CYOA - Imouto Bapping Edition

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I still want to know if Suggestions are permanent or not. I don't particularly want to take Liar or Justice just for a few, minor alterations.

>Update never

Your response is satisfying, I have nothing to add.

that's a bit of a stretch

I'm not sure I understand you right, but I really don't see how the alchemist cyoa doesn't do just exactly that. The only change is that it's in prose instead of bullet points. Focusing on the sexual stuff just makes the characters seem like fetishbait.
Also, describing a characters romantic appeal definitely doesn't need to be done in the 'five reasons why you should date x!' style.

You didn't understand me, because I was saying that it did exactly that.

Some minor changes.
Haven't begun yet to work on the themes for the basement's customization.
Let me know your builds.

Update 2.3.2:
> Minor adjustments for the description of the experiment.
> Full Kitchen has an extra option now.
> Korean Gay Couple has an extra option now.
> Lab Research has an extra option now.
> Spelling fixes and minor adjustments all around.

Although I'll add that it has a lot of genuinely decently-written stuff, as well as the bullet-point style stuff.

>that's a bit of a stretch
Not at all. You sound like one of those equality faggots.

Alright, I was just confused because the "Really?" made it seem like you were disagreeing with me on something, when you're apparently not?

The point was that it's the kind of bad writing we get from everyone. I.e. unless you think everybody's a girl...

I know it's a game based on imagination, but I feel like I MUST ask the author.

If you buy companions, would they even like you? Or do they blame you for being there because you purchased them?

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I did not specified, but I think they could possibly be happy about it. Maybe cause they will be rewarded for the experiment too.

>The Free Cities : -1 Blessing

>My profession will be The Blade, with Higher Education : -1 Blessing

>Because I was born in the Free Cities and I chose Higher Education, I can become a Faceless Man.

>My gift will be Touched by Magic. I can't even imagine how broken I would be as an assassin who has been trained by the Faceless Men and who owns minor illusion spells to help him during his work.

>By spending my last Blessing, I choose an other gift : Grace and Beauty. Pretty useful to begin your life as an extremely attractive et social man. With this gift, I will be able to fully enjoy my childhood (finding sex partners easily, have a lot of friends) before becoming a professional assassin and create a distance with such pleasures.

>As a Faceless Man, I will have no real companion in my life so it's useless for me to choose one.

>I have spent my three Blessing and I don't need an other one, so no Curse for me.

Funny you should say that. My updated build is still in the works, but my head canon is that the companions were offered a monetary deal, as opposed to being kidnapped.

Another fun variation was a scenario in which you wake up in the basement with all of the options you anonymously chose present. You then have to explain to the highly irate companion that you must have responded to a bored god unwittingly and offer to split the cash reward with them. Take the pornstar option, for example. If you're in there twenty years and she generally would charge $300 for her services. If she worked once a day, every day, for 20 years she would have made $2,190,000. By being in there with you, everything in life is paid for, stress free, and she should come out of it with $2,500,000. You apologize gratuitously for the situation, make friends, offer a cash incentive, and boom. Happy days. Hopefully. If you chose alcohol or drugs she might kill herself or something.

Thanks Brub.

Reduce my prize to 5 million for 50 points.

> Veggies: 5 points.
I've always wanted to become a vegetarian for ethical and health reasons, but I've never had the willpower to do so. This will absolutely tie my hands so that I'm forced to eat healthier, AND get a decade of life on top of it. Since my companion is eating the veggies, it will apply to her as well. Basically I won't lose lifespan in the basement. I'm sure there will be times where I curse my decision, especially early on, but I'll come out better for it.

> Celebrity: Kristen Bell, 10 points.
I'm assuming that companions do not know that it was *your* choice to force them to force them to live in a basement with you for a decade. If they do, then any of them will be thoroughly unpleasant. I'm going to take artistic license and make this Kristen Bell of a decade ago (so 27 instead of 37). Not into women older than me. I find her cute, clever, and she's a vegetarian so will show me how to make tasty dishes with the Veggies.

> Heat/AC, 2 points
> Surround Sound System, 4 points
> Old Radio, 1 point

Enough for entertainment. TV shows/movies are too pricey, and radio has the advantage on staying in touch with the outside world.

> Garden, 1 point
Inexpensive for some natural beauty in flowers and vines. AND I can grow fruit, potatoes, etc. here without invalidating the 10 year gain from the Veggies option.

> Jacuzzi and Sauna, 3 points
Hygiene makes this a good value.

> Library + Comics, 5 points
I don't actually care that much about the comics, but I ended up with an extra point, so...

