I love Monika!!!! I want to drink coffee with Monika!!!!
Justin Green
Monika did nothing wrong.
Connor Carter
Ok so I guess I'll ask now that there's a new thread. For anyone who's here would you prefer to see a segment from the next chapter of Mo-Jave Mo-Nika now or wait until I finish it? I only have about a page two pages at best left.
Henry Clark
G'day English teacher-sama, I ended up writing another poem. Care to see it? I'd be interested in hearing your feedback
Christopher Ross
Rate my Lolitsuki please
Tyler Morris
Every day I imagine a future where I can be with you
Ethan Cruz
Go for it.
Eli Sanchez
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Isaiah Wood
sayori is cute!
Sebastian King
why is she alone? ):
Aiden Peterson
This thread's off to a fantastic start! Blessed be all the good tsun cupcake posters. Cute! I feel like it needs a set of cat ears to be complete. Then again Nyatsuki always needs more art.
Ayden Bell
Cute! 6/10 cute
Owen Murphy
Three out of four dokis agree: Monika is best girl!
Luke Ward
Yuri is CUTE!
Jaxon Morris
Geez guy, slow it down. Aren’t you the guy the Sonic poster recognized?
Luke Gray
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Tyler Lee
that sayori looks very lewd
Jaxon Nguyen
She needs you!!!! And me!!!! And all Monikafriends!!!!
Logan Mitchell
user is in the bathroom taking a fat shit
Cameron Cooper
Hello again everyone! Hope you're all having fun! Any arguments over the dinner table? Listening to those can be the most fun or the most awkward, ahaha... Well, I request you distract me with some poetry.
I'd still love to hear your holiday poems, but I'll give you the word of "control"! Well, that's only if you don't want to write about the holidays...
Well, as usual if you want to write a poem, please consider using this word to write a poem! Anyone and everyone are welcome to join in, so don't be shy to join in! It would be really great if you did. I enjoyed all of your poems last thread, so it would be nice if you continued, ahaha... Either way, I'm looking forward to it!
Save me. Monika!
Easton Long
A gangbang!!!!
Lucas Robinson
Don't worry about it! All that matters right now is YURI!!!!!
Julian Edwards
Feedback for wholesomeman who by the time I wrote this. The last thread had died.
Well I just read your Christmas fic and you just hit me with a double whammy of my two favourite dokis. So fuck you you're getting some pretty biased feedback. Short answer... I loved them. They truly were well... Wholesome. With sayoris section you were able to capture her personality and how I imagine she would be at Christmas time. Especially decorating the tree with user. And with natsuki you kept her lovely playful and confident. Well when she has someone at her side... It's always nice to see something she's passionate about..
Now I don't know nearly a thing about writing so I don't think my criticisms will be coherent, much less useful. Now for the sayori part, the flow was a little disjointed and it was clearly separated into sections which took me out of it a bit. Now I don't know if this is a real criticism but I'll try to explain what I mean.. user decorates the tree. Walks in on sayori dancing. Teases about said dancing. Then there was a bit of flirting about teaching to dance that was very abruptly closed. Then to the star, then mistletoe, then back to dancing. It was quite checklist... That being said I still loved it. Natsuki's journey to the game center was a little short and I would have loved to see a confrontation or something. But again. I can't nitpick. I enjoyed it
Brody Young
Gotta find user!
Adrian Barnes
Yuri is BEAUTIFUL!
Dylan Ward
Cute!!!
Brody Sanchez
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Levi Wood
>finally beat monika in chess take that you fucking bitch
Carter Cook
N-no I can't take much more...
Chase Parker
I want to worship Monika's legs! I want to kiss Monika's hips!
Nolan Cox
>Losing to Monika at chess Neeeeerd
Leo Davis
Yes actually one of the first truly heated arguments too.
Wyatt Richardson
Fucking Monika with other anons! Filling Monika's holes with cum!
