CYOA GENERALLY

Where the fuck Highlander gone?

To CYOA General, which is not here.

Making travelleler 2.0 i guess.

How does it feel to be terminally autistic?

In Exile until Traveller 2.0 is finished.

But when will that be?

Who knows. Apparently in addition to reworking all the companions and a bunch of the worlds WWE getting replaced with the Kaiserreich timeline. She's also reworking a bunch of the lore to make everything consistent with the actual Traveller novel.

She's writing a NOVEL? Fuck man, as much good as could be said about traveler, the writing was by far the weakest point.

And that is why it's getting a rewrite user. She's apparently revised the novel three times now.

What it needs is another writer.

I wouldn't believe you
but I want to

Oh so you've read the novel draft yourself then?

>GENERALLY
Jesus christ how do you mess up copy-pasting

I don't need to.

So. Youre saying you havent read something, and without knowing what youre talking about it already needs to be changed? Even though you've got know idea what it is?

I've read enough.

Nigger you haven't read it.

I think you're being purposefully obtuse.

And I think you're talking shit about something you haven't read.

I'm talking shit about a writer who can't write. As you know perfectly well, you sperg.

Alright so ignoring the fact your still judging something you've never read. What do you consider "a writer who can't write"? Ignoring the whole writing 200+ page CYOA Or if you want me to be more specific than your jaded ass what do you consider a good writer and a bad writer?

I'm not ignoring the 200+ page CYOA, it's exhibit A.

We're all terminal. Some of us just expedite the process.

Why didn't you didn't answer my other question user? I'm trying to figure out your issue and your scuttling along with 10 words or less answers. It's not very helpful.

By not doing it.

>I'm trying to figure out your issue
Why?

Because Highlander says criticism is helpful. If you want to call her shit tell me why so I can fully understand your point and pass off advice. Simply saying someone is shit isn't all that helpful.

You should believe it, user. It'll be fun.

Because her writing is annoying and cringeworthy.

So why is it "Annoying and cringeworthy"?

Because it annoys me and makes me cringe.

So why does it annoy you and make you cringe?

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Sorry, but I'm not willing to go back and read it again to write down all the reasons now.

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So "Shit for reasons I can't remember?" You're real helpful at criticism.

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Tell me skeleton. Why do humanized Pokemon have a military?

Anyone wanna hook a boi up with the updated Monster Hunter?

No.

You know why. There can only be one.

What was the name of that fighter jet cyoa?

fighter jet cyoa

Is there a new version for this? Why some classes are gender locked?

Did ZBG ever finish Guardians?

yes it's on page 3 of fortune cookies (the one nobody reached)

Currently working on the Abilities Section of Page 2, which is the densest part of the CYOA.
10 down, 50 to go.

Sweet. Don't forget that that user said you are gifted a free waifu in the after life for your good deeds to /cyoag/ citizens.

Hey StonedCelt, can you lewd spirits other than the Frisky Hound? Either during or after the dream

So what do you people like in waifu (CYOA's)? I genuinely don't know.
What traits do you like, what do you want the waifu to reveal (like age or political view or whatever)?
I have no idea but I see some that are walls of text that are loved and some are small that are loved... and some are completely ignored.

>So what do you people like in waifu (CYOA's)?

I actually don't, for the most part. Some of Sandra's are ok, but it's less about the waifus for me and more about what they're offering me. If a CYOA has more than a few choices for companions I find it overwhelming and honestly I skip over that section entirely unless they offer more than "This person will be your friend/fuck you/fight alongside you"

make sure to include the perfect modest girl who's a bit shy but for some reason has a crush on the player and will love him deeply and, obviously, undonditionally

This CYOA is a bit sad looking, it lacks warm colors.

The picture is the biggest part for me, I've always left my dick in charge of picking waifus. Beyond that as long as they're not a dom or pandering to a weird fetish they're alright with me

be a fire mage then

This really tickle my autistic sense.

Building the greatest city guard. No monster or criminal scums shall ruin the peace and prosperity of the city I get posted in. If duty calls, my build strife on combat against other battlemages

Name: Odric
>Human
>Sentinel
>>Mind, Charisma, Clarity
>Aegis

Weapon&Shield
>Knight sword
>Wand
>Dagger
>Shield Catalyst
>Square Shield

Spells & Etch
>Lightning
>>Energy Siphon, Energy focus
>Nature 3
>>Weapon Etch 1: Neurotoxins
>Time
>>Haste, Armor Etch 1: Petrify

Guild
>Ixbrium Circle

Companions
>Roseia Joceus -2
>Theo Laine -3
One gave passive buff by singing, one is ranged attacker.

