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Made a character in the "If..." cyoa, man does one become powerful (or maybe it says something about the world). I've 1,395 points left I don't know how to spend, might just put all of them into Stats.

Human, Mage.
Stats: Con/Health 10, Int 20, End 2, Str 1, Dex 10, Fai 20.
Equipment/Misc: Cursed Daggers x2, Fading Light, Memory Fragment x2
Magic: Curse Gear, Invisibility, Cursed Blast, Greater Blast, Homing Blast
Light: Antidote, Heal, Recover, Light's Revival

Companions: Ashinen & Ulseim, Frijeta, Chalinedice.

Aiming to continue the study of curse magic, and maybe get a dragon ally while we're at it?

Did you make any changes to Pride?

Aside from the font size and the powers being bolded, no.

All chosen can now take two perks, though.

What happens if you ask Lady A to make you as much money as possible as an individual task?

It'll won't yield a net profit

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Did this build yesterday, but I'll post it again

>Lust
>No Companion
>Aura of Want
>Black Cane
>Silk Sheet

Having the silk sheet kind of limits my mobility. Walking the world as a debacherous drifter seems good, but as the Silk Sheet can cure any infections I get, I need to be around it. Exceptions for situations where I can use the Black Cane, of course.

I feel like Fluidity II is a bit redundant and Immunity doesn't offer actual immunity to diseases, so it's also not worth it. Smooth Talker and Aura of Want really advance your interests. I feel like I'm naturally gifted as a smooth talker, so Aura of Want will suffice for some non verbal sociatel nudging

Posting a fresh classic

Despair, for you will never know the happiness that the Chill Zone would bring

Sloth
accept lillian
Extra Boon - Stasis
Black Cane

Lay about while Lillian brings in the dough. Exercise maybe an hour a day over 6 or 7 hours, getting Veeky Forums very slowly but never losing my gains.
Can teleport around - useful since travel might denature me, and it would be hard to cross borders into/out of barcelona.

Tell virtues to leave me alone, or they're murdering someone in cold blood. Tell sins they can be in charge as long as they don't ask me to do anything.

Hi, update on my Trap CYOA:

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I'm thinking of just finishing it here as i can't think of more genres to add, but I do want more. if you have any, please tell me. I'm also thinking of just changing the name to flat out 'Feminization CYOA'

Did we ever find the source of these?

is this going to be a point system or do you just have to pick a certain number of options per each category? also, i was wondering what images you were thinking of using on this cyoa.

>Log Cabin
>Touch me, touch me

Giving up 4 item choices so I can have Outdoors and the Custom Companion option

8 left....
>Ocean Man, Lewd, Veeky Forums, Veeky Forums, 200% Comfy, Veeky Forums, Normie Station, Gamin PC

As I stated above, I choose Custom Character and Outdoors.

>Abilities
Lesbify (16), Redesign (14), Interbot (13), Lasting Effects (11), Reality Convert (9), Attractive Forces (8), Charm Cognition (6), Machine Learning (4), Believe it (3), Stylish (2), Aether Orchestra (1), Size Up/Down (0)

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Points for some general options for others. the less options i have to account for points, the easier it is to make it balanced.

Images wise, I was planning to use Pixiv mostly, but i might ask here for a few things, all anime though. Why'd you ask?

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just wonderin'. i'm sure it will turn out well.

Thank you! And thank you for posting a cyoa

no problem

Thinking of making an Imperial Guard Commander CYOA. Got the base concept down, and would love some input.

The main resource is Requisition. It is used to get more troops, weapons, support, ect.
You start with three squads, as a platoon leader, and can use Requisition to outfit them in different ways, from supply lines, to weapons, to squads and specialists added to your platoon.

Your goal is to create a unit that can handle the tasks and missions that end up thrown at you. What you get is determined by your posts number, with the last two numbers detailing what mission you're sent on by uncaring commanders.

To succeed, you need to balance a number or stats:
Ranged Strength (Given by your number of troops, their weapons, training, and doctrines)
Melee Strength (Given similar to Ranged Strength, but at the opposite end of the spectrum)
Discipline (Based on your starting homeworld, doctrines, and effected by your auxillaries, like Commissars or Ratlings)
Morale (Similar to Discipline, but running parallel, with Priests and faith needed over Commissars and Whips)
Supply (How you can sustain your forces. Heavy weapons, more squads, and difficult missions can leave you needing more. A lack of Supply detracts from ALL other stats)

Additionally, certain equipment and skills have a [Target] associated with them, and are able to deal with said target, like [swarms], [tanks], and [aircraft]. Missing out on a target you'll be encountering adds 1 to the difficulty of all criteria of a mission.