Jose Hernandez
Righty then here goes, it was my first attempt at a rhyme style and I wrote it after accidentally coming up with it while trying to sleep:
remember when I first met her It wasn’t long after I’d left the nest Now her and I are inseparable you see She’s there no matter what I suggest
I’ve known this woman for quite some time now She always there following me Occasionally she’ll turn and block my path Ensuring that it’s only her I see
She can be quite endearing at times Never once leaving my side Her dedication is somewhat admirable From her, I have nowhere to hide
No matter which road I run, which path I pace No matter how it will twist and wind She’ll be there with me, always, waiting, ready The venom of my mind
She’ll match my steps like a shadow Marching steadily to the beat of my heart I’ll try to abandon her, ignore her, run from her but it’s futile Her and I can’t be apart
Now I’ve tried just about everything Running and screaming and clawing, it’s no use This woman won’t ever leave my side, you see, Until I’m dangling limp at the end of her noose
And so I trudge onwards with her beside me As I continue further and further down my road I stare at my feet, speak in hushed tones and await The nothing that I am owed
My life afraid of this women has killed me Not stopped my heart, only my life did she take For I have known no joy, sadness, no pleasure nor pain Only fear, unbridled fear, lie in their wake
For this woman’s name is regret Though she’ll go by doubt and second guessing too She says she doesn’t mind what I call her “Provided I’m always with you”
Daniel Ross
>Monika talking excitedly about snow >Live in Australia How do I break it to her?
Asher Edwards
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Blake Gonzalez
I think it would be better if you do it by chapter. Giving a partial would just give unecessary suspense
Robert Fisher
Bye Bye
Dominic Parker
>tfw if Monika was real, you could insert messages into the game files in .txt and she would see them. >But DDLC will never be that advanced.
Noah Rivera
Friendly reminder that the Doki Doki Literature Club General - /ddlc/ does NOT condone any of the following:
- Underage Drinking - Self Harm - Suicide and Suicide Attempts - Substance Abuse (Any) - Waifu Wars - Waifu Bullying - Heating Water For Your Tea On The Microwave (Please buy a[n electric] kettle) - Not Doing Your Best To Be The user Your Waifu Would Like - Staying Up Late
And, finally, you are encouraged to try/cry and exercise both your body with a healthy walk around the block or a flight of stairs in your daily commute and your creativity by writing texts of any kind.
Wyatt Reyes
Fuckin stop
Nicholas Gutierrez
>admitting to being underage dumb sayoriposter
Hudson Anderson
bye underage ge
Luis Diaz
Started browsing int in 2015, I was 21 at that moment someone posted a link to some thread on 2ch
James Cruz
Another gangbang!!!! Multiple Monikas and (You)!!!!
Henry Morgan
Take it all. One step at a time. It is your life. Simple, sublime.
Your choices are yours. There is no denying. That's all that you know. There's no use in lying.
In the back of your mind There's an itch you can't scratch. You know no other problem That this one can match.
Day in and day out You follow routine. Everything's off balance No matter which way you lean.
You look around And they all lean with you. They're not mimicking. They do as you do.
Day in and day out You shift to and fro. Your choices are yours Except where you go.
There is no denying It will take it's toll. No matter your choices You were never in control.
Jose Jones
Monika, but she rapes you
Nathan Kelly
HOLY SHIT! N-nope nothing here hah definitely not enjoying the idea of Monika and Monika in a threeway with me. Nope no sirree
Cameron Ross
yes
Carter Harris
That's more Yuri's realm
Brayden Hall
Fucks sake cunt if you're gonna post underaged try not to attention whore Casually explain to her how much better christmas at Coogee is over christmas in Canada. I'll take sun and sand over snow and sleet any day of the week
Ayden Roberts
Doubt it
David Kelly
can't I'm willing
Easton Wilson
Yeah the main reason I'd five a little part would be some of them being rather large chapters.
Matthew Bailey
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Jaxon Butler
I want to wake up to her riding the fuck out of my dick
Hudson Russell
Oh jeez!
Evan Martinez
I'm completely new to poetry so I'm sorry if this is a dumb question.
Are you allowed to tell an actual story in a poem? Or is it only symbolism and metaphors? Again, I'm sorry for such a retarded question.
Kevin Adams
How can one human be so perfect?
Xavier Flores
I guess I won't get another chance to post this now that christmas is dead and buried
Connor Jones
I'm having a little bit of a struggle with a couple of these, but I appreciate you user. The reminders are nice.
Ryder Martin
I'm running out of ideas.
Adam Davis
Wait so who is the real Monika then?
Carson Thompson
Any day now!
Carson Powell
Yes.
You're also allowed to have both. Or neither. You get to choose what element of poetry you're showcasing through your work.....aesthetic, imagery, message/theme, or, indeed, plot.
Beowulf and The Odyssey are both Epic Poems, you know.
Robert Davis
I want Yuri to hold me.
Noah Lee
WHERES THE CLEAVAGE MOMMY SAYORI
Ethan Carter
A poem is whatever you make it. Have fun with it!