> Indoor Pool + Wave function, 7 points
Enough to stay in aerobic shape, especially when combined with simple exercises like push-ups.

>Skylight, 1 point

>Medical Care + Contraception, 3 points
I'm not opposed to having children, but I am opposed to having children stuck in a basement.

>Lab Research, 8 points
Extra two decades of life? Uh, yes. Yes. Throw in Kristen Bell while you're at it.

If you're talking about the 'ingredient list' stuff, yeah, that's what we get from everyone, but that really wasn't my original point. It's more so about where the focus of these ingredients lies. I can't remember any cyoas that focus so much on the sexual stuff, unless we're talking about straight up lewd ones.

If you're referring to the sterile part, I was really talking more about the presentation. Some of the romantic stuff reads like a video game walkthrough "if you do x, y will happen, etc". It's definitely not all of them, but it's something stood out to me, especially because I don't think I've seen this much in cyoas.

Age Difference
>4-6 years
Blood Relations
>Family Friend
Title
>First name
Relationship
>Protective and Lustful
Personality Traits
>Territorial
>Popular
>Lewd
>Genius
>Domineering
>Elegant
Physical Habits
>Teasing
>Insulting
>Hugging
Hangouts
>Gym
>Theatres
>Indoors
Height
>Taller
Breasts
>Gifted
Face
>Noble
Butts
>THICK
Physique
>Athletic
Skin Tone
>pale
Clothing
>Fashionable
Desire
>To fuck you silly
Drawbacks
>Onee
>Catfight
Panties
>Lingerie
Mundane details
>Tattoo
>Plump lips
>Sharp eyes
Bizarre details
>Monstergirl
>Manticore
>tfw no taller and stronger older manticore sister who loves teasing and making fun of you and hugging you while smothering you with her mane
>tfw she'll never fight with her monstergirl best friend on who gets to fuck then marry me

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That's why I made this cyoa. I love seeing these types of detailed builds. To understand they line of thought.

Very good build user. Nice call on Kristen Bell.

>imouto cyoa
>taller and stronger older manticore sister
>older sister
user, I don't want to dictate how you play your cyoas, but I feel like you would be better served with the gentle femdom one.

strawpoll.me/13353378

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>electric waifu democratically determined to be second best choice has least amount of text
oh how cruel fate is

Arielle is probably best girl
>Moderately cute
>Big tits
>Likes the things I do
>Just like me politically
>open to my fetishes
Only thing is that I want to be told that I'm loved.

Thing is, I don't want the femdom to be that gentle.
Besides, nobody's posted it yet so I made do.

Oh we can get more CYOA like this alright...if you make em!

I think the description being so vague compared to others is one of the reasons why she's so popular. People fill the blanks with their expectations.

Someone said they wanted a smug anime girl folder?
imgur.com/a/zSNC1

I can remember a tonne but not specifically which ones.
>walkthrough
Just seemed like a lazy style to me.

I think you can build a not so gentle one? I'm not sure though.
Anyway, it's not like you missed much, considering how they're basically the same.

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>posting the CYOA in two parts

>wizardchan account
>demon maid
>adventure helment
>five year apprenticeship
Don't feel too okay with murder and rape, but if the person's bad and deserves it, a solid maybe.

>tfw no watersports fetish option

Bonus: Half Reward, in for 20 years. 55 points

>Food
Full Kitchen (48)
>Companion
Mandy Muse, Choose a Pornstar (37)
>Electronics
Heat/AC (35)
Surround Sound System (31)
>Side Rooms
Garden w/weed (29)
Spa and Jacuzzi (26)
Library (22)
Workout Room (17)
Pool w/wave function (10)
>Entertainment
Skylight (9)
Mirror Stand (7)
>Services
Medical Care w/birth control (4)
Spa (0)

Sounds like a nice vacation to me

7 years, real sister
Onii-sama
Protective
Gloomy, Clingy, Genius, Mature, Inept, INEPT
Waking up, hugging, bapping
Indoors, Park, Restaurant
Shorter, flat, noble, thick, scrawny, pale, unorthodox
To be important
Gullible
Glasses, good smile

My imouto is very smart and tries very hard to be grown up but is not very good at life stuff and relies much on her older brother and friends to help her along. She may be a genius but she is unable to direct that genius into productivity without a little help.

Patrician.

Really? I'm pretty sure I have every waifu cyoa posted to Veeky Forums in the last year and looking through, I can't find any. The only one that maybe fits is pic related, but even that's a stretch, because it's basically a lewd cyoa.
Can you remember in which the direction those cyoas went?

