The oscillation stopped with a lurid burst and the play was over. Her heaving chest slowed down, modest breasts fell into a steady rhythm, their pink areolae concealed beneath thick black hair. Accumulating on the tips were milky droplets of meerschaum, released by her nipples as they surfaced between curled waves.
Contracting her stomach as she inhaled, her tiny navel formed a small enclave for her sweat. From this harbor it trickled toward her vagina. Exceptional lighting revealed every detail of glistening skin. Shaved bare, she lacked black pubes to obstruct enjoyment.
The woman lifted her legs, with a cunt to display. Expanding slowly the vulva revealed a thick rippled labia; it too spread to expose her. Accompanying a labored breath her vagina contracted to produce a little drip. Cloistered by her lips it collected as a cloudy white pearl. Her ephemeral proof of pleasure. With another contraction it grew, before falling onto the perineum and disappearing down her anus.
"What an exquisite creampie" was the thought as he closed his laptop.
"I enjoy porn more than literature. Porn is short, fast and sometimes even entertaining."
Daniel Nguyen
damn bro, I was on nofap now I have to go watch porn and jack off. Thanks a lot
Brody Brooks
No god damn it, don't do it, that's not the fucking point!
Elijah Thompson
This is now a go to /gif/ take the first one you find and describe the events depicted in your best prose thread.
Jaxson Adams
I'm not gonna be able to beat this one
Caleb Gray
porn addiction is the ultimate sign of a weak mind. there's nothing virtuous about being a slave to your vices. obsession with porn simply reveals how your mind has already been warped and robbed of its impulse control. of course you will protest and say you are not addicted, and are only interested in the """"artistic"""" side of porn. if i were sitting next to you irl, I would laugh hysterically in your face. erotic literature is the lowest form of lit, appealing to the peon masses, as evidenced by most top selling online book charts. it is the intellectual equivalent of junkfood, appealing only to your baser instincts. the surface level attraction fools your weak mind into thinking there's something more, when really you are just engaging with intellectual poison that is reinforcing the behaviour of an addict. i would advise you to quit, but I can judge from this thread alone your mind incapable of positive transformation. realistically your options are suicide, or continued hedonism, which will eventually lead you to suicide. the choice was never yours.
Noah Torres
Jerk off and calm down
Ian Mitchell
I agree with you, and I need to stop
Owen Richardson
you know a woman wrote this shit
Gabriel Davis
Haha, time to fap
Xavier Bailey
I had a looming sense of dread while reading this post that reached a crescendo of pure terror when you said that I should quit my favorite thing in the whole world. But then when you said that I am incapable of positive transformation and that my only options are suicide or continued hedonism, I immediately relaxed. All the tension was gone. Thank God. Now I know I don't have to feel any guilt over my hedonistic lifestyle. You really made me feel better about myself. This post made my day. Thank you user.
Aiden Reed
Wow real cutting edge stuff man You still browsing /pol/?
David Wright
that prose just made my penis shrivel up and die
Brody Russell
Atleast the efforts of leftypol are growing more creative. (porn makes you more of a leftist).
Zachary Howard
>what is radical feminism
Oliver Walker
>Shaved bare, she lacked black pubes to obstruct enjoyment. What the fuck is that my man >Dudes creampie is proof of her pleasure What
Aaron Nelson
Did you write this OP? It made my dong long
Landon Hughes
trash
Brayden Watson
I don't know, what is it?
Ryan Moore
What would happen if I submitted this to a Veeky Forums class at college?
I'm a good boi Catholic who hasn't jerked off in over a month, I think this is the beginning of a short story, it ends with the protag succumbing to the violent hallucinations of a hermaphroditic horror that tries to consume him. It's pretty disgusting.
Wrong
I'm right wing
Yes.
Samuel Scott
Godamnit that girl is way to cute for that >women
Christopher Sanchez
that's a liberal feminist. read andrea dworkin
Levi Reed
Cool cathedral
Josiah Taylor
Not very well written. The same kind of piecemeal shit written to impress tards you see everywhere. Dependent on vulgarity for novelty, despite vulgarity and erudition having been better bedfellows for many Millenia than one might think from this virginal “effort”.
Leo Lopez
This is how I feel about rhyming poetry. It's been a hard slog to stop, but I think I finally dropped it altogether. Now if only I could stop enjoying prose for their innate and ineffable lushness. I suppose it takes time and there's no need to rush this anyhow. I swear I'll do better tomorrow.
Carson Evans
Hmm actually I feel bad for writing this now that I notice OP is actually a human being like me and is starting to feel a little happy with his own writing.
Alright, don’t make the mistake of interpreting someone saying something you’ve written isn’t good as the same as saying you’re not a good writer. They’re leagues apart. Obviously being a good writer is kind of a vague thing if you separate it from the quality of the product, but I think it’s because a lot of what makes the writing good is the time you devote to making it so. Maybe I’m not making much sense. DONT BECOME DEMORALISED
Your OP post reads like something you wrote very quickly and for personal amusement, which is fine. You are obviously hamming it up by starting with “oscillation”. But it doesn’t hit my imagination. Remember that style and content are not separate. It’s not erotic. It’s a novelty exercise in writing something sexual with big words. Well, you can write something that’s incredibly erotic and use as many obscure words as you like, as long as you’re using them to really bring out the best image and sensations and concepts from the text. But obviously that’s not the case here. It’s stunted.
