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i like the tool reference.

How do you feel about cyoas that wrongly portray a topic you're deeply knowledgeable about? Have you ever noticed such a thing and how did you react?

Your rival, a super villain, has decided to give you a waifu. Which one do you choose?

Incubi are not male succubi and vice versa. They have an entirely different origin and purpose. I get a headache everytime I see a male succubi called an incubus or worse when user throws a fit because an author correctly used the term succubi (male).

1/3rd of last thread discussed pokemon. How?

I pick the villain! Notice me already and become my bf!!

It's a CYOA, that's how.

I want the waifu-making super villain to be a cute girl I can make my waifu. They sound cute. We could then get other waifus as our friends and have fun watching anime and eating cookies. Waifu-making super villain won't need to possess the world, she'll possess my heart and I'll give her as much of my world as I comfortably can.

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I assume the zombie girl's descriptin was meant to say "my bandages fell off"?
Also, if she heals and looks mostly like a normal person, why bandages?
And wrinkling nose? Does she smell of rot?
Please correct zombiegirl.

Also, Alexia got nice description for lewd aspects but others really don't. Improve it please!

Are you trying to shitpost? Incubi are defined by male appearance, succubi are defined by female appearance. There exists no succubus (male), it's ameme. Even in the medieval ages when succubus appeared as a guy, it was an incubus.

I'm gonna need to see your most recent WIP

It's the law

>WIPs
You can't fool me sir, I know WIPs have been outlawed. Now excuse me, I'll be on my way now, have a good day...

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Succubi leech energy, most commonly from sexual fluids. Incubi impregnate women to give birth to monsters. That's the distinction between them. If it doesn't impregnate you to birth an abomination, it's not an incubus.

>Isolation
>Human
>Expert Swordsman (freebie), Sorcerous Aptitude (sorcery), Agile, Elemental Affinity (dark)
>Crow knives
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I am physical manifestation of all things owerpowered and broken in DS.

Does text count, officer?

I assume this is a pick one, but then Isabel's description mentions if Necia comes around.

Is this a pick two, then?

Is this some sort of weeb land hire a samurai CYOA?

What a depressing cyoa. Literally nothing you can do to save yourself.

Well, since you insist, here's early WIP. Enjoy.
Just not too much, you need to leave some ability to enjoy yourself for when finished version will be out (if ever)

That's exactly what it is. You gonna duel some fuckers for money and, let's be real, waifus.

Does the cannon fire several small projectiles at once (like a shotgun) or fire 1 large unexplosive cannon-shot?

I'm thinking one large cannon-ball. There's nothing preventing grapeshot, really, but one cannonball seems fun enough and I want the cannon to be a one-trick pony.

If i am fighting for waifus i gotta look honourable so i am going to need like two cannons

>Dork Souls is depressing.
>A Dick Souls CYOA is depressing.
Really gets that noggin joggin.

You realize that one can change into other according to some medieval ramblings? I wouldn't be surprised if it one do both, just has no point to as succubi were meant to leech off seed and then use it to impregnate other women (likely a convenient excuse for lack of fidelity).
Either way, there exist no male succubi or female incubi, there's only crappy invention of japanese porn makers who didn't understand the cultural or historical context and just though "it's a perverted demon".

Why stop at two? Have you no ambition?

Ambition? endless
Budget? limited

>according to some medieval ramblings?
Fun fact: those ramblings were created LITERALLY to stop dumb roasties from claiming they got fucked by an incubus and therefore the kid's a demon and not theirs.

>adventures in slashy-slashy fun land depressing
>not rolling around the map and making competition of "how many monsters you can stab in the butt without taking damage"
>not drinking a strong liquor whenever your character gobbles up an item
I'd say you play the game wrong.

True, but you'll have enough for at LEAST three. Probably more. Cannon builds are my fetish, I admit.

In that case i will buy more cannons bitches love cannons

I'm sorry officer but it would be equally illegal to get people's hopes up.

