/ehg/ - Erotic Literature General

Maybe it's because I'm a monolingual pleb but I still have yet to make it more than 50 pages into that book because the prose just seems overwhelmingly dense.

do you guys masturbate while reading these books

Anyone else wrote their own erotica that they're now deathly embarrassed about? In high school I tried to write a novel in the style of de Sade but set in a parallel universe Victorian era dystopia. It was fucking horrific and I cringe about it to this day.

Mercy

"So you go away from where you were afraid. Some stay; some go; it's a big difference, leaving the humiliations of childhood, the morbid fear. We didn't have much to say to each other, the ones that left and the ones that stayed. Children get shamed by fear but you can't tell the adults that; they don't care. They make children into dead things like they are. If there's something left alive in you, you run. You run from the poor little child on her knees; fear burned the skin off all right; she's still on her knees, dead and raw and tender.”

Thanks. That was actually the one I've had down for awhile on my list of books I want to look into.

Somewhat related, there's a Dworkin biography in the works and I ended up typing up some of the interviews conducted for work. I don't/didn't know much about her, but her close friends and acquaintances discussing her mental state near the end of her life was quite sad.

Yeah, she suffered intensely throughout her life, and especially towards the end. But her love no was just as intense and even more transcendent. I'm so glad she existed.

well i wrote erotic back in high school AND showed it to my friends

I think so but asexual girls barely exist. I just want a nice girl I can cuddle, do fun activities and have Veeky Forums discussions with, not some dick-gobbling whore who wants to do nothing but fuck. It's gotten to the point where the thought of trying to have sex again gives me panic attacks. No girl I've ever met even came close to understanding how I feel.
It's nowhere near as bad as losing control of my body, but I have a chronic illness that leaves me bedridden most of the day, in constant pain, and suffering from vision/memory problems that make reading difficult. What I do is actively look for new shit that's enjoyable or pleasurable in my situation, without reminiscing on how good things used to be and how bad it is that I can't do the things I used to. Just looking out the window and seeing the sunset is enough sometimes. I try to focus on how much more beautiful and significant my mind and the world around me are compared to what's happening to my body. Studying Gnosticism helped immensely, with the central ideas of escape and transcendence. Also helps not to alienate your friends and family (no matter how tempting) since you always need that support.

Anyway I've talked enough shit, best of luck OP.

Wait so you're telling me that Dworkin actually wrote sadist erotica? And she still had the gall to claim that pornography promotes rape and violence against women? Lmao

Kek. How did they react?

Just because you've debased yourself enough to crank your hog to it, doesn't make it erotic. Get help.

Nigga this is the first time I'm hearing about this aspect of her writings. An user earlier in the thread made it seem like she wrote sadist erotica. I don't know, I don't give a shit about her so I didn't research it.

well they liked it

i had a lot of daddy issues at the time so the stories were pretty much twink (me) meets daddy and fuck

i published it online and one of the stories hat 1,000 hits in a night

If you're being honest, I apologize. It sounded like a very typical bad faith question. No, she didn't write erotica. She was an outsider author whose intensely violent and horrific depictions of rape, child abuse, and psychological undoing often landed her books on black lists, similar to Sade or Sotos. But her motivations in being artistically indulgent in her work was to turn people AWAY from these things; to see the horror in as much gut wrenching detail as possible, so that the images would echo around in your head long after you put her book down. So that they'd still be echoing at 1 am while you're watching some young girl being degraded on camera with your cock in in your hand. Or while your talking to your buddy about how worthless those "fucking whores" are.

No offence but that sounds unbelievably pretentious. I've been raped and I still jack it to porn.

link it

shakespear of tumblr

By erotic literature, are we discussing straight up porn or things more along the line of actual literature that happen to have some r18 scenes in it? Or even just romance?

Kek

There's a way to be sincere and have "naively" un-edgy beliefs around an edginess culture like Veeky Forums without being a whiny fucking nigger about it. Calm your tits. Stop trying to socially shame people and stuff your impotent sanctimony through the Internet.

I was interested in your description of Dworkin's fiction and its rationale. Some people won't be. Some people will be dismissive. Some people will charge their dismissal with vitriol just to annoy you. Your reaction should be equanimity in every one of these cases.

