/cyoag/ - CYOA General

I really liked this OC from last thread

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Empty With Possibilities can kill you. That's all I'm saying.

Did someone finally make the author waifu OC they've been talking about for months?

Fuck off

There have been several. You'll need to be more specific.

The good one, you know?
The faster you post it the faster I can go back to not being here.

What killed /cyoag/?

There's two threads right now.

we did

Didn't get to post them all a few threads ago, so dumpan a fav of mine.
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>The good one
Say no more

But I hate this one

It slices, it dices, it can cook a panini in half the time of the leading brands, it's OC!

And here's the mystery book.
I may make a CYOA expanding on a setting like this

Also criticism welcome.

>Name
Vin Trezoq
>Sex
Male
>Race
Human
>Background
Frontierman - Adopted by a nice Elven couple when I was just a babe. It was a good childhood though I could have gone without bears eating our food.
>Mentor
Balaki - His tales of taking down underwater monsters but yet inspires me.
>Path
Warden - Someone has to keep the peace.
>Skills
Herbalism - Expert
Hunting - Expert
Mobility - Expert
Ranged Combat - Intermediate
Survival - Intermediate
Melee Combat - Basic
>Primal Magic
Aspects - Expert
Shamanism - Expert
Protection - Intermediate
Imbuement - Intermediate
>Favoured Terrains
Mountains - (mountains, foothills, and volcanoes)
Forest - (forests, jungles, and swamps)
A child of Nature through and through.
>Favoured Enemies
Ettins and Beasts
Brutes who need to be kept in line.
>Outpost
-Garden and Grove
Grow some grapes and have a real grand time.
>Trial
-Kill the Aurochs
What could go wrong?
>Artifact
-Stick of Walking
The life of a Warden is a hard one. This would help immensely.

anyone mind posting road trip?

Am I right in assuming that that's based off The World Ends With You and/or Kill la Kill mixed with Jojo's Bizarre Adventure?
Anyway, it's pretty good overall, with no one choice that stands out among the others. Good job.

Actually, would anyone else end up buying from the magic bookstore, even if you'd never see them?

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>Spoiler
Right on the money.

>Actually, would anyone else end up buying from the magic bookstore, even if you'd never see them?
Certainly. Though after your first visit, you'd never be able to find it again, you could probably find some of visitors to the Traveling Quill. I think of it as like a store that teleports around the world/other worlds, entered only by a few lucky people.

God like skill for dummies
I just wanna be real good at art

I really like this user :)

Frontiersman
Balaki
Warden
Herbalism 3
Hunting 2
Mobility 3
Stalking 3
Ranged Combat 1
Survival 1
Crafting 1

Shamanism 3
Hexes 3
Primalism 2
Protection 1
Mountain (Free)
Forest, Sporelands
Fey, Witches
Lodge, Garden
Defend the Town
Stick of Walking

Ranger? Feh. I'm a witch. Plain and simple. It doesn't matter what you call me.
Still. Anyone willing to do me a spot of help would be appreciated.
There's dark things in this world. The spot of wilderness I keep is a place where that sort of thing dwells. I'm doin' what my mum, my grandma, and every single girl found by the current witch of these woods has done.
Keeping whats in these woods in, and whats out of these woods out.
It's just a shame modern word travels so rightfully quick. Now I have to make myself useful, and heal peoples booboos do people don't think I'm evil myself.

Can I unironically say that this is a top quality cyoa?
May it be remembered fondly and always get a (You).

I must say, I find difficulty picking between "long journey" and "fruity drink". The former would finally allow me to escape the confines of life and discover news worlds of wonder that I can adventure through, finally finding the perfect world and settling down. The latter allows me to cheat reality and ascend to my own happiness, but I would still be on this boring ass planet. One guarantees fortune and fulfillment, the other a release of reality's ass suckage with a slim chance at greatness.
In the end, I shall take the drink. If it can truly make all my ambitions reality, whats to say I can not science my way out of the universe?

3_tankista meant for it to be just the gold costs, but when an user asked if it halved stat requirements he said sure. So basically halve the stats and maybe the gold.

Actual thread here

I'd rather not

This one has OC posted that the other one doesn't, as well as being almost twice as large.

Let the fucking thing die.

so do I only choose one of those functions for my super speshul mutant eyes to have, or can they do all of those

anyone have the other bug gfs?

Dat is all

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these all reflect on unhealthy relationships with girls.