James Anderson
>It's another dumb normie that hardly reads tries to write his impression of stylistic prose episode
Elijah Brown
why was this made
Dominic Edwards
You know what, fuck you, I'm going to rewrite this shit and do it better
>I have no fucking idea what the first sentence conveys >Her heaving chest, wrapped in her dark hairs, subsided. Meerschaum seeped from her nipples and trickled down the swell of her breast. >She clenched her stomach and drew her bare navel in, whence her sweat trickled into her vagina. Lightning emphasized every detail of the image. >The woman raised her legs and exhibited her parting vulva, then labia. Her vagina contracted and leaked to audio of her deep breath. Surrounded in flesh was the pearl of her deed that was swallowed within hero body. >"Bruh this shit cash" he thought when he shut his laptop >"I like porn more than literature. Porn is short, fast and sometimes even entertaining."
You're a fag if you disagree
Hunter Wilson
her body*
Jace White
Does nothing to me
James Miller
Ok user, you are kind of right, I just wanted to meme (which was pretty succesful looking at the replies, although I didn't really want to make people horny though i should have known), this is very different, from my usual "style" which mostly consists of rambling, with not much flourish. It felt forced, it did not come or feel natural, looking over the second paragraph especially there is little variety in the structure. desu just started writing seriously, like a month ago so this helps.
Lol, that's the basic Gestalt
Bentley Gray
>someone writes something on another board >LIT BTFO GOTTA MAKE A THREAD HOLY SHIT LIT LITTLE BITCH QUIVERING HAHA LOL kys faggot, I wouldn't even wipe my ass with this garbage
Nathaniel Richardson
Whoa man you really got him. Man I got an erection just at the sheer grace at which you destroyed his point. Guess I should go jerk off now.
Ryan Ortiz
>Everything that happens to me happens to other people.
Jesus man, How do you even fit your head that far up your ass?
Adrian Fisher
bump
Alexander Cruz
Not sure what you are quoting
Samuel Williams
This is exactly the kind of thing you would see on reddit as an idiot trying to write well. >Accumulating on the tips were milky droplets of meerschaum, released by her nipples as they surfaced between curled waves. Do you actually think this is a good sentence? Honestly. Every sentence is like that. At the very least, learn how to diagram a sentence before you attempt to write. Did you even graduate high school for fuck's sake?
Gabriel Sullivan
>he says while being addicted to shitposting on Veeky Forums
Benjamin Richardson
Nofap is a surrogate virtue for people too inept and weak-willed to effect any real, meaningful change in their lives. This is why the nofap crowd's self-importance so overshadows any tidbit of restraint they might muster. True wisdom lies in striving for the golden mean. But a mind atrophied by reactionary /pol/ memes obliterates nuance, and this proverbial self-flagellation becomes a practice in self delusion and trying to COPE with one's feelings of inferiority stemming from being a weak, useless faggot.
Samuel Watson
That SaltyIce?
Wyatt Kelly
not salty icecream it's mike inel
Adam Turner
Thanks
Nicholas Carter
>he thinks nofap started on /pol/ new
Tyler Nguyen
I’ve been attempting no fap since last year with a moderate amount of success. I’ve pretty much committed myself to it since new years and it has been really easy so far, which I’ve found surprising because I spent most of 2016 and part of 17 just smoking weed and jerking off all the time, wasn’t sure I’d ever get any kind of control over it. I’m finding out that other vices like anger, gluttony, smoking cigarettes/weed, judgement, hypocrisy etc are actually more difficult to give up, and it’s kind of putting things into perspective for me. So I’d say if you’re doing it correctly it should help lead you to the cultivation of virtues and weeding out of impulsive behaviors and you shouldn’t just dismiss it out of hand.
t. not a poltard
Hudson Jackson
It didn't, but that's the board where it's mostly propogated, along with /r9k/. And if you noticed what site we're on.
>So I’d say if you’re doing it correctly it should help lead you to the cultivation of virtues and weeding out of impulsive behaviors and you shouldn’t just dismiss it out of hand Fair enough, but I'd also say most people could keep fapping with moderation and be fine. The whole nofap thing is mostly a reaction against porn addiction, so my post was mainly aimed at the people who think being 3 weeks into nofap makes them stoic af patricians, when it usually signals the opposite.
Blake Morales
...
Adam Powell
Just turn off your rain bruh
Brody Gomez
Being someone who has pretty much only cared about immediate gratification their whole life, I understand the feeling to a certain extent. I mean, when it becomes something habitual you’ve been doing for years straight it really is pretty difficult to give up at first, especially when you receive no tangible reward for cutting it out, so I could see why someone would go on a head trip thinking they’ve mastered the passions or whatever if they reach a point where they felt like they have more control over themselves. But in the end, it’s only no-fap, and there are things equally important getting a control of that get ignored. Plus it’s REALLY nothing to brag about.