My standard is 1000 CP, not 1600. If you want extra points, you should have to work for them.

Updated Carmen jump attached, updated Honorverse coming with next post, hopefully both are ready for Complete.

M is dealing with deeply weird shit by using even weirder things...and excessive amounts of firepower. Feels good to jump a horror setting and be the top of the food chain.

I used crossing dragon streams from persona, lithomancy from zendikar, enchanting combo (too big to post in same line), kanji magic from kamigawa, and gemcraft pools to create leylines in the shape of a massive rune spell so it is both funneling mana and compressing it into a massive gem in the sky that currently resembles a sun in the sky of my inner world.

Basically I am taking all of my inner worlds magical potential (of which there is a lot) and over time layering it onto its self and compressing it more and more over time.

The more mana it gwts the more compressed the crystal becomes, it cannot explode because the compression prevents it even though it is conatantly being added too. This has been going on for a long while now.

Shortly after I altered the spell and made it also layer in the ki I had been building from xianxia jumps (also made into pools, thank you gemcraft) so that it is basically a marbled diamond of massive size just floating above my inner world made of mana and ki.

I am unsure what I want to do with it at the moment. I think I might eat it later once it gains enough mass to start displacing the gravity of my inner world. Or I may just slowly move it out from my land in there so it looks small and keeps growing.

I mean I am not surr why I even built the thing, it just seemed like a good idea at the time.

Can I replace Gilbert Grape?

I do not know if it counts as a ritual, but it is similiar to DI guy did. Basically I used the 2nd true magic to go to worlds where everyone was morally 'evil' then killed them all and absorbed them with Dark Binding, empowering myself. Sometimes I used my EX Charisma to make them come to me and kill themselves to do it if I am feeling sadistic.

Stopped Hitler from going any further than reclaiming German land lost after WW1, stopped him from actually killing jews and convinced him to deport them (with all their belongings), walled off Germany, and got them to focus on technology and shit. They ended up taking over the world eventually, but their leadership had mellowed out by then, and it was for the purpose of uniting and uplifting humanity as a whole instead of one race. They were still big on racial purity though.

>and even most of the "normal"
No, a relatively small part of the class actually went to the magic world.

>and those that didn't still got involved by the end
You mean they all effectively molested Negi at some point and then did nothing of real importance afterward.

Also, if the Sealed is really based on Eva, there should be a way to break it both temporarily and permanently.

>they took over eventually
Well he did warn you about the jews.

What is dies irae?

made the every nation in the Axis powers into a Pile of ash and obsidian with a platoon armed with wands of universal fire

>I'd really prefer not to. I hate having "generic" drawbacks when they're not justified by the setting (for example, Amnesia in Negima made sense, but here it really doesn't), so if I did that I'd end up just cutting it completely. I know it's a serious challenge, but in my opinion 300 CP drawbacks are supposed to be serious risks; and after all, slaves DO escape on their own, even without any outside knowledge, help, or skills.
Let me put it this way. I'd like to take the setting appropriate Bad Start "your background is changed to genetic slave and location to the slave pens" option for the roll playing and story telling potential it represents. You currently have it bundled with a non setting inspired generic drawback that I won't touch with a 10 - foot pole.
One, the cost to benefit ratio just is not there once no warehouse access/outside items started getting bundled with no powers for the same price.
Two, even it if was and I was in a safe lifestyle and starting position where I might consider it, I have plans for certain actions in the setting that involve blatant power use, like all the sexually active men on the planet Masada getting turned into girls after a voice from the heavens condemns their nations disgraceful actions toward their women as making them unworthy of being men at all.

Just don't weld the drawbacks that are a good fit to the setting with the generic bland ones, is what I'm saying. If you hate "generic" drawbacks, remove the power loss portion entirely and just keep the you are begin as a genetic slave part for less CP.

Anyway, I'm going to look over Carmen Sandiego now, AND THERE HAD BETTER BE SOMETHING ABOUT A CAPELLA OR I WILL BE VERY DISAPPOINTED!

Hrmmm, not remembering the full role of a Support Class in MHA, Deku seems like he'd be incredible in a coaching and training role. He's very analytical when it comes to people's potential as heroes, how they might be able to use their Quirk, how they might be able to work with others, in depth strategies, even keeping extensive notes collected over years of developing this habit.

I can't remember if Support included anything other than what Mei does (making equipment), but if it does, I imagine he'd be on the upper end, maybe an 8.

Quicksilver ruled a while back that Sapient beings you make can be counted as companions specifically for this kind of scenario.

I believe it was mentioned he came in last out of the people who managed to pass the test. Score better than him on the U.A. Entrance Exam and you probably bump him out of Class A.

Sounds like you genocided a bunch of innocents again.

I meant it as a joke, but you actually did it. You're awesome, Marvel user.

if they are complicit/aiding in the system that causes it They are not innocent.

Aw that's sad...

Hey NuBee if I buy Deku as my Canon Companion can I give him CP with "Backup"? Because I would totally like to make Pic Related happen. What would that be? Weak attraction + [I can't find a good fire Quirk]

I imagine that even if it was JUST the equipment stuff he wouldn't be half bad, at least as an idea-man that directed the actual engineers.

Nah, I don't do big rituals. I prefer iterative improvement, slowly building myself up into something greater. Big rituals are for chumps who are unwilling to put in the effort for constant gains and would rather stake it all on one big push.

Quirks for ANTS

Sounds like you genocided a bunch of innocents again. You fucking monster.

