Accidental Magical Girl CYOA

Typically, my mahous use a small benediction as their transformation phrase. The appeal to higher power implicit in it becomes something like an appeal to the puchuu, though; a small reminder to whom they owe their powers to, making a loyalty pledge of sorts every time they go into costume.

How do you name your Puchuu or pick your higher powers?

Soul jars can't talk silly, but it can emit a sequence of lights!

You're reading it for H.P., aren't you user?
sleeplessdomain.com/comic/chapter-1-cover

She is the best girl, so duh.
I've honestly gotten a little sick of that kind of mahou shoujo, but the twist at the end of the first act still floored me and was well-executed imho.

>not reading for HP

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I keep telling myself I'll have the first few chapters of my writefagging done by the time the next thread comes around, but I never do. Help

You can do it! I believe in you! I have a mountain of notes and nothing to show for it. Be better than me!

Thanks for the encouragement. Maybe I'll have my writing down next time this thread comes around.

Gravity is my favourite specialization.

>"...insistin' on a fistin'."
>"Gottam!"
>"CRAAAAAWLING IIIINNNN MY SKIIIIINNN!!!!"

Get off your ass and write more or I'll have you chased down and beaten into compliance.

Indeed.

Y-yes sir!

communists get out reee

Poorly. I typically name them after an object in my sight. The benediction tend to be based off some Catholic prayer to a patron saint of something relevant to the character.

I was thinking about writing something based on this CYOA but with a 'historical fantasy' setting instead of the urban fantasy that's assumed by the PDF. 'Someone accidentally kills a AMGCYOA MG way before anyone's built a skyscraper or car.' is kind of the premise. Good idea or bad idea, I have no idea, but I wanted to get some feedback on it and some things that I wasn't sure about.

(Though, last time I read the PDF the only origin was accidental death-by-car, so maybe my knowledge is a little iffy.)

Like, how does the Overcity change? Does it change at all, or does it transcend time in that overarching way that it does space? IS there an Overcity when the world is less urban, or is the world overlaid by an Overforest or Oversteppe or something until the industrial revolution, since those are the two 'primeval' biomes?

Should the Puchuu keep their sort of 'magical alien' sci-fi feel or should I just write them like spirits or magical beings? I mean, the 'magical alien' thing is because current readers liken them to Kyubey, but should I write from the historical perspective instead, or play off the tension of how the reader perceives them vs. how the character does...?

I've got a few other things, but that's probably good enough for now.

Rolled 1, 11, 9, 16, 19, 16, 17, 12, 2, 9, 1, 5 = 118 (12d20)

Considering the whole multiverse thing I think this could totally be incorporated, which I wouldn't mind seeing.

Go for it- very little is set in stone, and the improtant thing is atmosphere!

Write what works- the Overcity is arguably in the eye of the beholder anyway, and Puuchu can be anything you want.

Looking forward to seeing your ideas!

no

Whatever is the worst possible time pun she can think of at the moment.
>You're out of time!
>Time-out!
>Give me a second!

And so on. When you're a Time specialist with a frankly absurd amount of MAG, nobody can stop you from acting like a little shit. Except other time specialists.

Bump

Or anti-magic, at which point pun-ishment commences.

A fair point, assuming they can antimagic me before I timestop and drop an armory on their ass in the style of best meguca.

Whoops, forgot a time pun in this post. Just needed a moment to think of one.

Spend Silver Coin to be age 16

Average (Agi +1)

Str to 6 (2 bronze)

Vit to 6 (1 silver)

Mag to 9 (1 bronze, 1 gold)

Rolled Sound as specialization, +1 AGI (now 6), +2 Mag (now 11), +1 LCK (now 5)

Used Bronze Coin to turn weapon roll 9 into 13 for Mystic Weapon, +1 Magic (now 12)

Outfit roll of 9, Flowing (+1 Str, now 7)

Rolled 9 for Special Power, got Barrage

Combat Perk 6, +1 AGI (now 7), Flexibility +1 AGI, (now 8)

Support Perk 6, Incognito, used Silver Coin to shift roll to 13, +1 LCK (now 7), Masculinity (I don't want to be a girl, I want to fuck them)

Combat Perk 10, Hammerspace Handbag

Support Perk 19, +1 LCK (now 6), A Way Out, +1 LCK (now 8)

Support Perk 20, Fake Parents (How is this supposed to be a perk? How would it even work? Would they be deluded into treating you as a 16 year-old forever? Living rent free without having to do anything is nice, but with creepy people who think they're your parents, while being forced to attend high school despite being an immortal being of immense magical power? What the fuck?), used Silver Coin to change to Eternal Style

Final Stats

> Age 16
> STR 7
> AGI 8
> VIT 4
> MAG 12
> LCK 8
> Sound Specialization
> Flowing Outfit
> Special Power: Barrage
> Perks: Flexibility, Masculinity, Hammerspace Handbag, A Way Out, Eternal Style

I'm a handsome-ass magical boy. By day, I'm a pop star, talented singer, and experimental musical artist. But by night, I fight evil creatures with the power of MUSIC!

