I like this remember thing. Very on theme with the Abzan and their spirituality. I do think you should phrase it like Outlast, "Remember: (W) (Rules text)".
Got any more cards with this mechanic?, some more daring designs?
Zachary Barnes
>Zrugo's Revelation
Noah Thomas
Goddamnit, looks like this shitty thread is going to live.
Why is it so fucking hard for people to look into the archive and find the right template and image? Fucking seriously? Here, since you've demonstrated that you are, in fact, too fucking retarded to know how ANY of this shit works, let me do it all FOR YOU.
And pic attached is the latest primer. Jesus fuck, it's not that hard.
Isaiah Jones
Posted these at the tail end of the last thread, but it died. First full, extended draft of my set's green uncommons! Feedback much appreciated, as always.
These could benefit heavily from some pretty basic proofreading. I'm also of the opinion that cards without art feel a bit lazy or unfinished, but that's a subjective thing. You have some cool concepts here, but they're in major need of some polish. I really wanna see where you go with them, though.
Thomas Price
Glpyh-Etched Golem could just be a 0/0 for XG.
Augur is too cheap and/or too big.
Wurm could be one cheaper.
Why does a bird spirit that's clearly flying, not have flying? Change the creature type.
Weight of Authority is neat.
Caring about both permanents with cmc 5 or more and spells that cost 5 or more looks messy.
Chase Baker
>Forgot the primer image >Whole thread is ruined Kys my man.
Kevin Price
Cards without art are definitely unfinished yeah, it's a little hard though when you have cards that reference established lore characters. If I had any art skills I'd draw them myself. Also to the proofreading note I managed to somehow post the only two cards I have which still have fucking typos.
Parker Cook
>Glpyh-Etched Golem could just be a 0/0 for XG. I wanted it to have a minimum size. >Augur is too cheap and/or too big. Seems to me like an acceptable step down from Courser of Kruphix for the cost. >Wurm could be one cheaper. Probably. I made it super fat and super expensive to play into the set's big mana themes. >Why does a bird spirit that's clearly flying, not have flying? Change the creature type. There have been birds without flying as recently as Bronzebeak Moa. The human-bird-spirit thing is representative of part of the soul in Egyptian mythology, not actually a flying, flapping bird. >Weight of Authority is neat. Thanks! >Caring about both permanents with cmc 5 or more and spells that cost 5 or more looks messy. Quite the opposite, really. Permanents are usually spells first, so one plays really organically into the other. Caring about the mana spent on spells is the set's major theme, while caring about permanents is just the focus of one of the factions.
Thanks for the feedback! Keep at it, user. I really think you have some cool ideas, and I want to see more of them.
