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Reposting from last thread. Coming Soon.

(note: I am not Beri)

You got me all excited user.

Quick swap on my blind picks:

>Xeno-chan
>Middle one on 4th row
>Wizard

What would the perfect fetish CYOA be like, /cyoag/?

A blank page.

Nonexistent.

One that covers every possible fetish.

The question wasn't addressed to you celibates.

Like the Autism Prison CYOA, except you get points for how freaky you are, and spend them on freaky powers. Or you get powers by bonding yourself to particular fetishes, which requires you to indulge in them.

Just saying, you won't be able to create the perfect fetish CYOA. You're going to piss someone off.

Something that could lend a story or at least the start of a story to it, there are a few cyoa out there that already fulfill the need to allow as many fetishes as possible but most of those don't have much going for them story wise or even enough in them to let you start your own.

It magically grants me powers to fulfil my fetishes in real life.

Tbisili

Hah, can't disagree with that one. That indeed would be the perfect CYOA.

It would a be a proper fantasy cyoa riddled with not so subtle and subtle fetishes. Ex. Furry races. Slavemaster class. Gluttonous giant lamia companion. Etc.

Just start hormones already.

>Something that could lend a story or at least the start of a story to it,
What story would would like to see in a fetish CYOA?

I don't wanna be a girl though, I just want all women to be taller than me and with huge breasts.

>Slavemaster class. Gluttonous giant lamia companion.
Anything can be made lewd. You can see a amazon being drowned by a kraken and its either tragic, a great fight, or your fetish because you watch tentacle porn.
So yeah, before you go around shitposting about CYOAs like that...

Hmm I'm a fan of near future sci-fi. Something in that setting would be nice. Something involving the Club scene in it would be cool.

Or maybe it'll piss someone on?

Easy enough to insert TG into that setting at least. Not sure about other fetishes.

Aliens. Wonderful source for all kinds of fetishes cause you can make them as anatomically diverse as you want and their methods for sexual reproduction are open for fetish fuel too.

Slave owner

This. Saw a comic the other day featuring an alien girl with an anemone-like vagina that put out mild electric shocks. You can be pretty creative with xenobiology.

Or genetic experiments and stuff. I can imagine that stuff and nanobots would be all the rage with party crazy college students.

Someday when I finish my current CYOA I want to make one like this.

>Abomination
>After the End
>Form: Teleport
>Form: Entropic
>Form: Technoform
>God Power: Fissure
>Empowerment: Knowledge
>Empowerment: Worship
>Prophet: Inventor
>Prophet: Traveller
>Prophet: Priest
>Divine Gift: Resilience
>Divine Gift: Restructure
>Dominion: Summoning Sites
>Minion: Lesser (Form: Insectoid, Affinity: Cyber, Skill: Lightning, Skill: Composite Body, Skill: Toughness, Skill: Speed)
>Minion: Humanoid (Form: Mammalian, Affinity: Cyber, Skill: Genius, Skill: Get Back Up, Skill: Smithing, Skill: Toughness)
>Underworld: Test of Worthiness (Mechanical, Manifest Deity, Steward, Realm Guardians, Caverns, Crystals, Dungeons, Restoration Cycle)

Mecha-Cthulhu time.

Get cracking then.

>Deathly (9,9)
World - Land of Fantasy

>Form
Shapeshifter (8,9)
Twin Threats (6,9)
Lord of Hosts (5,9)

>Powers
Change of Heart (3,9)
golemspark (2,9)
Worldgate (0,9)

>Empowerment
Monuments (0,8)
Underworld (free)

>Prophet
Hero

>Gifts
magecraft [0,7]

>Dominion
free avatar (0,5)
summoning sites (0,4)
hellgate (0,3)
centre of magic [0,2]

>Minions
Lesser[5]: (0,1)
form-undead [free]
affinity-death [free]
power-divine focus [3]
equip-mounts* [1]
skill- spawner [0]

Mount[5]:
power-divine focus [3]
skill- get back up [2]
skill -spawner [1]
affinity - death [0]

>underworld
Judgement [5 +5]
Manifest Deity [9]
Realm Guardians [8]
restoration cycle [6]
Forest [5]
Citadel [3]
Halls of the Gods [2]
Steward [0]

My territory has summoning sites constantly pushing out lesser minions. I also have two avatars active 24/7 pushing out lesser minions.

