Character help thread?

Character help thread?
>5e
>Kid was a miner in a mountain
>Town was attacked when he was mining
>Cockatrice attacked the town
>Father was a folk hero
>Is now a bard
What do you have to help really that's all I have

its a bit disjointed, but I would suggest weaving it together. the cocatrice attacked and was driven off by the town milita/ killed by the milita but his farther had the death blow.
he then was inspired and wrote a poem, ect ect now a bard.

if its weaved together it seems nice and orderly not just a broken idea

Much more interesting any other ideas? I was thinking cursed mountain but that is super basic. Any real way top add some more complexity?

>bard
>mining community
you know what must be done

Brilliant

Fuuuuuuck

OP, here's your character right here

Looks perfect to me.

He used the fame from doing it combined with his music to get groupies. He got banished for fucking everyone's wives and is now addicted to dwarf cocaine. All motives stem from this.

the mountains cursed him to nether mine again but he stilled wanted to help so he started making songs about his dad to entertain the miner.

Try creativity, it works wonders.