Maybe we disagree on what is and isn't lewd? That's basically the only explanation I can think of.

>Glory Hole
>Wizardchan account For the dating website and potential magic dumps
>Meme Machine I'll use this fucker to get worthwhile information from Wizardchan. Beware my sorcery
>Five Year Apprenticeship

Lets have some fucking fun.

Tfw you get an idea for a CYOA just because you wanted to put specific waifus in it.

>Create memes to bait magic dumps
That is brillant

I legit wondered why no one else ever thought of it with the 100 times I've posted that cyoa.

There are only 4 good options

Oh hey, a fellow connoisseur of CBPWC

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Because it's insipidly obvious, like asking why nobody thinks of sex in a waifu CYOA just because nobody mentions the obvious

>mfw I see urinary incontinence in the drawbacks section

user, some questions:

* If you stay 20 years, does the Veggies option stop your aging for that whole time, or still just 10 years?

* If you take the education option, do you get verified degrees that you can use in the world once you are done? Or do you just learn the stuff with nothing to back it up?

And some suggestions:

For companions, at the beginning, I would suggest a "Any human companion you choose will have agreed to participate in the experiment for their own reasons", to clear up that situation.

A cheap option for literally just pens/pencils & paper would be good, for those that want to write.

That's more than many other cyoas desu

I want a Mahou Inu and a Solar Spitz! What's the favor for two?

These dogs seem pretty benevolent, so I don't think I need any of the items to control or restrain them. I'll take the Godsborn Sandals, Mellow Flowers, and a Subspace Backyard (which could obviously hold a lot more than a Bandolier of Holding).

You know what's odd. There's entire mangas and stuff dedicated to very niche genres and despite the obvious inspiration cyoa pull out of manga the same cannot be said about cyoas. There are no dedicated tennis, chess, Go, football, etc. cyoas. In fact there's not really a sports or art for that matter (opera, dancing, etc.) genre within cyoas.

Why is that?

It's less vague and more ... open? Definitely doesn't feel as restricting as the other options, while still providing a good amount of information on the character.
Also, she seems like a nice, cute person and doesn't come with questionable stuff a lot of the others do.

>13 year difference
>Real sister
>First name both times
>Friendly, Lustful
>Tomboy, Clingy, Lewd, Genius, Mature, Kind, Mature, Submissive, Nurturing, Genki, Popular,
>Sleeping, Bathing, Kissing, Hugging, Hand holding, Stalking, Nibbling.
>Indoors
>Shorter
>Flat
>Cute
>Thick
>Normal
>Fair
>Unladylike
>To be with you
>Amnesia, Guillable, NEET, Bullying, Catfight
>Pure white
>Plump lips, Good smile
>None
My Dream is to have a much younger, popular yet nerdy Imouto who Ill have to introduce me to all her little friends, creating a loli harem.

I think the people here tend to be less athletically gifted. Also, I really don't know how you would even go about such a cyoa. Just imagining to be playing sports sounds pretty boring desu and it's not like you could actually provide an actual story.

>Girl in Kingdom of the Reach
>The Smile with Advanced Education -1 Blessing
>Animal Companion, Targaryen Blood, Touched By Magic, Grace And Beauty, and Valar Morghulis -4 Blessings
>Ashara Hewett
>Chains and Without A House +2 Blessings

>be long lost Targaryen who inherited unhatched dragon egg
>get captured and sold into slavery, but not before burying dragon egg
>get training to be pleasure slave and learn how to manipulate people
>escape and dig up dragon egg
>bump into Ashara and convince her of my royal heritage, might be easier after dragon egg hatches
>marry somebody with a army who wants to be king and would have better claim if they married a Targaryen
>Valar Morghulis my biggest rival (probably Dany or Cersei)
>raise dragon to be big and use it to help in quest
>take over with army and dragon and become Queen
>feed husband to dragon and take charge, proclaim myself Empress

Hikaru no Go style. You find a "cursed" chess board haunted by the loli ghost of a chess grandmaster. She insists on teaching you. You'd choose how much time you'd dedicate to playing and learning chess with her. Where you spend your time playing. Who you befriend within the chess community. Etc.

Would something like that not work?

because chess isn't a fucking genre you idiot, there's no story

actually there WAS a pretty good chess CYOA, so fuck you

If you have a the ghost of a loli chess grandmaster it better have a grudge with a chess computer that defeated her

I want a VN about chess now and at least 4 waifus each with their own route.

>Get assassinated by pissed off nobles within half a year.