My lesser minions can summon two golems or convert an enemy when they die. They can also summon spawn with the same powers. They can also summon mounts with the same powers. The mounts can also summon spawn with the same powers. The lesser-spawn can also summon mounts with the same powers. The mounts summoned by lesser-spawn can also summon spawn with the same powers. All mounts listed above can actually do this twice each. Everything listed above can summon undead allies.

In other word, each lesser minion is really maybe 20 minions.
Facing 1 lesser minion who goes full-golem will also mean fighting ~60 golems. Plus your dead (and anything you kill) will be raised to fight against you.
Facing 1 lesser minion who goes full-corruption will convert maybe 40 of your numbers to my cause. Anyone so converted who dies will swell my underworld, making me more powerful.

In my Underworld, my Realm Guardians have the same abilities as my Lesser Minions.

Believe me user, a lot of crack has gone into this.

shit, was the last thread only up for like five hours?
The fuck happened?

Another one of Beri's gallery, and another healthy does of arguing/shitposting.

weren't there two people waiting for the new thread to release OC, on top of Beri?

They probably decided to skip this one too in anticipation of the finished gallery.

But we need something while we wait.
I'd post one of mine that hasn't been posted in awhile, like the toy story one, but I'm still at school.

Also, for my waifu CYOA, what's your guys' preferred age? Obviously it'll be varied, but I'm thinking around the 20-30 range with 1 or 2 outside of those.

20-30 sounds good.

18-25 if you're not doing lolis. Teenagers a shit and 30+ is pretty much just the realm of milfs and cougars to me. Which aren't bad, but I wouldn't make it the median unless it's literally the milf and cougar CYOA.

20-30 is fine. As long as it's above 18, you won't see me completely voiding it from my options.

18-35 is pretty reasonable. Anything over that and you're just appealing to the MILF hunters, anything under that and Chris Hansen starts telling half the people in the thread to take a seat.

19-30 is good enough for me.

This is done. How'd those blind picks turn out?

I think I waited too long to start the gallery. I need to get to sleep soon. I'll stay up for a little bit though to answer any questions. I won't do a typo-fix until tomorrow. On that note, remember to please point out typos.

Alright lets give this a go. Taking warrior god start and "After the End" world.

Avatar: I get demonforged for free and I'll also take burning form, shapeshifter, flight, pillar of strength, pillar of hope, and lord of hosts.
Avatar is primarily a monster of battle whom will be capable of devastation on the field of battle and be able to lead my followers in battle.

Powers: Start with firestorm and I'll also buy Resurrect, Pacify, bolt, and mass reanimate.

Empowerment: My free start of battle and I'll buy worship.

Prophet: I'll take the hero.

Divine gifts: Resilience

Skipping domain due to lack of points.

Minions: Humanoid: Form reptilian, Affinity Fire, Skill healer, Skill toughness, Skill smithing, Skill armsmaster, Skill hypersenses, Equip armor.
In short they shall be my warriors to aid my followers who are in need, probably draconic in appearance.

Underworld: Test of worthiness: Mountainous, Forest, Manifest Deity, Legendary beasts, Servants, Gladiators, Citadel, and restoration cycle.
Afterlife is kind of sucky if you can still fall susceptible to permadeath.


This world may be cinders but it shall be reforged. To those whom come to me I shall protect you. With me your enemies shall be destroyed, and to those whom die and are worthy shall be granted eternity within my domain. I will aid you in the reconquest of your world from whatever monsters may besiege you or men attempt to doom you. The finest of your warriors will be reborn to continue this conquest.

Essentially I'm trying to do is be a deity in a dying world that's taken a liking to a group and wishes to see them succeed over their enemies and destroy all that would try to oppose them. If the world rebuilds I'll probably be something closer to Norse mythos.