People will probably constantly call me gay for carrying a handbag around. Everything else about my outfit will be 'stylin, though.

>sound specialization
nice

Rolled randomly for it, but I dig it anyway. I'd play nothing but Future Funk.

youtube.com/watch?v=ET6657PH9gQ

Well, it does make sense for there to be regions of the Overcity that represent other biomes. After all, the CYOA does mention that people sometimes go through the Overcity on the way home from work without realising that they've actually left their own city. If there are other universes where people are living in a lower technological state, it seems reasonable for there to be areas of the Overcity that look the same anyway

Any twin soul mahous around?

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dice+12d20

Rolled 13, 14, 12, 10, 2, 7, 17, 8, 11, 13, 20, 12 = 139 (12d20)

Ah, I fucked up. Didn't mean to quote either.

>9 years old
>Average
>Light
>Ranged
>Skimpy
>Focused Assault
>Wings
>Disguise Artifact
>Big Backpack
>Masculinity
Stopped right there. Dropped.

How much have these even changed in the past year?

All of the different documents have been updated and tweaked, and the communities are doing well. Feel free to drop in?

Rolled 1, 12, 11, 8, 14, 8, 2, 19, 11, 18, 12, 8 = 124 (12d20)

>age 7
>Average +1Vit/Agi
>Illusion
>ranged weapon
>Elaborate outfit
>focused assault
>martial training
>Awareness
>Big Backpack
>Eternal Style
then either Natural Aging or Enhanced Outfit with the bog standard patron

This screams Child Soldier to me. does it do that for anyone else?

Rolled 2, 1, 1, 7, 11, 15, 18, 1, 9, 16, 12, 17 = 110 (12d20)

More than other Magical Girls? I guess a bit, yeah.

Rolled 6, 11, 10, 1, 18, 11, 7, 17, 17, 12, 11, 6 = 127 (12d20)

Rate my monstrous girl, chums. Also requesting art that might fit this build. Pic related is the best I have. Something skimpy and bestial preferred.

Smug

Age: 16
Body: Average (+1VIT)
Spec: Darkness (+2STR, +1VIT)
Weapon: Fist (+2STR)
Outfit: Skimpy (+1AGI)
Power: Regeneration

Perks:
Monstrous Metamorphasis (+2STR,VIT,AGI ***)
Wings
Interdimensional home
Money
Eternal style

Stats:
STR - 10 (1silver)
AGI - 8 (1bronze)(1silver)
VIT - 8 (2bronze)
MAG - 4
LCK - 4

>Purge/10

Boss, are you okay?
Come back to us safely

If nobody's gonna do anything, might as well post muh build.

>Bloodline

>Age: 9
>Underdeveloped, bronze coin
>Time
>Ranged
>Elaborate, spent bronze coin
>Hammerspace
>Enhanced Sustenance
>Big Backpack (rolled 11 twice)
>Absolute Direction
>Training
>Sorcery

>Stats:
>Str: spent bronze coin to up to 5
>Agi: 6
>Vit: 5
>Mag: spent Gold coin, 3 silvers, and a bronze to bring up to 18
>Lck: 6

Yes, I dumped most of my coins into one stat, but that doesn't matter when I can mess with time harder than a black hole with a time turner.

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Rolled 17, 13, 20, 14, 5, 17, 8, 8, 14, 20, 1, 17 = 154 (12d20)

Might as well post my old build.
Rolled 5, 10, 9, 5, 15, 12, 6, 6, 1, 11, 4 = 84 (11d20)
A death!
Age: 11
Body type: Average
Specialization: Sound
Weapon: Mystic
Outfit: Elaborate
Power: Power of Friendship
Table 1 Perks: Flexibility
Table 2 Perks: Incognito, Interdimensional Tourist, Big Backpack, Training
Now to get on that writing I said I'd do.

Fenrir (Shingeki no Bahamut)

Sen (Granblue Fantasy)

"I will become Nep-Nep!"

Hmmm. What's a good source of inspirational art for mahous?

aka: mods are asleep, post meguca