/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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once again the issue with the ME races

otherwise looks cool

Here's a version that combines those two pages.

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>Females of Grays are taller than the males
I smell GFD

Slight loss of image quality though.

Is weed boi available?

>all this bully

its a very niche appeal cyoa, not too many play kancolle

its also fairly complex/all over the place

Don't really understand the all over the place part. The only reason to backtrack is to create more characters, if you decide to make a 5 size squad

>Hey guys anime is bad like really bad awful i know right?
Do actual criticism or fuck off

Pls more husbando options in cyoas.
Cute bois are equal if not superior to cute grills.

No that's gay

He is criticizing your use of anime art, but that is just opinion and you can't appeal to everyone, so nothing you can do about that

I mean it does everything, very little focus

its both a army management cyoa, and a ship cyoa, and a waifu cyoa

kill yourself faggot

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>anime art
is a vague and retarded term, is this anime art?

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>Your use
I am not the author though

>All Androids are sentient, and can feel some level of emotion and attachment.
>_sentient_
Why say "sentient" instead of "sapient"?
>_some level of_ emotion and attachment
Why not just say "can feel emotion and attachment", if you need to specify it at all?

For Androids, do Nanobots repair more than just the armor? If not, does Dr.Armor function as a repair system (similar to Nanobots) for the Android body, instead of the usual suite meant for biological sophonts?

Is Tentacle meant to be purchaseable more than once? If so, I'd suggest using "gains" instead of "houses" in the first sentence and "gain" instead of "have" in the last.

Also, I don't remember getting an answer to my questions regarding Androids and senses and such. The questions being a thinly veiled attempt at asking whether you're going to specifically state that "Beautiful Androids can comfortably and pleasurably bang meatbags", add something else specifically for that purpose, or just let the readers fill that in for themselves.

or is this?

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no
yes

i have no clue man, you should ask the guy that made the post, and as i said you can't appeal to everyone, some people love it, others hate it, so unless you are going to make a artistic revolution on how pictures are drawn you just gotta accept that you can only appeal to a single viewer base
Neither am i the original poster of the comment you guys were replying to

ME races make the thing feel "cheaper" but i don't see anything else for now

But gay can be cute.

but... cute things.

My sides have reached orbital velocity.
Also what is an Astolfo.
And who is Thoth.

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and yet these are both images of characters from the same series, both "anime" characters, both by eastern artists(?)

specify the aspects which you dislike, if you hate stylized art, say that rather than using vague and useless terms

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>magic resistance
>image is a girl being captured
Am I missing something here?

Thoth doesn't exist

Not very obvious from the cropping but it looks like she's trapped in a ritual circle.

What.
Also horus and seth are gay.
If we're going egyptian gods for some reason.

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Even so this a bad pic for magic resistance. You can easily find better pic

The problem is not the fact that he does not like "anime art" the problem is that apparently anime art makes it so the cyoa is completely bland and uninteresting because reasons

>these are both images of characters from the same series, both "anime" characters, both by eastern artists(?)

none of this matters, why are you being obtuse

-Shrugs- I'll look into that.

Nanobots for the armor just seal up holes, they don't repair internal mechanisms unless you pick Armored.

And nah not really.

I'll look into that.

Thoth (the author) does not exist becouse it's not a he, it's a she, she confessed she is a woman to me

because you could well call both of those things anime art and be justified, just like how both ghost in the shell/akira are and so is panty and stocking/kill la kill

saying "anime art" explains nothing

Why does that mean Thoth doesn't exist? Females exist.

Not on the internet faggot

>she confessed she is a woman to me
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

as a girl i can say we don't actually exist

This is not true, i have not said anything about my gender ever

I know right? It is well known that everyone that goes on Veeky Forums is a little girl

I like it.

>not denying being female
Confirmed woman. Show tits or leave.

This is 9000% true, i am a female

I'm a female now you don't know what to think right?

You are not me!

jokes on you, i'm a girl and also exist.

This is 6000% false, i am a male

>Nanobots for the armor just seal up holes, they don't repair internal mechanisms unless you pick Armored.
Right, forgot about that option. On that note, if you pick Armored as an Android, is there any point to picking Nanobots for your Space Suit?
Also, does Dr.Armor (as Android) let you use the medical suite to fix up any fleshy friends you might encounter, or is it meant solely for armor being used/worn by meatbags?

I was born with a genetic defect, I'm in fact know as a hermaphrodite...

Stop pretending to be me!

Please marry me Thoth-chan

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What bothers me the most about this cyoa is that the art is both very consistent and nicely presented. The formatting is even decent. But the writing falls far below everything else. Shame.

really? i just thought all girls, including myself, were fake. i guess im the only ghost here then.

>Marrying someone who unironically likes seiba

Fuck you, Stop spreading misinformation, I'm guy and you are a woman. Not the reverse!

You-You baka, don't say embarrasing things all of a sudden

Thoth here. Not only am I male, I have two dicks. Sorry for the confusion everyone. A lot of people like to spread gossip or pretend they're me.

>Ghosts
>Not existing
FUCKING REALFAGS GET OUT OF MY VOID REEEEEE

This is not true!!! Stop

I enjoy the gay. Mostly because girls are weird and difficult.

Mostly because you're gay*

Half-gay then.

I'm serious

I want to be her Saber

Why are you liyng? I fucked thot and he only has done dick He had two assholes tough this is so fake it isn't funny.

Oh my god what have i started.

Yep guys can be kawaii whether you believe it or not....

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Methinks the lady doth protest too much.

As a lesbian myself, I would humbly like to request tits. Don't worry, it's just between us girls.

user, you are really kind. it means a lot

We're all lesbians here right, girls? Lets all show our tits together!

Rosanon turn me in to a qt little girl plz

You are amazing user.
You have my admiration.

Also chat noir is cheating.

am i doing this right?

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I AM NOT LADY YOU FUCKING CREEPS

no

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>defending total shit
Cmon user

I know you are not toth, but in case you are, prove it by showing you man tits.

That is not me user, i will always be kind

your mother was a whore

Nope.
It's a superhero cartoon character.
Not even adult oriented.
Totally valid.
Not my fault that he turned out to be adorable and wears a shiny black rubber catsuit.
But okay here's someone less cheaty.

Excellent! Saved!

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Same gripe about the races as the others. If I can nitpick, I don't like the fact that a lot of the images are borrowed from other source material that I'm familiar with--I suppose you could say that it fractures my immersion. The layout is clean and pleasing; the background is soft and unobtrusive. Choices made early on define what you can and cannot choose later--I think that's neat. The writing is consistent; not terribly flavorful, but not bad either.

Anyway, the cyoa is fine. There's nothing actually wrong with it. I just don't like some of the ingredients you're using is all.

Tits

Hey mate I really liked the cyoa fuck you, unless you at least explain why something is shit instead of just calling it shit, you contribute nothing to the thread.

Probably

Aren't all mothers whores? They had sex after all.

your mom gay

No u

I will admit you have me stumped my friend.
But he is very cute!

Truly, art is humanity perfected.

I know I didn't help but why did we devolve into shitposting so early in the tread?

Homosexuals ruin everything

>im so happy i got to post this

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