It's certainly your right to disagree, I'd just like to hear some reasons for why beyond wanting to take minor drawbacks and end up with major points. And I could see arguments for those being poorly balanced with each other; I'll freely admit drawbacks and drawback balancing is one of the worst parts of jumpwriting for me, one of the reasons I have so many rules about it.

Well, Asuna lost all memories of her early childhood and doesn't get them back until near the very end, at which point she's memory-wiped AGAIN. Including losing several parts of her powers until she started to regain them through contact and contract with Negi. Admittedly, it's been over three years since I reread the series, but that was the intention then, when I had just reread it.

And Eva was totally powerless most of the series, because her powers were Sealed by the headmaster. She couldn't do anything supernatural at all except on specific nights or when granted specific dispensation, which was the whole reason they trained in the resort and why she and Setsuna had their tournament battle inside their minds.

Sorry, I have no idea what you're talking about.

I honestly can't imagine any world where going to school in Class 3A at Mahora would be boring or safe.

Certainly not going to argue with you about specific numbers now; I remember it ending up being most of the class, but it could be wrong. Either way, enough "normal" people did go that I'd call it a fair assumption that you could easily write yourself going if you cared to.

Probably should have done that, and even thought I had, but if not it's too late to change it now without a major update.

That's a very good point. I'll change it to a 200 and get rid of the power loss, though that leaves me with too few 300 CP drawbacks. Any ideas?

And yes, that's in there.

Thank you, I try to be receptive.

How do you feel about london right now in light of recent events?

I was a grease monkey and battlefield mechanic for the Valkyrie Special Combat Unit during Ring of Red. It was a mostly all-female unit that centered around Armored Fighting Walker use in the European Theater. Admittedly, they were the first generation units, so it wasn't a walk in the park. I spent more than a few firefights dangling from the side of an AFW patching lines and putting out fires to get a unit walking again.

At the time I had significantly less power than I do now, but I did cheat quite a bit with my Clockwork Necromancy to cause the German AFWs to suffer sudden and catastrophic failures from time to time to save those in my unit. Yamato showed much less restraint and was all but barred from using his Necromancy magic after unleashing it on Normandy. I'll tell you what though, those German bastards started running for the hills after they discovered putting a few bullets into the landing forces didn't mean they'd stay down.

Of course, after that came Operation Downfall, which was not a fun experience but we managed to pull through.

Yes, I know, the Valkyrie Special Combat Unit isn't a real thing in this world OR Ring of Red. My Coordinator was being a dick and stuck me in a harem anime version. I complained, but I secretly enjoyed every minute of it.

That's an odd way to spell crushing Nazis by removing There support structure.
what recent events?

>Quicksilver ruled a while back that Sapient beings you make can be counted as companions specifically for this kind of scenario.
That's nice. Man, that really needs to show up somewhere.

I'll give you some advice right now bancho, Just let it go right now before they get you in a long winded argument about morality and stuff again

Actually thread does anyone have any ideas for what to do with a giant hypercompressed mana/ki crystal?

>Sorry, I have no idea what you're talking about.
forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/2054007/
David Webber fails at strategy.

You know if Deku got a combo of his parent's quirks he might be the perfect counter to Bakugou, and that is hilarious.

You realize that many Nazi soldiers, like other countries' forces, were drafted, right? And that women and children, the elderly and infirm, milk-men, farmers, writers, doctors, artists and so on exist in those countries? You realize that Germans, even Nazis, aren't evil, right? They're human beings with thoughts, feelings, and dreams. You can't say, "you live in this particular area at this time, so you deserve death," without becoming worse than the people you claim are monsters.

I don't mind those actually, talking things over is how I learn.

And what of the children? What of the adults who worked to undermine the system, of which there were plenty? The adults deluded by propaganda and who didn't know the horrors being committed, and would be appalled to learn? You can't just go "everyone burns" and end it at that, you need to extract the people who don't deserve to burn first. You always want the fast and simple solution, but you can't be hasty when it comes to mass murder.

But I like arguing about morality and stuff!

The Fallout jumpchain has disappointed me greatly.

It lacks a drawback to make you Chinese.

The recent attacks in britain with all the recent deaths and the complicity of the government in it.

Mmmm, sure. As for a Quirk, perhaps Weak Attraction + Lighter + Empowered Quirk?

Like a project manager or concept designer? I could definitely see him doing pretty good in that role too. With the way he studies he could probably really improve in the actual inventor part of the curriculum too.

Yeah, really opened my options up. It'd be nice.

/pol/ get the fuck out.

See if you can use it as the substrate for a computing device, find out how effective P-N junctions working on mana instead of electrons are?

You punish the Nazis by killing the people who aren't Nazis. Sure, yeah, that sounds like a really fucking good idea. What gives you the right to be the judge, jury, and executioner for people who have nothing to do with what you're dealing with?

Deku for ants!

Why would you want to be a dirty chink?

>I don't mind those actually, talking things over is how I learn.

Fair enough but you can't say I didn't warn you

Your Morales are wrong and mind are right

>You realize that Germans, even Nazis, aren't evil, right?
>Nazis, aren't evil, right?

Go back to /pol/

I literally have machines of karma set up to short them out and give them new bodies automatically,You know that right?

Around 100 or 200 CP.

>Perfect
>Baku
>Counter

>Go back to /pol/
Oh, Bancho. And you were doing so well.

Passed the allies tech which let them utterly crush the Nazis and IJA in ground wars while also blasting their navies from space.

Ah thanks! So If I push both of his Tier 0 Parents Perks to Teir 3 what can be expected?