Get complimented by almost everybody in school when it comes to my writing

>get complimented by almost everybody in school when it comes to my writing
>know deep down that it's wrong that I don't get critiqued harshly but constructively
>tfw all i write is shit since everybody here ignores it
>so bad and dull it ain't even worth anyone's attention
i wish i got critiqued more

post a paragraph and i'll give you serious critique

post some of your work and we will shit on it just for you, user

>he wants his writing to be trashed

you came to the write place my guy

You're handwriting in the 5th grade was shabby at best

>Doesn't even capitalize his ''I'' like a niggerian subhuman
>''I t-think I may have talent!''

Just another shitter with serious Dunning Kruger, lets move on sage + report

>You're

Here:
>Somewhen: in the wake of noon and ere the sun’s disappearance, she left home to visit a dear friend. She said farewell to her mother and sister; both situated in the frontroom, settled on couches: sisters festooned with briars, mothers hued similar to meres. False smiles etched on each visage during the parting, mother saying a phrase that fashioned consternation between her temples. With a fading tongue mother said hollow words: Ixsixan…

nigga I literally cant tell if youre trolling

Cant even even

Jesus Christ this is fucking garbage. So much unnessecsry shit and tried way too hard to sound smart.