I mean, that sounds more like a chess-themed waifu cyoa than a 'real' chess cyoa, but I guess it could work. Still, I doubt we have a lot of chess aficionados around here, so if you want something like that, you probably would have to work on it yourself.

A straight up sports cyoa just doesn't really work imo, because sports manga and so on depend on the whole having matches and potentially rising up. That doesn't really translate to cyoas, I think.

>already have a dog and he's the best
oh well

They can't assassinate me if they're dragon food. Old nobles would be replaced with a whole new class of nobility that was loyal to me from early on.

1) Grandmaster cut down in her prime by 2) AI hologram, who is being challenged by 3) shogi expert who has started playing chess exclusively for ~mysterious reasons~, and 4) childhood friend and only-other-chess-clubmember who is somehow also an incarnation of the original deity that bestowed chess upon humans.

Missing anyone? Maybe one of those chessboxing people as an athletic tomboy?

Then, instead of old nobles, you get assassinated by your former followers. Not much of a difference.

You forgot about the alternative route with the young russian chess genius boy.

>chessboxing
i-is this a joke sport?

Why? I helped them become nobles in the first place and rewarded them well for their service!

It's very serious

only if it's a russian chess genius boy (female)

Can we fuck him and or is he legal?

>Chessboxing was invented by Dutch performance artist Iepe Rubingh. What was initially only thought to be an art performance quickly turned into a fully developed competitive sport. Chessboxing is particularly popular in Germany, Great Britain, India and Russia.
Have you ever shitposted so hard you invented a sport?

CYOAs =/= manga

Reeeeee im in direct contact with fujo goddess don't test me

Russian boys were made for loving. It would be a crime not to fuck him.

Sounds like every time someone loses a piece the other punch him in the face

>If you stay 20 years, does the Veggies option stop your aging for that whole time, or still just 10 years?
The effect from Veggies stop the aging for 10 years, regardless. No scaling intended here.

>If you take the education option, do you get verified degrees that you can use in the world once you are done? Or do you just learn the stuff with nothing to back it up?
-Both. Can definitely get verified degrees if that's your goal, or simply learn about stuff just for fun.

>Suggestions:
Thanks for the suggestions user. I do intend to clarify that companion thing for the next update. And will add more options to choose from in the near future.

Trying to brainstorm, anons, for Altering History 2.0

I'd like to have different options for how many points that you start with (Mysterious Stranger, Figure of Legend, and Deity Descended, at least), but am having trouble coming up with a reason an user would choose fewer points (other than the challenge of it, which is rarely motivating to this group).

I already plan to "restrict" MP to the first two, but other suggestions are welcome.

Because if you purge an entire class of nobility, you are clearly unstable. Furthermore, if you marry someone and then kill them when they are no longer useful, you are clearly not trustworthy.

Furthermore, you cannot kill all the nobles. Just one dragon is not enough to deal with literally every noble out there united against you.

>Reeeeee im in direct contact with fujo goddess don't test me
Make them finish their WIP.

I know a solution that is guaranteed to start a shitstorm. How about the more points user starts with, the less human he is, hence the less he can understand and communicate with them? Like, divine autism.

>Reeeeee im in direct contact with fujo goddess don't test me
I don't think this goddess of yours holds much power in these lands. At least, I haven't seen her do anything here.

The fujo goddess failed half her finals because she was distracted and accidentally read a few dozen M/M romance novels. Now the forces that be have taken her computer until she passes her resits in september. If she fails again, it's an arranged marriage.

I'll have an army assisting me. It won't just be a dragon. By the time I kill my husband, it will be to late to stop.

That's no good. You can't pretend to be something you can't even imagine. Even if you could imagine it, it's doubtful you'd enjoy it because of not understanding it.

>not a single cyoa includes a cute cross-dressing tomboy
this is what it must feel like to be a fujoposter

>trying to use logic against The Mother of All Sues
Better men than you have tried, and lost

You sound like a horrible person.

>trying to use logic to dictate how someone else's personal wish fulfillment imagination game should play out

Mhhhhhnmmmm

There are no better men here.

maybe if you're a "figure of legend" you have to play to your heroic archetype, and a demigod needs to keep track of their domains and enforce them when required?

Speak for yourself, bitch.

Not worse than anyone else vying for power in ASoIaF.

If you were better, you wouldn't be here.

Greetings and welcome to Veeky Forums. Here's your Ebola Cola. We're all horrible people around here.

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If you want to modify the rules and just imagine whatever you want, you're absolutely free to do so. It's just that posting about it in the thread is really damn annoying, because nobody cares about your shitty stories loosely based on a cyoa.