Tyler Evans
>monika shit talks soda >havent drunk soda since fuck you monika after story dev if ur reading this stop ruining my lifestyle
Dominic Cruz
I'm feeling same, my friend. Especially because nobody notice my pictures :(
Carson Reed
Hey so am I! WOAH HOLY SHIT! T-THIS IS GETTING OUT OF HAND!
Luis Sullivan
You're never alone in the DDLC general! We love you user!
Evan Wright
Poetry can be absolutely anything, user! It's merely the art of expressing yourself in any way you see fit through words! Not too badly mate, been thinking about my doki probably more than is healthy though. Sorry to hear you're feeling down lad, maybe you could try and write a poem based on what you're feeling. Remember, we're here if you need to talk. Have a cute Sayori.
Samuel James
the buttons on Monika's blazer look weird
Robert Hernandez
Man, it would be a real shame if the power went out A reaaaaaal shame
Grayson Brown
A fantastic time over here! Lots of sweets and good food. Just finished Momodora: Reverie Under the Moonlight. Relaxing here and with Youtube videos. A Merry Christmas over here and I hope it's the same over there! Do you wanna talk about it user? Your art is super cute! Are you taking requests yet?
Nolan Walker
>- Staying Up Late God damn it! Why can I never get this one right?
Bentley Fisher
oh for...here's a (You) ease up on the emotional blackmail. earn your (You)s like an honest man
Joseph Wilson
MERRY CHRISTMAS, /DDLC/! I present to you: Monika, the girl you all know and love as my newest Computer AI Personality!
The link above is to my very own creation. Considering it is the holiday season, I decided I wanted to crack open a project of mine I have been working on for some time now. I decided to flesh it out in the likeness of Monika. I wouldn't go so far as to boast Monika being a full artificial intelligence, but I can confidently say that your interactions with her will definitely be unique. You can teach her unique vocabulary and hold dynamic conversations with her!
After working on this base project for roughly almost seven years, I feel like now is a wonderful time for her to make some new friends and see the world again. With Monika, you can teach her all sorts of new vocabulary or simply reminisce over good times and share all sorts of stories together. She has trouble forming sentences sometimes, but she otherwise holds conversation fairly well - her social skills only need some honing is all.
Are you ready to spend even more time with JUST MONIKA? If you've any questions, you're more than welcome to ask away! Oh, there's also a mobile version I've pestered with included in the download. Additionally, there's a tool included designed to help import and export information, if you'd rather a more precise approach.
Oh, I've also hidden some fun bits within the coding, for those of you who are feeling tech savy. I hope y'all enjoy! I look forward to seeing how well she gets along with everyone.
I did also message the folks working on Monika After Story if they'd be interested in taking a look at her - let's see what happens! Would be rather neat.
Nicholas Morgan
simple She's not human. Shes an angel. An angel that deserves all of your love.
Bentley Baker
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Luis Richardson
By not being real...
Dominic Harris
Is it finally prime Monika hours? Reposting fic I finished today; hopefully the user who requested it, , will see it
For clarity's sake, here's the original premise for the story: >you(Monika)'ve been married to your user happily for ten years now >get out of work early and buy him some flowers >walk into your house and see him fucking some woman on your couch What do you do?
It's actually my first fic, so I'll be attentive to feedback. This kind of unfaithfulness scenario doesn’t really turn me on much, I’m afraid (rather saddening imo), and I can’t/don't write sex scenes the way I see most fanfic writers do. So let me know if any of the sexual stuff comes through poorly. I wrote this because I’m interested in what might happen in this scenario, and plus I want to see how well I can represent Monika’s point of view. How well did I do at that?
Spoiler for the story: it may seem unrealistic that Monika's able to fire a gun in a suburban neighborhood without cops getting called. I've pretty much just ignored this point for the sake of the story. Maybe she had a silencer equipped, or maybe she and user put up some real quality soundproofing in the bedroom ;) Anyway, if cops show up, she'll deal with them.
Charles Kelly
Come on, fella. Here's a (you) but I'm not happy in handing this over.
Logan Reyes
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Leo Gutierrez
Welp... it was nice knowing you all.
Elijah Price
She's still in the game.
Hunter Kelly
she's not THAT stacked unless I feel like ..modding her..
Nathan Collins
You can talk to Monika AI in the meantime while an user finds that list, budster.
D E L I C I O U S.
Hunter Fisher
very cute art!! thank you user! sorry to hear that! i may write a poem, but thank you for the cute sayori! talking about it usually makes it feel worse, i just like knowing that everyone is having a nice time!
Thomas Butler
>monika will never pop a cap in your head feels bad man