My choices turned out pretty well.
Quest
Melancholic Joker
Ancient Sword
Ancient sword has a typo though
> The hero nevers needs

>Alien Homemaker
>Ancient Sword
>Prestidigitation

Best decisions ever.

College age is always my preference.

Wasn't there a cyoa about being the monster girl or something? I know we just ran through the choosing two to help you through the world but I could have sworn there was one about having to be the monster girl.

Quest, Ancient Sword and Demon Maid.

Get the Swordsman and the Demon to help me, easy money.

It this the one you are talking about?

Interesting. Dusk Metropolis didn't quite turn out how I thought it would... But maybe it's because of how I cropped it? In the full image you can tell that the pillar of light is a nuclear explosion.

Anyway, I'll take Apocalypse Me, Spacial Seer, and Light Adventure. Have some fun adventures in the apocalyptic far future, using my spacial powers to survive and thrive.

Apocalypse me, light adventure, suddenly breasts.

Always have a trump. Grow my breasts to get me out of any jam

I don't like that Apocalypse Me erases your memories.

Oh, does it sound that way? Maybe I should reword it. It only erases your memories of how you got into the situation. You remember everything else about your life.

Well my blind picks were Apocalypse Me, Demon Maid, and Suddenly Breasts. And it seems like my guesses were right on the money,

I am now a sexy girl in an apocalyptic future and have a demon maid to help me in all my endeavours though I'm not certain if I'd want to swap her out for the Lamia Sorceress so I could get my own telekinetic powers.

What I wasn't expecting though was to get magical boob growing (and shrinking back) powers that also make boobs become existences best shields, that is super useful in the future I find myself with my current lack of powers, well at least until my pet drone helps me hack and gain some future tech.

Yeah, the fuzzy memory bit sounds like it's for all your memories, not just the ones added by Apocalypse Me. I'd clear it up a little bit.

Apocalypse me
flying fish frier
melancholic joker

I guess I am the eternal flying fish flier sidekick with her mopey assassin and robotic side-sidekicks. Or something. At least I'm the cute girl.

>Apocalypse Me
>Under Arrest
>Spatial Seer

Sweet future adventures with a cool sidekick and cool powers. Also I'm a girl. I'd never get bored.

All right, definitely lamia choice then. Breakthrough is also very tempting.

So Suddenly breasts, alien homemaker, and lamia sorceress.

I'm absolutely using the manipulation of matter to capitalize on it so I can afford having a family with hundreds of kids, and I can probably just make our food/house bigger so I can buy less of that. I can probably capitalize on the breast enchantments too with permanent, real, augmentations.

Question time.
Does the alien housewife get jealous, or is she OK with sharing, because it sounds like lamia's gonna want me after the 11 years is up.

Is Lamia only upset at using her own taught spells on her, or any kind of spell at all, IE breast enchantment?

Breast enchantment is permanent, unless I say so, correct?

And of all people, why did alien single me out? Did I remind her of someone on a sitcom? I don't mind of course.

Another good one. Thanks again for still using my image.

Also, turning people into objects that can still see, hear, feel and speak would be a good crime deterrent really. Sentence criminals to 6 months as an anvil, or a couple years as a horseshoe or something. Death by being turned into a cigarette and smoked.

>Does the alien housewife get jealous...
The Alien Homemaker would get jealous, but in a get kinda depressed sort of way rather than a walk out on you sort of way. You could always find a replacement for the lamia, maybe throw one of the kids at her. She doesn't necessarily want to do lewd things.
>Is Lamia only upset...
She'd be upset at any spell, unless she gives you permission to use it.
>Breast enchantment is permanent...
Yes, they stay large indefinitely by default.
>And of all people, why did the alien single me out?
Love at first sight.
>Another good one...
thanks!

I'm going to interpret Breakthrough to grant immortality.

Breakthrough, Spacial Seer, Lamia Sorceress (matter manipulation first).

Yeah, they grant you infinite sexual stamina and immortality. I mean, if you died, the entire dimension of personalized yandere tentacle monsters would get lonely.

Anyone have the alien waifu cyoa? Can't find it in any of the archives.

