Hello Veeky Forums, what do you all think of my poetry so far? thinking of starting up a book of poems

hello Veeky Forums, what do you all think of my poetry so far? thinking of starting up a book of poems

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It would be really nice if semen tasted like honey.

Why do you sound like a tumblr girl? I assume you are a man since most of the internet is men, but desu your poems aren't that bad but they have the same tone as a tumblr girl. Pretty good poems but they have a weird smell of tumblr.

there is nothing wrong with tumblr

Eat pineapple every day.

Except that it's cliche to use their style and not be unique. Tumblr thinks like a hivemind.

no wonder he's talkin about honey then am i right lol

pfft ahhahahaha