Literally not a single person on this website gives a fuck about your "ugh you DUDEBROS and your 'fucking whores' immaturity!" whinging. It has no effect AT ALL. That's practically the premise of this website. In fact, this method of shaming people into hiding their true thoughts (especially all their whimsically capricious, spur of the moment, borderline sadistic ones, bubbling up from the unconscious - relevant to this thread) is practically why these "fucking whores amirite?" dudebros exist in the first place and why they deliberately seek out discursive spaces where you saying "I'm very cross with you >:( I'm going to talk to HR!" is no threat.

You're going to enjoy the website a lot more if you learn to roll your eyes at people you think are immature or terrible, and not let that resentment build up and periodically spill over into pointless fist-shaking that those people will just laugh at and take as a proof their edginess was successful.

By all means be a huge feminazi. Make the site more interesting. Just do it from an unassailable position of knowing you can say and think whatever you want here, which is itself predicated on giving the same courtesy to others.

Part of a collection I'm working on:

>The trail got thick, and soon he could hear the sound of trickling water. He hurried his step, despite the sensitivity of his feet, and coud barely see the glint of water through the trees. Soon he was on it; a creek at the bottom of a slope. Chuck worked his way down the hill carefully, already imagining himself wading in, splashing to his heart's content.

>He reached the bottom, and there was a splash to his right. There, there was a girl of about fifteen rising out of the water. She flung her hair and sprayed a fan of droplets. Chuck couldn't help but stare. She was like something out of a fantasy story, a faerie from a faerie tale, a peach fuzz forest nymph, the most alluring sight he'd seen so far.

>She turned, and saw him looking. She waved, and he waved back.

That reads nothing like shakespear and tumblr is associated with 3rd-4th wave liberal feminism; Dworkin is a 2nd wave radfem. Lazy, shit joke, m80

Can anybody link an erotic story that's just, idk, well written? I have plenty of specific kinks I'd like to see but, fuck it, most of all I just want to read erotic stories that don't read like a stream of garbage.

Post your kinks and I'll see what I can do.

Palpate

couldn't tell you, brother, it's immensely pretty in french. maybe hunt around for a different translation?

t. tumblrina

Submissiveness/dominance (any gender, but have a stronger affinity for femdom) that doesn't involve any humiliation and preferably not too much cliche leather and dungeon stuff. Orgasm control and denial, chastity, ass play. Also slow burn type stuff that puts the emphasis on the sensual and draws it out.

Dworkin is pretty far removed from the variety of feminism that is most prominent right now. You're just kind of retarded.

post is about erotic lit, not horror

Lubricious

>doubling down when shown you don't know what you're talking about

almost admirable desu

Are you okay user? What chronic illnesses do you have? You seem really interesting. Do you have a Discord or something?

Just find an author that doesn't imply or skip scenes of sexual natures and read all their books. A healthy plot enhances any sex.

Also any more than the last two paragraphs of this and it wouldn't proper to post on a blue board.

Cool. What book?

sfw/nsfw doesn't apply to words.

Read Venus in Furs and Story of O.

She also claimed the CIA drugged, kidnapped, and gangraped her...don't read too much into it

Have you noticed that it's the ugliest women who are the most preoccupied with rape? I wonder why this is. Is it the female version of fat, ugly men becoming incels?

Harvey Weinstein raped Andrea Dworkin

what are the essential watersports/rimjob novels?

>Andrea Dworkin
Surprise! Another subversive jew undermining white culture through perversion and hypersexualization.

Just read the first few chapters of de Sade's novels. The early parts before everything absolutely goes to shit are full of that.

I'm too scared

lol

I like to ERP sometimes

is this accurate?

Sounds like hysterical feminist propaganda to be honest with you pal. It's also a little antiquated, because in the current year we're not supposed to criticize pornography or "sex work."

link it

Kind of, but it depends on whether or not you think bored assholes are suitable or unsuitable material for stories.

Honestly Ive been listening to an audiobook version of this and I’m an hour in and still no sex, and the prose has been underwhelming. But I read his “Dusk and other Stories” and loved it. Especially “Twenty Minutes” so he is capable of being a good writer.

>woman whose vitriolic disdain for pornography rivaled even the most extreme /pol/ moral crusader
>undermining white culture through perversion and hypersexualization
sorry, you guys were on the side of the fat feminist with this one

Despite what /r9k/ says, hideous women don't have their own network of doting betas. They're ignored and go through life w/o sex or affection, and, just as you inferred w/r/t/ incels, they rationalize their complete lack of commerce w/ the opposite gender by making them out to be horrible monsters. All men are sick rapists, and I enjoy the spinster lifestyle!

