Other one hit the bump limit.
New Write What's On Your Mind
The path to recovery
I shed my old skin but vices
keep coming
but the few moments of peace, joy, and serenity
I truly cherish them, like raindrops in the deserrt
I strive to reach my goal from the moment I wake
Live virtously, and follow the Noble Path
What's transient is suffering, all things are transient
Let me find refuge in my the stillness of my mind
Half an hour before I take plunge into the concrete jungle of sobriety
penis
>tfw wrote a poem and I really like it and want to share with you guys but also want to submit to this journal my school has
Do not share poems that you will publish later on. Because you can't claim it's yours once its posted online, espcially in an anonymous imageboard.
I know how you feel. Just freestyle something close to it
Go ahead. Post it.
>Do not share poems that you will publish later on. Because you can't claim it's yours once its posted online, espcially in an anonymous imageboard.
You fucking retard we all know this
you think im fucked if i posted stuff that has gotten goo reception in critique threads? I'd say probably say no more than 6 things
Do not make a universal claim that you cannot uphold. Because you will look like fool when you're proven wrong.
I want to be a saint.
I want to die, die right,
die, so that I do not have to
sin anymore,
reject anymore,
hate anymore.
>not a poem, just looks better if it's not a single line