In example, 1LT user makes his platoon three squads the same, kitted out to max, and has them each have plasma guns, sniper rifles, and missile launchers. They have a lot of Ranged Strength, and he's selected Supply Lines for extra supply.
He looks at his post numbers, and sees that he's going up against Orkz in a city fight, and they have [swarms] of gretchin and [stealth] Kommandos, with he isn't equipped to deal with. He and his unit break as morale and discipline crumble.

Whoever posted this OC last thread pls gibbe updates, this cyoa is like a comfy dream

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It sounds kinda cool, though it's a bit hard to imagine. Still, I'd like to see it. OC is always good.

Othello
Go
Mastermind
Cards
Risk
I wanted to go into poilitics. In Washington DC. I am a monster, a political monster. Mwhahahahaha.

Looking again, I see Dungeons and Dragons and Star Ocean: Second Story. Now if the Meta CYOA was here and I choose to double my points, I'd throw in Diablo for maximum RPG style fun.
But as it stands, my second build will be turning this CYOA into a RPG using the first two.
The three I'd take are... Othello, Go and Cards. (I'm a egotistical asswipe. I'll admit, I don't think I need a better mind.) I'd do the same plan.

OC

Oh, and please point out any typos you notice (I've already found one at the bottom (brother -> brothel) Thanks!

>The main resource is Requisition. It is used to get more troops, weapons, support, ect.
Makes sense.
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You start with three squads, as a platoon leader, and can use Requisition to outfit them in different ways, from supply lines, to weapons, to squads and specialists added to your platoon.
I wouldn't call the leader of three squads a commander, but that's still good.
>Your goal is to create a unit that can handle the tasks and missions that end up thrown at you. What you get is determined by your posts number, with the last two numbers detailing what mission you're sent on by uncaring commanders.
Make the missions all different. They don't have to ALL be different in objective, like "defend x from y" but make the terrain and what they're defending different. That being said, epic battles are easy to imagine, I bet you'll think up plenty.
>all those stats
Holy fuck batman. I like my cyoas with lots of little details, but it seems like a lot of work for you. But if you can do it, then definitely do so.
>Additionally, certain equipment and skills have a [Target] associated with them, and are able to deal with said target, like [swarms], [tanks], and [aircraft]. Missing out on a target you'll be encountering adds 1 to the difficulty of all criteria of a mission.
Cool.

All in all, seems good.

Sexual Release minor and Gratitude minor.

Be a loving hubbie.

>Go
>Dominoes
>Othello
The power trio. Any follower can turn any other follower by touch, and large enough chains of people can do what they want.

You could probably do very well with just those, but it can get crazy with any two of the following powers:
>Pokemon
It's great for self-preservation, and sharing the Go power with the Pokemon you catch gives you exponential follower growth.
>Magic the Gathering
Synergizes crazily well with Go, and is very versatile.
>Risk
Strategic genius is a good choice, and it lets your followers lead a hobo army. Woe betide everyone else if you get the President (or the Pope) on your side.
>Cards
Can already take people and buildings, may as well add objects (including medals) to the list. Also, luckiness.
>Mastermind
Kinda like a cross between Risk and Cards. 200-300 IQ is nothing to underestimate, though.

I'd probably pick Magic and Risk for the last two; Risk lets you use the week a lot better, and M;tG ramps up to absurdity if you capture an entire town.

At least repost the image with your build.

Punishment idea: Milking (your partner will milk you for your sexual fluids, possibly w/ bonuses from tit size and the Concentration drawback).

I'm between sexual release minor and body image minor. They both have drawbacks I already suffer from, so an increase in severity shouldn't be too awful.

I think I'll have to go with Sexual Release. Can't pass that up

>Picking this means your nice
>Though, some choices to conflict
>the interdimentional brother with you

Anyway, My choices are between Financial major, Body image major, Success minor, or gratitude major

Financial major is cool, but I don't think $100 a month is gonna cut it. Buying a new console would take like 5 months or something to save up, and I couldn't buy anything during that time.

Body image major is neat since I've never really cared about what other people think of me, and I'd just stick to my normal looks most of the time. It probably won't let me shapeshift as much as I'd like though. (IE: an alien form or something)

Success minor is really appealing to me. Who cares about getting credit? I'm getting paid a very decent wage, and I'm good at what I do.

Gratitude major sounds like a great way to get my perfect girl. And all I have to do is just do chores at home for them? That's not a big deal at all. The only thing that really concerns me is that it means I would have no money and have to ask them to buy things for me, but I guess my ideal lover would be willing to do that.

