Let's do a writing exercise

Let's do a writing exercise.

"You write a sentence, and the person below you has to remove all the fillers/bullshit and try to shorten it while keeping the message/words intact, no rmoving of lttrs."

How short can you make the question above?

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sentence* I fucked up

You write words

Not gonna make it as a writer, you removed the goal of the sentence

one writes, the following edits

sage

Francois stood before them in the image of a phoenix, still wearing his tattered dust-stained shirt he looked a man on fire; his sun-burnt cheeks were painted by the ochre earth, while his shirt was a sweaty orange save for the red slashes like the licks of flame through which he bled.

>Francois stood before them bleeding and caked in red dust.

F. did his thing.

F. rends.

now you post a sentence.