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>House Husband & Stress Relief
>Jessica
>Enhanced Skeleton, Pheromones
>Medilab, Gym, Radar, Gadgets
>Stay In
I'm just happy to be able to do something to help humanity, even as useless as I am.

Tok shouldn't you be on runescape or some other dumb shit

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Extension of the earlier question: how much do the books cost? Because given their nature I’d give the man a year of my life, a pint of my blood, and a promise to do him a favor for another book.

They cost precisely "More than you can scrounge up before midnight".

Each book, if you want to get an estimate, would normally cost an entire fiddle made of gold.

Good thing he decided to give you one free, eh?

very nicely done, user
I'll take the drink

could use a bit of work, but i like whats there.

Ah yes, my fusion of Berserk and WW2 with a dash of the Belgian Congo.

Fantasy Nation Builder will be done soon. Very, very soon. Next thread I think.

I hope it changes the opinions that I rehash the same choices again and again.

Fiddle? God damn it Satan, out of my head.

>Mutant Jungle
>Bunker Baby
>Psychic Powers: Antitelepathy 180
>Resiliant 160 (+8 Combat)
>First AiderPlaying Doctor: Free
>I'm a Scientist: Free
>Happy Merchant: Free
>Tactical Insight 150
>Fightn' dirty 143
>Vulture 131
>Shield: Special Materials+Tower: 111.
>Revolver 103
>Airship, Solar 46
>Loadsamoney: Free
>Spare Parts: 36
>Costner-brand Recycler+Desalinator: 9
>Hand-Made Light Armor 3
>Luxury Item: My MtG collection 2
>Luxury item: My collection of books that don't contain information that might otherwise be useful 1
>Luxury Item: My hard drive of porny images and doujins, on a limitless, recharging medium, that is utterly incapable of being harnessed for anything useful

>Seraphim
>Lilly Mitchell
Mr Fusion: Free
>Lizzy LeChance
>Shylock

I got rigged up in a sort of time capsule experiment by some eggheads to see how much society had actually progressed in 100 years. 400 years later, I wake up and the world is a mess. Fortunately, for some awesome reason, the facility I was lodged in had an airship in the hangar, so I managed to assclown it into the air, and take to the wasteland.
It turns out that knowing what shit is is a valuable trait in the wasteland, to the point that even a waste of space like me becomes a hot commodity. I maintain a travelling superstore/dungeoneering enterprise from the safety of my floating turbomansion.
My easygoing and non-desperate demeanor, combined with modern ideals of not being a dick have caused my flying circus to become something of a haven for refugees who just want to be left alone. Chief among these are a number of wasteland women who want to not deal with that facet of reality. Of course, what started as a makeshift home for battered wasteland women turned into Seraphim's personal brothel in exchange for loot, security, and not punching me in the face.
Oh, and Shylock. He's a cool dude. Makes me want to puke a bit, but he knows I don't mean it.
We're buds, even if he always plays Red/Blue control. Asshole.

>limiting bliss
all you need lmao

Good stuff!!!
BACKGROUND
>Street Urchin (favter: urban)
MENTOR
>Tesera (favskl: mobility/survival/herbalism favpow: protection/primalism)
PATH
>Warden (+2 favter +2 favenm)
SKILLS
>mobility 2 >survival 3 >handling 2 >melee 2 >crafting 3 >herbalism 1
PRIMAL
>primalism 3 >companion 2 >shamanism 3 >protection 2
COMPANION
>primeval >mystical
TERRAIN
>wastelands >oceanic
ENEMIES
>ettins >humans
OUTPOST
>turtle
TRIAL
>Recover the Lost
ARTIFACTS
>Dragonslayer

>Fantasy Nation Builder will be done soon

Looking forward to it. Do you think you'll ever dust off that AITO redo? I think that was some of your best work.

Ttheres more to this cyoa, if i remember correctly

Thanks for spending time out of your day doing this for us. I really appreciate all the hard work you put in.

Hey guys. Working on my next cyoa and wanted to ask;
Does this sound like a good mix/amount for companions?

Try to have 5-7 for each faction, so about 50. Unaligned companions should be about 20-40. I have a lot of art I want to use. Different companion types include Support(Healers, alchemists, blacksmiths, etc.), Knights(People with power like yours), Suits(Normal citizens with a power suit like yours), and Comfort(Waifus and basic comfort providers like servants, merchants, cooks, etc.)

Not every cyoa needs a trap option user.

I can't say there's a problem.

I love it user

Can I get blacksmithing and/or enchanting powers? I'm a sucker for being a Smith and an Enchanter, being that asshole who makes the best gear.

