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Astolfo is a terrible character in an otherwise mediocre series.

requesting the story about an elf infestation that causes all the elf girls to give the guys too much attention

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>TFW no infestation of nice elves that end up assimilating normal people in to their ranks
why live?

CONTENT RAIN!

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Yeah, but that should all of it, except for the maps for missions.

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no, dark elves are for tender love and cuddling

nah man, elves are for the raping

Post CYOAs that aren't shit.

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Raping YOU not them

Idiot

What about this image user?
does it qualify?

only when they get bored

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No

Please contain your shitposting until I am no longer able to delete this thread

Racism and cultural misunderstandings!

Fucking brainwashed slaves. You too are for the raping

And this user?

>and dark elf is best girl in that series

>Fucking brainwashed slaves.
that too

Fair enough. Build will come once I figure out how this ties into everything else.

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Shoo

>fossil fuels
>inorganic
Goddammit that triggered me, also water is not organic.

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Delete it. Please.

What about this one?

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I don't actually know what's the limit for that

Tok desu

If it were the subject of the thread I'd gladly do this with you all day.
But you're eating up the image limit meant for cyoas.

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i think he was baiting you desu

mystery box ;^)

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You are transported to the world of the last fictional media you consumed (books/shows/games) with only the powers you gained from this cyoa. How do you do? Write 100 words or more and maybe it'll really happen.

Astolfo would never bait user, best boy does not bait innocent anons

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My hatred has no limit

You all suck so SO much

>isekai trash
ugh
That's not a diss on you, the last thing I consumed was Isekai trash coincidently enough.
What are some other cyoas that don't mention a specific world or setting?

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I'll take the white one thx

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Dva sounds cute, but so does Mercy

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purple and orange, play it safe

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so many shit cyoas

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stop posting shit cyoas

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>he continues to post shit

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Any waifu cyoa these past 2 weeks?

Still looking for more fantasy nation ideas! The regions will be:
>Britain
>France
>Germany
>Rome/Greece
>Scandinavia
>Russia
>China
>Mongolia
>Korea
>Northern Africa
>Southern Africa
>Southeast Asia

Also if any of the repliers last thread want to post pictures of waifus and husbandos I'd be open to taking them.

no

I have already outlined the changes I'll be making last thread, but I'll reiterate:
>simplified resource system
>two alliance system removed in favour of a region based one
>more waifus
>more magic and drawbacks
>drawbacks will now only give 1 magic
Any ideas you guys have will always be welcome.

Also does the intro feel right? I recall the thread after I first posted this had someone saying the idea of a Celestial Bureaucracy was a massive turn off.

I think that's all I wanted to cover.

give me a bit, ill have a build for you

Fantasy Brazil would be cool, a diverse empire full with tropical forests, with huge rivers running through them, titanic mountains and a considerable coastline. Vast, but disjointed, with relatively few actual people due to the lack of plains. Magical temples and warriors spitting poisonous darts and stuff. Some tribes believed that they could harvest the powers of jaguars, which they deified, maybe the fantasy versions can actually do that. I am to lazy to make a build right now though.

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Magocratic roman empire

aside from the idiocy about water being organic and fossil fuels inorganic
redeemer is clearly the best choice. It's the one that helps humanity the most and will give you an eternity of bliss. So I take that.
why hasn't this shitty meme been turned into an equally shitty CYOA yet?

Lol

First and formost give us fucking numbering on units, cut forces into defensive garrisons and fielded armies. Expand available fortifications and give us options to flesh out multiple cities. Have waifus or political marriages make sense. Cut down the power levels of magic, or possibly create a state religion system. Possibly cut out external nations altogether and have people make nations using the CYOA itself for the CYOA. Lastly reel in cost reductions you can have a billion fucking marines in the current setup.

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ooh, ooh
VOC-esque corporatist trading empire
with the merchants more powerful than the nobility

How the sections are separated and how the colors are used here is worse than holocaust

>Cut down the power levels of magic
U wot

Personally I really like how he did religion and magic, it really gives you the sense of a mythic, idealized version of some culture, balancing it to much could maybe get in the way of the experience. I would also vote for keeping the external nations

Alright, i just finished the new version of the first page of my Demigod CYOA, with the help of SDA's guides.
Apparently it's too large to put here so here's the link:

imgur.com/gallery/wgL2D

I think it looks alot better than the latest version of the old set (which i posted below the new version for comparison)

I was hoping for opinions and ideas for improvements? I don't want to move forward and make more until i get some feedback. I feel like the background is a little bland but i'm not sure what to put there.

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>yahweh above elder gods
he gets a lot of fanwank but really he fits best among the High Gods

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before coming here I checked out hajime no ippo ecause I see thread on /a/ all the time and wanted to see what it was all about.
So I guess I get into an almost exact copy of the real world but I get superpowers.So I do perfectly fine.
Pity because before that I was reading Lum.

For the God placement, i mostly went with a mix of:
-What they've done in their canon,
-their placement in their pantheon,
-how many followers they have

Since YHWH has so many goddamn followers, i put him at the top

In real life gods don't have followers though. Religions do.
Many of your gods are part of a pantheon, in which they would have a power ranking that's independent of their number of personal devotees.
Pluto didn't have much temples devoted to him, but at one point in history he was considered one-third of a triumverate that ruled everything.

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A very interesting CYOA! I'd probably go with:
>Low Graphics
>Highest Interactivity
>Medium Gameplay
>Lowest Sensations
>High Permanence
>Can You Feel It (Touch)
Great NPCs and a persistent timeline with decent gameplay. Low graphics don't matter if the world draws you in and I don't really need a sense of smell or taste as long as I can feel the impact of sword on shield and the cobblestones under my feet. Basically a lower-res Skyrim VR with tactile feedback and much better NPCs.

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That graphics is sort of ambigious. Once you get more abstract some mention of art direction becomes more necessary.

Reposting build
>Any lore on it?
I dont know if made it like japanese or egipcian, just want it to be kinda exotic.
The strong faith in the religion fits both themes, naval could be more of japanese, the desert defence more egipcian.
Martial culture is part of the religion, teached from childhood. They learn to be humble, they respect Fauna and Flora like equals (Druidic and Friendly magic). They are a pacific society that prefers the comfy of their fortress instead of go to war.

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>spend half an hour shooting overpowered naked poledancers in the dick

That Witcher jumpchain is wholly unrepresentative, we need to make a propper cyoa.