Quite the opposite, the ramblings are what created and described the incubi and succubi, likely FOR the "I didn't sleep around, it was a demon that fucked me/her" excuse.

Fun fact: those ramblings were created to absolve roasties of cheating. Of course Lady Roosterswallow didn't cheat on our liege with that studly, redhaired farm boy! Clearly a succubi stole his seed and then stuck it inside her!! Her poor Ladyship!!!

You'll have to start pumping the fuck outta Str brah. But bitches love Str.

It's worth remembering cannon's are a shoot-your-load and leave kinda deal. But who needs second chances?

I thought Succubi were invented to explain nocturnal emissions and sleep paralysis, while Inccubi were invented to explain away unwanted pregnancies, and the two combined into a more coherent shared mythology later on in the development of both.

That was BEFORE these ramblings.

>tfw you've made zero progress in the past couple days because you've been completely sucked into another fucking garbage
I'm still working, I'm just working slowly...

>you've been completely sucked into another fucking garbage
Uh

Cannons are the ultimate weapon No ammo? slam a motherfucker with it

how did i not think of this

Could someone post the original Pokemon personified?

>another fucking Visual Novel*
...Does that count as a Freudian Slip or am I just subconsciously aware that this thing isn't worth all the attention I've been giving it?

>cyoa starts with your dead and includes an overarching divine bureaucracy reducing you to nothing but an ant dangling on astral strings

Oh boy, what a wish fulfillment.

I hope you're planning on changing the narrators speech. She sounds like a fucking crude moron, totally inconsistent with her image.

You mean the CYOA or the novel?

Some of us wish for adversity, underman.
You mean, changing her image. The speech is characterful, and besides is the harder of the two to change.

What VN and what girl's route have you chosen? I wanna rip you for your shit taste.

You get to be a STAND so i say it is worth it

True, but it's not just that. True to superstitious medieval attitude, succubi/incubi were scapegoats for multitude of events and acts related to sexuality.

I'm pretty sure I know what ramblings I had in mind when I mentioned ramblings. You may have thought of something else but that doesnt' change what I wrote. Either way, to reiterate, there existed no succubi(male) or incubi(female), those are retarded modern inventions of clueless japanese hentai makers (one in particular, who's into yaoi hentai with shotas/traps and whose work spread this retardation to Veeky Forums).

>Corruption
>Mutant
>Unnatural Anatomy, Rage, Expert Swordsman, Dual Wielding
>Axes of the Betrayer

Become the Betrayer, unleashing his rage upon the world until some poor soul finally does him in.

Well it is a Dark Souls boss. That's essentially a game over from the get-go.

"Oh boyo, You fukin' dead nigga! Like ho-ho-shit wow, this is the first time in my eternal fuckin' life I eva seen a nigga as dead as you, and it still for sum fuckin' reason suprises me yo!"

Characterful, right.

Yeah.

Like nigga we're talking CYOAs here not The Western Canon, temper your expectations.

Well you can always be that extra boss no one wants to kill

I get adversity but this is a big no no in my book. It always bothers me when authors include relatively omnipowerful, unbeatable entities with a vast interest in manipulating the player in their cyoas. If you can't challenge it, it's not challenging. Just annoying.

>Either way, to reiterate, there existed no succubi(male) or incubi(female),
Did succubi give collected semen to incubi to impregnate women with, or could the same demon shapeshift to do both? I thought the latter was how Merlin was born.

This reads like some sort of weird mixture between Carl and Master Shake

I don't care, really. I constantly see people wildly misinformed, but confidently so, about my area of expertise. I've come to accept it as a fact of life.

If a bunch of anons get some things wrong, who gives a shit? I'm here to have fun and imagine, not nitpick about realism. Besides, I know better than to argue with a confidently incorrect user. It also makes you sound like a cunt to cite your degree or field of work in a mostly anonymous setting.

