/cyoag/ CYOA General

A, always.

>Sub being forced to give money to the Dom

Oy Vey! Sounds like a nightmare!

First page of what I've been working on is done. Full text in variably complete state is here:

pastebin.com/zC48ut6s

Suggestions for any area are appreciated, and especially mysteries and enemies since I'm not great at that. Input regarding aesthetic/layout is also welcome, though I'm afraid this is about the height of my technical ability.

If you see something that's confusing, unclear, or seems unbalanced, please let me know.

Also, not sure if they guy I was talking to last night saw my responses to his questions; they're here:

>pastebin.com/zC48ut6s
Question: Is there any downside to loading up on 12 classes? Anons are not ones to let quality of life get in the way of min-maxing, after all.

Not my cup of tea, friend. But looks good.

More CYOAs please.

It's twelve credits of classes, meaning it would be four classes total. I'm going to add more add-on credits to classes when I finalize the details for the first version (which is my next order of business) which will make this matter a bit more. For now, it boils down to "pick either three classes or four classes per year". I'll try to clarify that in the wording.
The downside of taking four is only that you're in class for pretty much the whole day, six days a week. There isn't a mechanical downside, I'm not sure what such a downside would entail or if there even needs to be one.

Cheers, thanks. What keeps it from being to your tastes?

>lol
Back to your shithole of a site.

Also, she plainly claimed to be herself in that post. Forgive me for assuming that poster is AA, I guess? You whiteknight faggots need to fuck off back to where you came from.

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I'll take a look at it when the full version comes out, but it looks great. In fact, you have inspired me to show the first image to a cyoa I'm working on.