Original haiku thread

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New haikus for you
Raindrops fall on winter snow
An arse full of farts

i dont read haikus, so i know nothing about them other than their formal structure. for this reason, i do not feel confident in my ability to produce one that will satisfy my readers. Nevertheless,

>Herein, Lake Huron,
>Heroin Heron smokes loud;
>Here on, can't hear God

someone once told me
the world was gonna roll me
there are sharper tools

The banks of the stream
Water fills with many things
Graveyard of dead trees

Tiger destroy cage
yes YES but BUT no No NO
Tiger free is he

Metamorphoses:
Lady turns into a tree,
That god still fucked her

College Ice Breaker
"Infinite Jest is my fave"
Changing my major

Veeky Forums tard picks fight with /pol/
Veeky Forums is soon to be trolled
Go and stop the fool

how come they don't watch
when he tries his best to be
but they look for her

Sorrow digs too far
Grins forecast an unknown now
Where am I to be?

Fearless white rabbit
Your life a misstep, a jump
Today, it failed

I like these ones.

The last stanza felt too early, too out of place but I liked what I felt in the first two stanzas.

Arrow in your neck
Prey, don't pray, you're already here
Seethe, sleep, begone quiet

Spring summer fall ran
Winter slowly marches in
All is the wolf's work

Frolicking wind's gasp
The reeds whistle in its breath
A lonely swordsman

Sniff, sniff and a whiff
Oh my, quite pungent my dear
A feast for the nose

Coughing up blood from
my blistered trachea felt
compensatory.

COME ON, MORE HAIKUS. EVEN IF YOU'RE SHIT, COME ON.

They call me Sokka,
That is in the water tribe
I am not an oaf.

All joking aside
I've never made a haiku
It seems to be hard

Don't culturally
Appropriate Japanese
Art forms you white male

True story my friend got an A in highschool english class by handing in a haiku that read as follows:
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck

Serendipity
Our paths briefly connected
Two souls together

雨所
水や土溜る
静か音

>雨所
>水や土溜る
>静か音

if google translate is correct, sounds nice :) I like this one

never understood
just what I am doing here
these forms don't make sense

Cracking earth opens
Swallowing unfortunates
The world has shifted
Perhaps it is no grave thing
Returning to common womb

clear sky, not one leaf
my breath felt orange, gone now
never bet it all

Cringing from upon
A bare surface, like paper and
Pen, aligned just so.

Thanks, my dude. I don't know that much japanese, but I gave it a shot. You have to read it a certain way to fit into the structure, but I think that's the same for every haiku.

more alive at night
something about the moonlight
mind reverberates

Really too few words
For a good, rhyming, story
That's my opinion

Nips ever bursting
From literature and JAV bras
I like limericks

That sounds too untrue
But unto you, here's your (You)
Inside, bait I'll rue

New Sam Jam was fun.
I enjoyed watching with /co/.
Feel like re-watching.

Haikus can be hard
But they never make me hard
Because they're not hot

I dare you to write
A haiku that makes pants tight
And brings surging light

I dare you to try
And make my cock cry - then die
With Jap-style lies

But you really can't
And if you could, I'd have written
Fiddy shades of yellow

I hate structure and rules
so you can shove this format, asians
pink leaves, fish, and swords, flutter in autumn, and my heart