R8 please

r8 please

Of all that is obscure yet bright,
I beseech thee O muse do crown
This man, alleviate the plight,
As when in Olympus they frown
On man in full serenity,
Of life burnt in sterility

it sucks ass lmao

rate mine:
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what is this

It ain't the 18th century any more, bub

I know, it's practice, is it any good tho

bump

kind of

It helps to read poetry before writing it

>serenity
>sterility

rhymes like this are bad. suffix based rhymes are weak

>O
meter filler shouldn't be this obvious. replace it with 'the' and be less obnoxious

also, this doesn't real tell us anything

Embarrassing. It's the opening of the Odyssey.

Homer would have given his right eye to write like you.