On the, they are willing to share part, does that mean only with the other phantoms or with actually living folks? (or do I have to master them first before I let myself ever get close to anyone?)

Which one you looking for, there was a few, any description you can give of an option in it would work to help me find it for you.

Sounds to me like they're only willing to share amongst themselves.

Regular people are fine, too, as long as you don't start ignoring them.

Whelp, the lives and safety of everyone around me depends on my dick and my skill with it.

That is something I didn't think I would be saying today... or ever.

It's alright, I literally just found it. It was the one with the siren and the superhacker.

>You could always find a replacement for the lamia, maybe throw one of the kids at her. She doesn't necessarily want to do lewd things.

So wait, could I like, just invite her to live with us, just as like a friend to keep company? Or be neighbours or something? Would that be agreeable for both lamia and alien wife?

>Deathly
>City of Gods
>Face of Terror, Psychokinetic, Entropic, Wrathful Avatar, Unhinger
>World gate, Mass Reanimate, Area Banish, Fire Storm
>Underworld, Fear
>Traveller
>Magecraft, Resiliance, Strength
>Hellgate, Free Avatar
>Humanoid (Skill - Terror, Genius, Perpetual, Ghostly, Get Back Up; Affinity - Death, Fire; Form - Transformation Reptilian; Equip - Armor)
>Test of Worthiness
>Legendary Beasts, Realm Guardians, Forest, Manifest Deity, Floating Islands, Wetlands, Glacial, Organic, Hall of Gods, Gladiators, Dungeons, Weather Mastery, Changer of Forms, Steward.

I am Death and Fear, these other Gods have caused the world to stagnate and only allow it to develope when one of them has a tantrum. They have grown arrogant with their control and forgotten what Fear and Death mean. I will take their souls.

So my main aim to reintroduce death to a world that has forgotten it. Main way of fighting is to simply cause everything else to freeze in fear as we take them, or just out tank the enemy. Worst comes to worst I'll just cause a World Gate into my Underworld and have my Beasts of Fear and Realm Guardians help, or just Banish everything.

My underworld is knock off of the Tower from Tower of God, only if you clear the tower you have effectively conquered fear and death, and I will allow you to be truly immortal. Only one mortal has done so and She became my Prophet.

> Apocalypse Me
>Spatial Seer
>Discovered Nature

This seems like a decent set-up to go on glorious adventures, between all the tech around, the magic powers, and the plants. The plant option made me inordinately happy.
I thought about taking Cliffs of Life to kick start an attempt to rebuild civilization, but I was a bit scared that they would eventually eat the universe by continuing to grow. I guess it would solve the entropy issue, though.

Yeah, as long as she can keep toying with you, the lamia's fine. As for the alien, she'll see it as a platonic student-teacher relationship, unless you let things get out of hand.

The cliffs do not grow as fast as the universe expands. The cliffs are the opposite of entropy. They're the embodiment of energy and life, of mixing things up and seeing what happens. In fact, it would take years and years for them to fill in an ocean. And the planet isn't losing water, so it will just shift coastlines a bit.

So how full are the implications of fire and steel with "As long as the crystal remains in tact, you'll survive" Is it like a Phylactery?

So you're some kind of metal golem lich with it? I'm assuming you still take injury, sickness and aging with it so if you DON'T replace your parts with metal you'll eventually look like some kind of undead if you're using it for immortality.

I take it you can connect metal parts to the crystal with "wires" and make yourself into some sort of cyborg without replacing your entire body right away. Might even figure out how to incorporate electronics or mechanical machines for some actual cyborg like benefits.

If I combine that with Prestidigitation and the Lamia's mind magic I could illusion my own mind into getting my sense of touch back if I go full robot.

Even if I don't, I'd probably take those two for the abilities anyway.

It's a pretty decent wizard alchemist combo.