Great way of articulating, but I doubt you will have much of an effect on someone with your ability to coherently express your thoughts, I would have just called her/him a "nigger" and be done with it honestly

trying to explain stuff to women and newfags is just not worth wasting time over, it's best to keep on hoarding information for the casket

> despite the sensitivity of his feet
is that relevant to the story?

> She waved, and he waved back
It doesn't have the impact you probably thought it was going to have on the reader, I suggest more detail on the way she waved back (shyly? Cheerfully?)

Sarah Bellucci on Amazon

Well, the cia have been kidnapping, drugging and raping people for decades now.

>peach fuzz

Sounds pedo as fuck, I've never seen those words used to describe anything else.

Are erotic fiction generals allowed on blue boards?

I used to post in the ones on Veeky Forums and /d/ but they got B& real quick.

75% of western canon is smut. 25% is horrible death.

guys story of the eye, cmon

Here's something I wrote. I don't post on Veeky Forums very often any more, but I'd appreciate any feedback.

Not really. For bitching about colonialism in it the reviewer conveniently ignores that the main girl starts out fucking a nigger, You can tell Salter has a pretty strong command of French, or at the very least a decent and sufficient one, so that criticism seems more like posturing. I didn't really have a problem with the book beyond feeling misled. I knew it was erotic but I thought its reputation as a significant novel came from something in the structuring or other elements. As far as I can figure it's actually just the prose, especially during the sex scenes. It's praiseworthy writing, but the victorian in me doesn't like to read with an erection.

Consensual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreating under christian wedlock

>is that relevant to the story?
Actually it is. He's walking naked. He's at a nudist resort, and he didn't bring sandals.
>It doesn't have the impact you probably thought it was going to have on the reader, I suggest more detail on the way she waved back (shyly? Cheerfully?)
Helpful, thanks. The story doesn't end there. From there he discovers the girl is at the creek with her family, and they spend innocent time together until they leave, and Chuck ends up enjoying swimming in the creek and observing how it is to be naked in a peaceful spot of nature. And then he goes back to the main area, spirit renewed.

>pedo as fuck
Fuck. I'm gonna have to re-think that one. Shame, I liked the phrase "peach fuzz forest nymph." Kill your babies I guess.

you a fan of story of the eye?

Can you be virgin and still write erotica that makes people creame their pants ?

I don't know, I'm more or less inexperienced but I feel my stuff achieves something. It's more about the situations you present rather than the authenticity.

"Twenty Minutes" is magnificent, yeah. My favorite work of Salter's is Solo Faces. Better than Light Years.

Nape
Lips
Touch
Skin
Bare
Plump
Caress
Fondle
Tickle

Thanks for the raging erection at 11am in the library

What are Nabokov's most erotic works?

Lolita obviously.

Ada is moreso though

Read Ada and no I would say Lolita has pound per pound more erotic content.

Wait. is that August?

Don't tell me you pedophiles are attracted to minors

No. They're all weathered and filthy and dying of the black lung.

Thanks for the fap pic.

I'm the virginest of virgin and people seem to appreciate my smut. I disguise my lack of experience by putting a spin on sex scenes where the characters are slightly awkward, where they pretend to be in sexy and in control while tripping out mentally, and fail to replicate what they see in porn, and make jokes about it, and generally alternate between being clumsy and adorable.

"Intercourse"

Giggidy
Giggidy

Nice woody sound that.
Innnn-terrrr-coooourse

"To smell the gentle smoke of tea, fume of the pan, sizzling butter.
Be near her ample bedwarmed flesh. Yes, yes."

>bedwarmed flesh
the other way around, it's the bed that is absorbing heat, unless it's some kind of cold-blooded lizard person on a bed with heat pads

You lay under sheets to stay warm even if it comes from your own body. What would the point of literature be if everything was perfectly literal?

The argument that things don't need to be literal is something you'd say in a conversation about metaphors. This isn't a metaphor. It's a straight description. It should read literal. It's no big deal, just an adjective placed slightly at the wrong place. Just write that she is wrapped in flesh-warmed covers. There. Done.

You can't ever say anything's touching something else. Electromagnetic forces prevent anything from actually touching.

Being that literal is just retarded

One uses a bed to warm one's flesh because a comforter-covered bed is a device for containing body heat and warming oneself.

If you can use a bed to keep warm, you can say "I was warmed by my bed."

Bed-warmed flesh is fine. I still don't like it but it's fine. Go to hell!

The whole point is to have the "flesh" and the "Yes. Yes" go together