>Show me your most recent WIP
>It's the law
Fuck the law!

Is Mhyrienne the best waifu ever written in any CYOA ever?

Shew has literally every quality I like

>into orgasm denial and sex toys
>flat chest
>wants to be appreciated and complimented
>a bit jealous
>smart


It's creepy how she checks everyone of my boxes.

That's like being annoyed by gravity in settings that don't give you the ability to fly.

Nice Quads
We're all ants in the grand scheme of things, user.
And you only have to choose to dangle from Soul Strings if you want.
Double Quads?!
>She sounds like a fucking crude moron, totally inconsistent with her image.
>tfw that's basically how you speak in real life
>changing her image.
Yeah, I do this.
There is just a bit too much disparity between the two...
But I couldn't seem to find a decent picture that was smug enough to fit.
I'm forcing myself through Fate/Stay Night because I've enjoyed so many of the spins offs and such.
I'm still on Fate, I'll probably take a break before starting on UBW.

Why the fuck you want to challenge your entry to FUCKING HEAVEN?

But someone will. Because people can fight the boss and kill it, they'll feel they have to.

There's o mention of lewds and dickings, user. Not even the standard, polite amount expected in /cyoag/ showing deference to tradition and respect for other anons. Should I assume that'll be a whole separate page?

The game is fun, no doubt.
The lore though? Depressing. Like the cyoa.

Looking good, can't wait

tell me there is a third, this looks so good

but lets see here

I will become a guardian, hell fucking yeah

possession with inspireing aura. [I hope I don't get a bully, this aura would make it too easy]

ethereal form, nice and balanced with the inhuman look

characteristics: armour, wings, demonic, extra limbs [4?] and hell why not unique eyes spinning pits of blue flames that will freak out anyone.

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If a cyoa included a personification of gravity wielding absolute power and the ability to squish you at any point in time, then yeah I'd be kind of annoyed.

I'm a freedomfag though. I like having freedom in life and in cyoas. The knowledge that my cyoa adventure is but some entertainment meant to humour some divine paperpusher until she's willing to send me to Heaven is not my idea of a good time.

Isabel sounds the cutest and funnest to probably just sit around and play video games with.

>of lewds and dickings
I uh.. wasn't planning for this to be a lewd CYOA...
Like, it doesn't even technically have any Waifus...
I hope I can meet your expectations!
>tell me there is a third
Not yet, but I'm gonna try to keep this one under 6 pages.
But, with all the text I have, that's probably not very realistic.

>gets 2 blessed quads of advice
>ignores them

I am not some succubi expert but from what I read it is the latter - it's all devil evil satan demon stuff, it just takes completely and exclusively female or male form depending on whether it's to extract sperm or inject it since it cannot make its own. But since it's all a bullshit I will be completely unsurprised if there are also statements that those are two different kinds of things that cooperate in some diabolical sperm-swap procedure.

>inb4 sperm-swap procedure? New fetish to fap to, thanks user

Is there really any point to a cyoa that's just a prelude to the afterlife and ultimately has no lasting affect on anything?

>I uh.. wasn't planning for this to be a lewd CYOA.
Wait.. what? You mean, like, only a few lewd choices? You're making a CYOA, right?

>all lolis
This makes it tougher for me than it should be.

its an interesting concept and its very well executed, you just need to powers and it will be ready unless you plan on adding flaws and quests and such like.

but as an interested reader I hope you put this in the thread when its done and I hope its done soon. but good luck with it

minor note, please for the love of TG don't put wifus in there. it distracts every user that reads it, ill bet you a million of every currency in the world

How many non-lolis do you feel are needed in a loli-CYOA so you'll be able to make a choice?

>lolis
What? Some may look somewhat loli but most look like typical anime teenager someone tried to make really cute. Isabel could even pass as 20+ in some of the more cutesy manga.

I've always felt like waifu cyoas should be an even split to cater to many tastes. After all, it's just a matter of choosing pictures, right? Their appearance wouldn't necessarily necessitate a chance to personality.

