>"She danced in the blizzard, her pale flesh completely exposed, menstrual violet dripped down her legs."
First line of your novel GO
Austin Scott
Brody Peterson
menstrual violet, very good. i like it. redeems the sentence, un-dulls it just at the very end.
John Mitchell
Our culture is in ruins.
Colton Jones
t. never been near a pussy before
lmao
Brody Foster
Are you colorblind?
Sebastian Brooks
scarlet
Jackson Bailey
T. Brainlets who don't understand my prose.
Nicholas Johnson
You either need to change "dripped" to "dripping", or you need to change the comma to a full-stop.
You can't use a comma to join two distinct sentences.
Lincoln Lopez
Your not reading it right.
Jaxson Butler
>Sunset found her squatting in the grass, groaning.
>"Twilight, what are you doing?" Sunset asked.