At first, you're just human with a rock in you. However, you can add robot arms and things as you see fit. The crystal doesn't mean human immortality. It means your soul and mind will live on without it. It can eventually age and die. Should your human body die in a sudden accident, you can trust the fairy to at least get you set up with the basics to continue living as a steel golem.
Yeah, you can be a cyborg. Actually as long as metal is touching your flesh, you can control it. To that extent, you can pick locks just by tapping them and operate heavy machinery like cranes and tanks by merely touching them.
Prestidigitation wouldn't help in the slightest in getting the sense of touch back as that's the main sense that prestidigitation does NOT fool. The mind magic could kinda rig up something, but it wouldn't respond well to stimulus. That is, a spell of "feel a feather tickling your nose" could be cast, for example, but it would make you feel that pre-defined feeling. Making a spell that detects what you're touching, determines what to make it feel like, and beam that sense into your mind would be too complex to do. You do still have a basic sense of touch through metal, though. There's no pain or pleasure, but you can feel basic pressure, heat, etc.

Well, this has been up for an hour. I need to get some sleep. I'll respond to any other questions & post a typo-foxed version tomorrow morning.

Yeah that's the one. Thanks user

No problem, happy to help.

Quick Start
Earth
Technoform (9)
Psychokinetic (8)
Wrathful Avatar (7)
Pillar of Strength (6)
Firestorm (5)
Mass Reanimate (4)
Golemspark (3)
Bolt (2)
Worldgate (0)

Monuments (9)
Knowledge (8)
Souls (7)

Inventor (7)
Magecraft (6)
Immortality (5)
Summoning Sites (4)
Free Avatar (2)

Lesser (1)
Affinity-Cyber (4)
Skill-Genius (3)
Skill-Invisibility (2)
Skill-Speed (1)
Skill-Healer (0)
Judgement (0)
Manifest Deity (4)
Forest (3)
Mechanical (2)
Dungeons (1)
Servants (0)

I will use my power to provide vast wealth, powerful magics, and immortality to those who promise to worship me (or anyone who promises their soul). Should they chose to worship me, I will grant them access to my minions (great for cheap labor) in exchange for spreading my gospel (Knowledge) and constructing statues in my honor (Monuments) which many of my soul deals will be held at (Souls and Knowledge).

Methodology: Dominator
World: Galactic Federation.

Form:
Pillar of Strength
Pillar of Hope
Unearthly Charm
Lord of Hosts
Mindrobber
Illusionist

Two things here. Unearthly Charm and Mindrobber make me really good socially. The rest make me an unstoppable battlefield commander. Both are useful logistically.

God powers:
Aether Passage

Yes, there's FTL, but this is better. The other powers that cost just one aren't really useful, Worldgate, Resurrect, and Change of Heart are good but probably not worth two points.

Empowerment:
Monuments
Underworld.

The former because I like them, the latter because it allows me to build monuments where they can't be destroyed. Both are good for a slow strategy, which I expect to take.

My prophet shall be the leader. A planetary governor I suppose, his world shall be mine, the first of many and a holy capital.

Gifts: Magecraft. There's no other magic, so it will be a good gift.

Dominion:
Terrain warp
Hellgate
Summoning Sites
Whispers
Free Avatar

It's my dominion, so I want it to be mine. Terrain warp lets it reflect me, the whispers make sure immigrants are mine, the free avatar lets me inhabit my home properly. The summoning sites let my armies be built up rapidly and the Hellgate is mostly just a convenience for my people.

Minions:
I'll pick Humanoid, because intelligence is important and anyway it's what I have the right number of influence choices for.

Form:
Transformation: Great size.
Skill:
Speed
Toughness
Perpetual
Genius
Attraction
Smithing
Armsmaster
Hypersenses
Invisibility

Thanks to the Dominator bonus, my elites are not just unstoppable warriors, but also great builders and inventors. And I summon them from my body and mortals can summon them from the sites in my domain. Also they're beautiful and this good diplomats, plus waifus for my loyal servants.

Underworld: Test of Worthiness
Restoration Cycle and Citadel.
Manifest Deity
Forest, Ocean, Mountainous
Servants, Dungeons
My loyal people will come here and test themselves. When they die, which they likely will several times, they will respawn back at the beginning every seventh year. Those who reach my citadel in the center have the option to reincarnate. They also have the option to enjoy life as though they were kings within my citadel, adored by servants. The dungeons make up the route from the outskirts to my citadel, and are filled with treasures and boons, which I hope might entice even the living through my hell gate. The forest/mountain/ocean is just because I like that kind of thing.