One of the magic schools is enchanting, which can be adding attributes to works or even manipulating emotions.
And now that you mention it, maybe I should add I short thing to take a skill or two. Blacksmithing and alchemy for example.

Thank you greatly user. I dunno why but being able to make top-tier gear myself is just something I always go for in CYOAs.

>Looking forward to it. Do you think you'll ever dust off that AITO redo? I think that was some of your best work.
Really? I felt it was too videogame-esque, but perhaps I just can't stop scrutinizing my work.

I might. I am still undecided if I should remake my old CYOAs or begin anew.

And I thank you for your appreciation, it gives me drive to continue.

I'm done all the content now, proofreading and polishing time. I hope all the OC in this thread shines brightly.

I must say if you have the ability to write 50 different companions, you are a far better at making them than I am.

Anybody have beri's "New Adventurer" where you got skills, a new weapon, and a fairy?

This is incorrect.

Check the pastebin for Beri's drive or the mega drive.

Long journey, in search of a place where I matter and I'll stay

Only problem is my families hereditary depression and our motto
>No matter where you go , you'll always be there

How about the classics

>Name
Sergio Chadwick
>Setting
Mutant Jungle
>Character Archetype
Last Action Hero
>Abilities
Psychic Power - Telepathy
Pretty Face (Magnum Dong *free)
Resilient
Be Nimble, Be Quick
>Skills
Spray and Pray *free
C.f.Silent Tread
>Weapons
Knife (upgraded)
Whip (Electrified)
Automatic Rifle
Dart-gun
>Vehicle
Mutant Beast (size and empathetic bond)
>Equipment
Camouflage Gear
Personal Item (picture of mom n' dad)
Survival Gear
Praise the Lord & Pass the Ammunition *free
Animal Companion - Harpy Eagle (Well-trained)
>Companions
NG3-Florence
Ulysses Jones
Trapper Jack
Bill Wester
>Combat Rating: 17

Time for sexy jungle adventures.

One of My favorites

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> 2.0 Rumblings in the discord
Oh boy here we go again.

strawpoll.me/14441670

>Mission Control, Personal Assistant, Mechanic
>Coffee Shot, Multitasking
>Gym, Suit, Garage, Gadget, Med Bay
I work mostly as a nutritionist and butler, occasionally joining in mission control.

>Zoe
Honey, punch within your weight class. You want to go after Magneto you need to accept some level of modifications. You want to remain yourself, you can only go after Joe Sixpack stealing purses. I have been assigned to monitor your progress and steer you towards attainable goals.
>Celebration : Nothing
Personally, I'm in this just for a job and the possibility of happenstance empowerment to become a villain.

>Job Position
Mission Control, Personal Assistant
I work for the Hero Association as my agent's official handler. I'm the eye in the sky who makes sure missions are handled successfully and cleanly, although I do not answer to the press like the PR department (thankfully).

>Superheroine
Viscous
If any heroine needs someone keeping a friendly eye on her, it's Viscous. With my help, the HA is hoping to increase her effectiveness at recon work with a direct link to intel and backup. As well, we might be able to expand her abilities into other fields like search and rescue, disaster relief, and direct crimefighting.

>Enhancements
Coffee Shot, Multitasking, Trust Implant
These are practically required for my work. I need to be at 100% during a mission with enough left over to file all of the paperwork that my partner can't be expected to handle on her own yet. She's trying to learn about humanity. She doesn't need all that paperwork in the way.

>Extras
Recording Device (Free), Medlab, Garage, Gym
The medlab will help me run tests on her body and the garage and gym will help out with outfitting my surveillance equipment and keeping us both in shape.

>Celebration
Paint the town Red
We managed to destroy the walker tank and now it's time to get destroyed ourselves! I'll need to hold back though. The HA wants me to observe the booze's effect on her and help her through human celebrations. Although I'd rather be home with my animes.

>"The Traveling Quill" it was called
>"Hello, hello! Welcome to the Traveling Inkwell.
So which one is it?

hope the husbando cyoa being made has some BARA in it

The narrator is obviously high as shit. He's a bookstore owner for cryin' out loud.

I will try to put in options for all kinds of husbandos (all human kinds anyway, it probably won't have octopus husband's or whatever)

There isn't. It's a forever work in progress, the author returns on occasion to talk about quests but hasn't delivered anything else since May.

I'm pretty sure there was more of this cyoa, like a part with missions and stuff, to get more points I think