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i want to make a cyoa but i feel like is going to be bad

All of the CYOAs here are shit, don't even worry about that

People can respect an attempt to do something cool, but won't be forgiving to those who don't even try.

don't worry you're anonymous and there is a high probability it's not going to be as bad as some of the other cyoas posted here in the past

ill do it
ill make a cyoa

That's not the most up to date version, it doesn't have the fixes he made to the nurse and genie

So more comfy anime garbage?

Italics, how is progress in your CYOAs?
Are you finally posting witches n' inquisiton?

Pic related user, it is shit, but i made it with all my love and some anons loved it and some hated it, some thought it was a joke, but it's cool, i promise the greatest step is getting started

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Saber's trash
Fate/fags are embarrassing

Naw, fragmented bloodlines

Ok, what you want me to do?

So you are going to post Magi Bloodlines?

The hardest part is making your first cyoa. You kind of get all the advice you need in feedback from your first one, and then you can slowly feel out the next ones you make. They also come out faster as you learn your way around the program you use to create them.

Acquire taste

>some thought it was a joke
are you telling me it's _not_ a joke?

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My first CYOA was Nemesis.

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I wish you stuck with actual fantasy adventures instead of purely lewd shit

I can't, saber has been my wife for well over 4 years, i refuse to let go of her, i love her un-conditionally
It is whatever you want to interpret it as, when i made it made it for people to smile and have fun, if you want to take it as a joke it is perfectly fine

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Me? Unlikely. You'd have to ask Italics.

I was already asking Italics, but you answered.

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>I wish you stuck with actual fantasy adventures instead of purely lewd shit
But I like lewd shit.

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>wake up with a great idea (to me) for a cyoa
>realize my new pc doesn't even have photoshop yet
>realize it'd take me hours if not days to put the cyoa itself together
>realize I'll probably quit halfway and even if I finish it I'll get 10 (You)s and then it'll be forgotten like my other work

Why can't making cyoas be easier?

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Bazett > Saber

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We know you do, Tok. But sometimes the best thing for a creator is to get out of his comfort zone so he can grow and experiment with different concepts. It's part of the reason why people say your lewd cyoas are same-y.

>Toks CYOAs are samy
Compare this to....

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>gives tok an excuse to post not one but TWO of his cyoas
Jesus Christ mate, just, Jesus.

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>Compare this to....
this! And tell me with a straight face my CYOAs are samey.

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Have you tried CYOA Studio?
If what you can make with it isn't sufficiently fancy for you, you can always redo/touch-up the thing in Photoshop when you know what you want it to look like.

Different user, but they do tend to follow similar patterns. Design your body, design your world, pick your waifu (read: pick Zynthia whenever possible), lewd everything. Now, they're high quality, and I have no problem with them being similar in structure, but the other user does still have a point.

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To be fair most cyoas follow the same pattern, i just think tok should focus a little less on the lewd and he would be golden.

I tried this, and I ended up making the same cyoas as usual, fundamentally, just with a different structure. Being a two trick pony is hard.

Not only do they tend to follow a similar pattern, but they also contain a lot of the same options. Being that they're all lewd, the same options are always included because they're common fetishes. You'll always have a rape option, some kind of cum-fetish option, some kind of sissy option, some kind of bestiality or parasite option, some kind of hypnotism or mind control option, some kind of bimbofication option, some kind of transformation fetish option, some kind of monstergirl option, etc for every fetish under the sun. It becomes the same "pick your fetishes" cyoa with a new coat of paint. If the cyoas weren't all lewd you wouldn't have this sameness, because there'd be no reason to include the same options in every cyoa since they wouldn't all be lewd.

Let's try something different.

Which authors make the most varied of cyoas?

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>Being a two trick pony is hard.
No, it's not, pic related.

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I can only really think of The Lone Observer. The cyoas of his that I know of were very diverse inside themselves being that they had wildly different branching paths.

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Posting a CYOA that isn't shit

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Hello CYOAG. After a lot of work and several delays due to loss of motivation, I'm proud to present version one of Pioneer CYOA. This is a little more mechanically complex than my last work so I expect there to be a number of balance issues. Any help to highlight and fix them would be great. As always, constructive criticism is gratefully received.

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The thinking man's CYOA right here, my droogs

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>posting a CYOA that isn't shit
>posts shit
OK

Looks pretty neat user. If I weren't just popping in to post this I would make a build right away

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>merc cap is shit
OK there, user.

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Part 2

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Your awesome tok dont listen to these retards.

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Part 3

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Mystery Box

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I second this

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Nice just remember to link your posts net time.

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Hey guys, it's that robo-waifu poster from before. Your suggestions/requests were helpful, so if you've got any more hmu

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I'm a huge Chinaboo. Having a qt chinese robowaifu would be the closest this contemptable NEET wretch could get to the real thing

>She gives you lead poisoning and/or breaks down a week after getting her

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In the future when posting OC, include the term in the post. It makes people pay more attention. Also, linking posts helps.
Otherwise this CYOA looks really interesting (on my skim through it), I'll read through it and post a build for it later. Thank you for the OC.

I want mine to look like Saber from Fate.

Have her be with me only for x reason since it's the only way I can see any other sentient being willingly interact and live with me on the long term.

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kill yourself fatefag

Well, I'm including ethnicity in the custom build section, but I'll add some Chinese waifus to the pre built and the returned sections

add in the ability to make you waifu into a 6.83 * 10^15 km3 singularity

Something to do with my Robot Waifu other than lewd her. The best waifu builder esque CYOAs include at least some component of adventure -- Clockwork Girl and Space Opera Battle WAIFU come to mind. True, the good Yandere builder didn't have any extra bells or whistles, but dealing with a Yandere's insanity kind of counts as something other than "Here's your ideal partner to love you harmoniously forever.", giving meat to the project by its nature.

Last page, comrades. Boot up excel and savour the buildmaking process!

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Whoever made that CYOA knows nothing of war or battles

God bless you, user
Also, all the way

The ability to put your conciousness into a robot that you can design yourself.

Free will and a soul. I want to help her undertand what it means to be alive and for her to at least think and act on their own so that when I'm gone they can have a life.

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>Origin:
+1p,+1w,+1c Fate-Kissed Child
>First Feat:
+1p,+1w,+1c Unsung Deeds
>Companions:
+1p,+1w,+1c Argos, Faithful Hound
+1p,+1w,+1c Ring of Favor
>Skills:
+1p Master of Arms
+1p Fencer
+1p Arms of Sharur
+1p Spellbreaking
+1w River Stone
+1w Er Rai
+1c Diplomacy
+1c Outrider
>Weapon:
+1p,+1w,+1c A Simple Sword
>Zenith:
+1p,+1w,+1c Outis
>Onwards:
The Road Eternal
>Final Stats:
10p, 8w, 8c

One forgettable, nameless character served up hot and fresh.
I'm the Lone Wanderer! I mean the Chosen Undead! I mean the Hero of Kvatch! I mean literally any customizable protagonist that's never elaborated on in future work in the same universe!

I actually wish there was a song for this nameless, unknown hero type of character.

How so, my good user?

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