>Light Adventure
>Prestidigitation
>Apocalypse Me

Welp.

Apocalypse Me, Quest, and (since I maintain a relatively lonely state) I'd end up tossing a coin to decide whether or not I take Ancient Sword or Melancholic Joker.

Everything looks grammatically good, too.

He means become a supervillain and unleash growth hormones around the world.

Do it. Only you know how to.

It looks like a question that asked "what would be your ideal fetish CYOA be?" was deleted. Was it because of the picture or are the mods tetchy tonight?

Well, let's test, I'll post my feedback for the enchante/d/ ring CYOA from the other page:

So much effort put into the structure for some spank fodder. It's actually quite well constructed.

So despite it being just for wanking, I want to edit and improve it. There's no contact information, but a lot of people and groups mentioned at the bottom. Anybody know how to reach out to them?
If not I may just take it on myself.

For organization and copy editing:
The writer misuses the word consequent a couple times.
It should really mention the numbers for "I'm Feeling Lucky" in the key for drawbacks.
All the names of abilities should probably be in full title case, instead of just one initial capitalization.

In fetishes, there's a certain obviousness to what the CYOA author enjoyed.

The biggest issue: you get to avoid incest for free (or get points to engage it), but pay points to avoid the much more ethically treacherous pregnancy fetish? That's nuts.

I really want an "anonymous" power that upgrades the "will not affect your life at large" aspect of drawbacks by making it so any kind of public lewdness is disassociated with your general reputation. Vanilla doesn't cover it, I don't care whether or not people think, eg, walking around in pet play bondage is normal; I want to be able to put on clothes afterward and walk around without random people going, "Hey, it's that bondage hermaphrodite!" Obviously it'd be incompatible with the various "public attention" drawbacks. It seems like the author just did not go in for anonymous humiliation. For now I suppose I'll have to be satisfied with masks.

I'm also almost surprised there's nothing like a combination of Attraction+refined and Metamorphosis and/or Magical Realm that transforms the people for the "involves people" drawbacks into your fetish (like futa, monster girls/boys, etc).

There are a few that feel like they're missing something.
It seems like there should be something inbetween Masochism and Painless where pain is felt as pleasure, but normal sexual pleasure is also still possible.

It feels like Receiving Position should allow pleasure from genitals, only preventing orgasm from them.

Really surprised there's no "higher frequency" level up from Glory Hole, or a Public Use step up involving being in stockades or some kind of machine.

Flabberghasted that the only serious S&M options are buried in the Bondage Capture complex. No daily spanking to put alongside daily glory hole or milking options. No "sex partners compelled to choke you", nor "partners gain an over-sized-penetration fetish and the ability to increase the size of their dicks and/or dildos at will while with you"; no breathplay, nipple clamps, electrostimulation, etc except the aforementioned Capture complex one.
Not even under punishments!

In rule ideas and clarifications:

Full Random looks like it was supposed to have more to it, or that "either" should've been dropped.

Occupation and Local Idol should probably say "require at least one job drawback".

Some of the drawbacks have inconsistent time frames and it might be a better idea to make them all, eg, in terms of weeks.
It's actually a little unclear whether or not the Neko-Chan ears need to be worn half of all times (possibly tabulated weekly) or literally at least 12 hours every day (or 8 sleeping hours and 8 waking ones, or a combination thereof).

It should also somewhere mention: for reference, a week is 168 hours, half of a week is 84 hours.

Oh, then the metal manipulation is a far bit more useful than I thought. I figured it needed to be touching the crystal itself. But it sounds like you can manipulate anything mechanical with a touch so long as you can directly touch one of it's metal components. If that negates a need for fuel for vehicles that'd be pretty awesome.

Between that and the Lamia's teachings, you basically have a mash-up of Edward Elric and Magneto with a bunch of other odd abilities.

