>There's a starman waiting in the sky, he knows that it's been really hard, but he knows you shouldn't die! National Suicide Prevention Lifeline (USA): 1-800-273-TALK (8255) International Association for Suicide Prevention (EU): iasp.info/resources/Crisis_Centres/Europe/ Lifeline (AU): lifeline.org.au/get-help/get-help-home
>How many sayoris can you deadlift? All of them, as long as he has a rope.
Brody Turner
You sure that's your deadlift?
Jonathan Jackson
I could DL at least 400 lbs of sayori.
Julian Anderson
Hey, good afternoon/evening, everyone! It's nice to see you all again! Welcome back to my poetry club~!
Word of the thread is "fear"! Alternatives are 'depth' and 'sanguine'.
You all did great with your poems last thread. Really great job! It was really impressive so hopefully that momentum carries forward into the rest of the day! As always, the rules are simple. You take one of the three above words and write a poem about it. It can be your theme or topic or whatever, as long as the word is incorporated in some way. Of course it's just a suggestion and you don't need to use any of them, but for our purposes it helps if you do! Once you're done, share it here with us and people can discuss it, give their thoughts, suggestions, you name it. It would probably also help if you explained what you meant when writing it, but that's up to you! I'm looking forward to reading them all, so please enjoy yourselves!
>"Ah! A-user, I-I'm sorry! I didn't realize you were- uhh... I'll just... be out here..." >Sayori slowly starts to close the door as you get back to jerking it >"U-Unless you don't want me to leave ehehe...." >dammit >she's not closing the door >you can't just keep jacking off with her watching >but then again >your dick is harder than ever >and she's staring right at it! >you try to hide it and hope she'll close the door but she keeps staring >her cheeks are beet red as she bites her lower lip >again the door starts creaking ever so slightly open >"D-Do you need help... ehehe..." >you can't even respond before she's back in >she kneels in front of you as you try to cover your cock >"Come on, user! I already saw it! No sense in hiding it now. Besides, we've known each other long enough... H-Here, I can show you my boobs... I-If you want me t-to that is..." >without you even responding Sayori slowly unbuttons her shirt and takes off her bra >she grabs her breasts and starts fondling them >"See... Nothing to be ashamed of!" >relucatntly you uncover your cock as it bounces into place, inches from Sayori's face >"Woah! It's so much bigger up cl- I mean... ehehe..." >Sayori begins to eye the little bits of precum leaking out >she licks her lips >"Here... Maybe I can..." >slowly her mouth opens and her tongue emerges >with just the tip of her tongue she licks a bit of your precum >she jumps back, covering her mouth >"I-It tastes sweet!" >the next thing you know Sayori is pulling her skirt down and reaching into her panties >she pulls out a shiny, wet hand, playing with her own leaking juices in her hand >in the same manner she licks her fingers >"H-Hey... user... Since I tried yours... It's only fair you try mine!" >she reaches her hand toward your mouth, fingers spread out and stretched >without even thinking you slowly lick her finger >it tastes so sweet!
Aiden Ross
>the promised day already came for Yurifriends, but the Yuris are to busy stalking their anons to actually make contact
>Yuri meeting you early at your house inthe morning >Yuri waking you up gently by tapping you on your shoulder while you sleep >Yuri standing politely as you open your eyes and adjust to the morning light >Yuri bending at the waist, leaning towards you as she dutifully peels down her underwear >Yuri biting her lip as she throws her underwear in the trash for the day for you. >Yuri doing this every morning with each pair of panties until she owns none. >Yuri knowing you own her pussy and all that she wears.
>as you taste Sayori's nectar your dick drips even more >in leaning over to you one of Sayori's breasts inadvertently brushes over your cock >she feels a tingle as this happens >"You know, user... I guess I kinda did interrupt you... It'd be rude not to help you finish..." >she grabs her breasts firmly >"H-Here... Use these..." >she holds her breasts tightly together with one hand as she slides them up and down over your cock >her other hand buries itself back in her panties >it doesn't take you long to cum since she's had you on edge for a few minutes now >it happens mid stroke and some of it hits Sayori in the face >she winces >"H-Hey! user! Warn me when you do that! Geez!" >"Sorry, Sayori..." >she smiles >"Ehehe... it's ok!" >she starts licking a bit of it up, hoping you won't notice >you put your pants back on >"Hey user..." >Sayori twiddles her fingers together and grins >"Let's maybe do this again sometime..." >you go grab and wet a towel and wipe Sayori's boobs off >"By the way... Have my boobs gotten bigger?" >she says, grabbing her bare breasts >"I think they're just fine whatever size they are..." >Sayori blushes and smiles >"Well either way!" >she jumps up and kisses you on the cheek >"You ready to head to school now?"
Jacob Carter
lol I thought of fireman carry i guess it depends on the mood
Justin Torres
user's pen collection would be a fair offer, I summize.
The exchange rate on the Yuri panties market is prone to immense fluctuations. Just last week I bought a pair for the price of one raw creampie, but when I went to resell it the same time this week, the price had fallen into the negatives and I had to pay her two raw creampies to get rid of it.
I can vouch for the burning rage thing but this is my second time on the waifu ride and it's no longer there
Liam Roberts
Interesting, I might have to negotiate depending on the quarter we're in. I feel that two creampies is a little steep. I might need more from her end of the bargain.