Quest:

>Novice
>>City Guard
STOP RIGHT THERE YOU CRIMINAL SCUMS!
>>>Rewards Purchase:
Time magic: Post Haste, Sequence, Weapon Etch 1: Neurotoxins
Companion: Roseia +1 Magical Skill, Theo +1 Physical skil, +1 Magical Skill
Horse

>Intermediate
>>Excellence
I am proud of my endurance, so Endurance Stand-Off. Also 3v3 pvp. Also dueling. Time stop + neurotoxins = win.
>>>Rewards Purchase:
Time magic: Ouroboros, Post
Shadow: Weapon Etch 2: Vorpal
Lightning: Armor Etch 2: Energy Harvest
Companion: +Osgood Polham,
Mount: Nightweb

>Expert
>>Hunted
Joining the assault team rather than scouting.
>>>Rewards Purchase
Time magic: Stop, Spell Rewind, Stasis, Possibilities, Weapon Etch 3: Double Time
Companion: Dismiss Roseia and Theo, +Briana Dhulcain, +Bruce Ironstark
Mount: no change

>Heroic
>>Sanity
Most of the problem can be fixed with Time magic. Surviving 500-meter drop: Use Post, or Osgood's Ascension
Endless horde and entrance guardian: Briana and Bruce's work.
Time Stop to find Aurachild and Det-Ves's shield problem, including Stasis and Sequence. Osgood to deal with her acoustic magic.
Reward: Elemental mount. The rest put to wherever as the world's saved.

And so here it is. The short and simple story of Odric. From a humble city guard to the world's savior.

This was more complex than it looked like at first, but I am satisfied now. Except the choice between Arcane Knights and Draconic Apostles. Not ascending to the throne was intentional to keep a low profile so smaller numbers would help, but too small a number might be a problem, also, the Arcane Knights should be more versatile and have a better synergy with everything else.

Descendant of Angels
Kidnapped yes
+1c
Wounded Predator tended
Peaceful Days

22+ 6n 0-

8+ -> 4n

>Childhood Training

Clerical Training III 6+
(-1 discount CT)
Restricted Knowledge I 2+
Restricted Tomes II 6+
Magical Training II 8n
(-1 discount MT)
Investigative Mind 2n

>Childhood Companions
Charlie
Fie

>Childhood Challenge
Relics of the Ancients
(10+ 5n)

>Teenage Events

Grand Festival of Light
(-1 discount +)
Magnificent Masquerade alone
Day in the Fields kindness
(+2f)

20+ 9n 0-

10+ -> 5n

>Teenage Training
Clerical Training II 2+
Restricted Knowledge I 3+
Restricted Tomes II 5+
Magical Training fire water air electricity light 11n
Investigative Mind 2n
Childhood Freedom of Movement 1n

>Teenage Companion
Alice

>Medal
Matia
(-1 discount MT)

>Teenage Challenge
Teleportation Troubles
(+2f 11+ 5n)

Did not Ascend

>Adult Companion
Aenella

26+ 5n 0-

6+ -> 3n

>Adult Training
Clerical Training II 5+
Restricted Knowledge 4+
Restricted Tomes II 10+
Magical Training II 4n
Investigative Mind 4n

4f+4f=8f

>Alliances
None

>Military
Arcane Knights 4f Draconic Apostle
Arch Wizard 4f

>Final Quests
Charlie
Fie
Aenella

lel

Hurry up

Why is she so perfect /CYOA GENERALLY/?

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Just stop, you're probably the lowest-quality author behind tok.

Thanks. I'm doing ok, just dealing with RL stuff. No idea what's up with SDA, guess I'll find out as I go through the archives.

Thats a great Crabssant image and an interesting build. Glad you enjoyed it.

Does kind of make you hungry. Unaussprechlichen Kulten was the actual name used by lovecraft or suggested by him to one of his writing circle authors...german or somesuch for unknown cults. It, like the food is quite a mouthful.

>Dont you mean Craftloaveian?
Ok that's good.
>I presume humans count as animals.
Are people sapient, heh. For the first part yes, second part no.
>I can unanimate them too right?
No, you can't unaimate them. They're weird, maybe useful, possibly disturbing powers.
>but I bet it'd be great for reading contracts.
That it would be. Good use right there.
>Chaotic Headlights. Is this even a downside?
Aerolas all around you, including yours suddenly glowing for a time? Like that's not going to cause panic?
>I mean the nice lady gave
Nice old man, but yeah.

and now back to lurking.

>No idea what's up with SDA
Something about you disliking him for whatever reason?

I just dislike shitposting and image-spamming in general, which has been going on for a long time by various people, so outside of that I don't have an issue with SDA. Where did he/anyone get that idea?

Just be careful, I think SDA wants to put it in your ass.

ZBG, your CYOAs are passable. I'm just very angry you used Slayer in Zodiac Brides.

>passable
Understating it

Those are not even from the same person

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I'd put it in his ass

>Mordred
She seems like such a nice girl.

>CCZ
M-muh diick, he can't handle this.

>cow Z
I'm going crazy because cow Z looks buff. But I know that's wrong.

>reverse trap
Eh. I'd hit it. Seems the type to religiously clean herself out just so you could plow her ass, so no loss there.

>Red Pill
I only consume the nectar of the Gods, there are no downsides here!

Well, it inspired me to make a thing.

Patrician taste in both drinks and anime girls, user.

OC

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Dreamer's refuge is OP as fuck you become literally god

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