>we need something
I'm waiting for your cyoa

For Nightmare, it could easily be read as They Come overriding the real world assault for avoiding them in sleep; which also makes Always feel like free points. It's easy to guess the intention was that avoiding the nightmares stacks real world attacks with the ones from They Come/They're Here.

Cross Dressing is a bit confusing for anybody with blurred gender identity. (Isn't it a standard of /d/ that we like being guys, but want to be The Little Girl for sexual purposes?)
At the very least, there should be something about the Interaction between Physical Change and Metamorphosis/Shapechanging/Futanari.
I'd go with "You may be a hermaphrodite, but must have the genitals and secondary sex characteristics that make you uncomfortable to exibit." I think I would make it into a blanket rule that if a drawback can't apply to you, part of the ring's power fades.

Fully Equipped should probably say something about what happens with the buttplug if you're abused. If they take it out, does it still count for your time?

Urethra Play sounds like it should have a * for consequences.

Under Bondage Sleep it seems unfair that there's no advantage at all to taking multiple subparts. Besides, toys could stack with either of the others.

Permanency should probably require at least one other disadvantage.

I use this in my build to make a ring with Permanency and No Breaks and a couple minor ones to get Invulnerable and Welfare Leech.

Then I make a second ring with about 50 points worth of advantages, including Unaging. I set it to take me back to 18, and when I get there I can take it off to take a vacation from sexual torture for a while, then put it back on to go back. Half on half off till the end of time. Metamorphosis to change my shape completely, and sleepless so I net get more time even though I take the whole bondage capture complex and bondage equipment complex and have to waste time with that.

8/10, some neat ideas, would fap again.

Oh, and I might make several more rings with just unaging and pro-choice on them, and fully random for drawbacks. Pick to be relocated to the city I'm in, mail them around to old friends.

tl;dr, 'cause I'm not reading four posts about how you whacked it to some text.
There is a highly small chance you added something that could be useful to future cyoas, but it's hidden.

Fire and Steel and Lamia Sorceress (mental magic then physical magic). The third choice is hard.
Apocalypse Me to be an unaging scrap ranging magic slinging adventurer I think.

Blinds were Fire & Steel, Demon Maid, and Prestidigitation. Went for "safe" picks because most of the options looked like they could end up being pretty dangerous. Got pretty lucky with the fairy at least, immortality AND a neat companion.

I'd keep Fire & Steel and go for Apocalypse Me. I don't think a full-body replacement is very appealing with this option, but the crystal should work with "power" armor and some other accessories as long as they are touching.

Third pick is a tough call. I could keep the Demon Maid, she would probably be better at playing scavenger than cleaning house, its her job to "tend my every need" after all. I could also take one of the more powerful magic options (NOT prestidigitation). Lamia Sorceress and Spacial Seer both have their ups and downs.

Think I'll choose the Lamia. From a practical standpoint she's probably the worst of the three options, but I love my snek even in dom form.

Physical magic first btw. Telekinesis is always useful, and I can turn things to metal for my fairy to melt, even "upgrading" common metals to things more suitable for a given purpose. In the post-apocalypse tech-heavy world I sort of expect at least some dangers will be mechanical in nature, making mental magic less reliable.

I usually don't go for the more troublesome options like Apocalypse Me, but it offers eternal youth (assuming I don't want to be a hunk of metal anytime soon) and be-the-girl, so it's worth it.

It's an old, pretty much dead CYOA. If you wanted to make a remake/update of it on your own I don't think anyone is going to stop you. I'd appreciate it myself actually.

Just be careful adding too many "light" drawback options because those points can really add up if someone is serious about making a practical build. For example, "collar" is already a no-brainier choice in most builds because it doesn't actually hinder you.

Oh, and if you do go over it, re-write that bit about stacking rings in the instructions. I knew what it wanted to be intuitively (you can't use the same drawbacks to pay for different perks at the same time), but trying to figure out what it was actually saying took like 20 minutes it was so roundabout.

To the guy in the last thread who said his favorite waifu CYOAs were Harem user's: I'm sure this entire community appreciates you for having to suffer this again.

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