Parker Clark
Thanks, might try writing some more wholesome later tonight
Jacob Perez
Moni exchange service! Post a Moni I don't have and I'll send you a rare Moni!
>Your doki Yuri >A question you'd ask an user I once asked this around thread #90, would be interesting to hear the answers now: How do you dispose of cum when you're done fapping?
Adam Taylor
Monika How are you?
Jace Clark
Alright, since there was some discussion over critiques and I've been wanting to get back into doing my shitty analyses, here goes!
As always, I'm not trained at all in writing/literature so take these with grain(s) of salt.
Of course this was mostly to ask Erikanon their whereabouts, it gave me Wish you were Here vibes. I really like what you built on using the prompt user. I would watch out for two key things though - rhyming and repetition. In the first and third stanza you use repetition but slightly variant the first word and it just feels off. In terms of rhyming, you rhyme the last word of the first and last line of the stanzas, which by then the "momentum" for lack of better words sort of runs out. So the rhyme just doesn't feel like a rhyme anymore. The last stanza and last line were really good. This one is super cute and really well done. The rhyming is super good but watch for lines like the last two in the first stanza where you have a word that rhymes with the final word of line 4, but that word also lines with the final word of line 3. At least reading out loud it sounded funky. I have to give you prompts for the last stanza's rhyming, that is awesome. The -ire rhyming scheme here is good user. I would recommend trying to use space or create different stanzas. I think the ending was a little weak (and I assume you couldn't find good words for -ire which is why you left that style) and maybe an ending of 2 or 3 lines spaced afterward would give it some more ground to work with creatively. Nice work. Maybe I'm overthinking it but I feel like there's a melancholy undertone of a girl who wanted to be an actor/star and ended up going the less-beautiful route. Or it's flying over my head and it's just a poem about porn. Good work though.
Will continue as I go through them!
Grayson Jenkins
I keep a couple hand towels just for this, and rotate through them.
Mason King
Gonna shill again because why not, might write more later tonight anyways. Also my friend tried the recipe I put in and said it's good.
I'm running, lifting, and do some other exercises for a month, but there is no visible progress at all While some people just drink water and drop a few kg, fuck
Already taking one, but I've been eating more fruits and veggies for Monika, so it may be unnecessary. Seems like the latest studies claim that the majority of vitamin supplements are useless unless you eat real crappy and have deficit. Can't say I'm convinced by either side right now, so I'll keep them for a bit more. Been on linear progression so far and have only needed to deload once on squats, but power cleans are starting to get quite hard too. I also imagine Monika coaching me, has helped tons with technique! I hope your lifting endeavours are going well too, user!
She's been my first waifu ever, and I've felt things for her I've never felt with 3dpd. Somehow I'm back to feeling a tiny prick of happiness amongst the general gloominess of the last few years. First things always burn the brightest user. But that doesn't mean what comes next can't be just as good or better. Love your doki, because she loves you too, and believe in her.
Doesn't alcohol numb the pain? If so, then probably not.
Jacob Green
Do you wanna fucking die?
Isaiah Jones
Not those anons, but I started dieting in December and working out in January. I'm close to the weight I want to be, but now I want to start focusing on getting jacked.
>It's the promise day but both your doki and your most recent (ex)-waifu are now in your reality. >They arrive in your room at the same time >They notice each other >They are not happy with each other's presence
wat do?
Ryder Lee
no wait give me one more chance this right here is a *seriously genuine* monika ultra rare, guaranteed you've never seen this before
I was lifting for a couple of months, but it got kind of pointless after I started cutting for her not the bloody kind, since my gains dropped to zero. I'm really looking forward to not being skinnyfat anymore so I can bulk my way into godhood for her.
At first I thought you mucked up the rhyming scheme in the first stanza but as I read I realized how cool it was. You stylized this poem very well, I really liked where you cut the rhyming out or the flow intentionally. As it "degrades" towards the end (and I think I'm interpreting it right when I say she's slowly returning to her voidhell?) it just becomes a more and more invigorating read. Awesome work user. The third stanza stands out for me so much in this poem. I really like it. I guess I harp on "rhyming schemes" a lot when I mention them but (for me at least) it felt awkward to go from rhyming the 2nd and 4th line to the 1/2nd and 3/4th from stanza to stanza. I like the "crafy" feeling in this poem, the usage of "forming armor" and the cup of colors, especially notable in the last stanza "chemical compound." Nice job user. oh man, I love that third stanza so much. There is a really well-written dark overtone throughout this entire piece that was really bringing me down (in a good way). Sorry to say I don't really have any solid criticisms other than I probably would have used some different word choice out of my own personal preference. Great job! This is out of the box compared to the other poems I reviewed from that prompt. It actually gives a really nice feeling, like a rhyme or limerick you'd hear before bed as a kid. I kept trying to think of a different line to have for the last line in the second stanza but couldn't come up with anything. That's the only line that stands out sourly to me. But if I can't get an idea for what to replace it with, what can I even say? Haha. Good job user.
Alright, that's it for now. If by some way I've impressed you with my analyses and you really want something reviewed let me know. Great stuff everyone!