It makes me feel for the straight women and gay men among us. Must be a pain in the ass to open every waifu cyoa and not like any of them.

>non-lolis
>in a loli-CYOA
There is something wrong here

According to the poll there are very few exclusively straight women and exclusively gay men. Sucks for them, but they are a tiny minority, unless there's a reason they'd be underreported and the statistics are skewed.

I'm stealing Rosemary to use in another CYOA I read, sorry but it's what I'm gonna do, she fits so perfectly and I need her around, sorry for thieving.

It usually isn't that much of a pain unless the author really hamfists them in and/or punishes you for opting out.

>You done designing your kingdom and yourself? Good, now YOU HAVE TO PICK ONE OF THESE HETEROSEXUAL MONOGAMOUS WOMEN TO WIFE UNTIL THE END OF TIME OR THE CYOA IS A NO GO! IM SERIOUS NO WIFE NO KINGDOM!!

It would probably be even worse to make a "HERE'S THE OPTION FOR GAYS" in every waifu cyoa.

Why to expect anons to make CYOA to cater to everyone when majority of anons are heterosexual males? To feel bad for those who have other preferences is understandable but to expect creators to include every minority against personal taste and ideas for the CYOA smells like politically-correct grandstanding, especially since no one ever prevented those minorities to make their own CYOA and while they never got much popularity due to aforementioned reasons - there already are husbando-only ones hardly anyone complained about.

Contain your needlessly bleeding heart and understand that there's exactly as many CYOA for sexual minorities as there's CYOA authors interested or sharing said minorities' taste. No one is really discriminated against, most people just don't give a shit about making something they're not interested in as is very much their right.

To be fair, I'm a straight dude and I hate that too. I have all this power and the ability to find a woman that perfectly fits me and my new station? Nah, here's a qt cat grill who loves the cuddle

I never said I expected that, actually. I lamented my ability to play the cyoa due to my own visual biases, then empathized with how that must feel to someone who has that reaction to 60% of content instead of just 1%. Strange that you took such offense and decided to write two paragraphs in retaliation to a falsely perceived attack

You're assuming every straight user wants waifus in their cyoas. Waifus, husbandos, daughterus, etc. it's all cancer.

Anyone got that fallout post apoc cyoa? Please post it.

Seems like mutual misunderstanding. I took your post as you feeling bad, maybe even guilty and sad for those the content of those CYOA doesn't appeal to. At the same time I was neither attacked nor really attacked you - just wanted to to tell you that you don't have to feel bad for those people as current content is simply reflection of usual preferences and not only there's some content for this 1% - they're always welcome to make more of what they like as others did in the past.

>I've always felt like waifu cyoas should be an even split to cater to many tastes. After all, it's just a matter of choosing pictures, right?

A 50/50 split seems like the best choice.

>Their appearance wouldn't necessarily necessitate a chance to personality.

I always felt that certain personalities worked better with lolis than adult women. If you have a loli that's easily scared and has to depend on you it's cute but if you have a character that looks to be 25 years old (or older) being scared of the dark I would see that as a negative trait.

>It makes me feel for the straight women and gay men among us. Must be a pain in the ass to open every waifu cyoa and not like any of them.

We had a strawpoll before and I think ~5 people said that they where straight females/gay men in total. Of course bisexuals also existed and where something like ~10 people extra.

CYOAs take a lot of time and making one for "just" five people is probably seen as a waste. Most make CYOAs that they like personally (Veeky Forumsers make adventure CYOAs and waifufags make waifu CYOAs).

I just want everybody to be happy


No problem, have fun with her.

Fair enough. We're on the same page, user

Including some token options or even just a token option is not pc grandstanding.

At the very least if you don't want to be inclusive, don't be exclusive. "Obligatory waifus" are just rude. Don't punish the player for not picking a waifu. That's just common courtesy.