It's a close decision between those last two. I guess I'll choose success major because it means I can just live a better version of my current life, with no real downsides.

Reminder that you can't take medals that have already been spent on new powers.

MTG
YUGIOH
CARDS
POKEMON
MASTERMIND

Really, mtg is amazing both for and against minion builds.

With On Edge, how can you ejaculate if you can't cum?
Maybe just make it that you can only cum when someone tells you to? Or maybe just make that part a separate drawback all together?

I would take that punishment

As in, you can ejaculate, but it won't feel like release

I didn't, and I really liked them :(

I just want to know the story, since there seems to be a need for one, final one involving the Flamingo.

are drawbacks cumulative, or do you only suffer the drawback for your severity?

>Pokemon Go
>MtG
>Go
>Risk
>Cards
1) Catch a bunch of pokemon, regardless of strength
2) Have them all surround a castle
3) Become the local lord
4) Rinse & repeat until I find someone who claims ownership of a mountain/plains/etc
5) Demand the land from them
6) Summon MtG equipment to make me immune to enemy spells/abilities + indestructible
7) Make anyone who gets in my way pay denbts with my massive surplus of stored mana gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=369039

Thanks! I fixed those errors!
I should note that Success major means you have to devote yourself to that goal. Hard work will lie ahead of you. (Or did you mean yo say you chose Success minor, because that's the one you mentioned when deliberating?)

You only get the benefits & drawbacks of the severity you choose (but a lot of Major options mention giving you the Minor perks, too).

Remember, you're going have to be defining yourself around that Sexual Release minor. And with Gratitude minor's submissiveness, you'll gonna be at the whim of your spouse.

You could always go with both if you're willing to define yourself around those traits.

>forced to choose between fixing my brain, or fixing my body and lack of sleep, or getting my degree with little difficulty, or being happy from making others happy
Dang... this is tough! There are so many I want.

Selfish picks would be:
>Gratitude: Minor
Because while I do want my husbando, I don't want to force one into existence, and I don't want to be forced into the waifu role. I want to do it because I want to do it.
>Body image: Major
Necessary to be the waifu. I guess it's not that bad of a punishment to take pride in my new appearance.

Non-selfish would be:
>Gratitude: Supreme
>Fun: Minor
To be her best companion ever!

Glad you enjoyed it. I'm gonna give more points next time around. Maybe add a few items.

Do you have any suggestions?

Ya, meant minor.

Emotional Support - Major (This is my ideal, to some extent, relationship. A little bit of intimacy might be nice but as-is this is fine.)
Ascendance - Supreme. I'll have someone around, no matter how many years go by.

The only one I could stand would be Body Image Minor. I already feel like shit when I don't bathe or keep my looks up, so I guess this would just be a kick in the butt to actually wash myself on those days.

Financial Support - Supreme
Ascendance - Supreme

Pay for bodyguards so people don't murder me. Use infinite money to direct much of the world's resources to personal research and development until I no longer need humans to do my bidding. Colonize the galaxy and beyond as an immortal god emperor, ruling over unaging machines (who feel no jealousy towards my lifespan).

>51 people have looked at your cyoa
>3 responded

Any interest in a simple Touhou cyoa?
You'll pick a hat, pick an ability, pick a shikigami, pick a souvenir, and pick a rabid yokai you think you're capable of fending off with your build.

I think I'll accomplish more with
>Body image: Major
and
>Peace of Mind: Minor
Being the waifu is something you choose, not something you're given. I have to consciously notice desires and preferences, rather than instinctively knowing. It's far more romantic, to become a better waifu from noticing and caring.
With Peace of Mind, I should adapt mentally to being a good partner. Gratitude: Minor also has the downside of being praised by more than one person.

>You'll pick a hat
What kind of hats?

Fucking DO IT.
Just DO IT.
Please GOD, DO IT.

Sounds shit. But I guess some other guy wants it.

Sorry user. I like to look at the options, but I have no interest in being/fucking a trap.

>he doesn't wanna be/fuck a trap

>I have no interest in being/fucking a trap.
What are you gay?

A replenishing supply of ammo for the ammo option would be nice. Possibly for all the consumables - replenished stuff occurs monthly or yearly.

Animals starting naturally trained would be cool, so minks and cats can be used to help hunt. An option so animals live as long as you do would also be cool.

A pet hawk option sounds neat.

Changing bagel coupon to food coupon might be good. The restaurant changes from location to location instead of always being bagel.

Marijuana supply seems helpful if cigarettes are offered.

m8 put the damn thing into an image

I'm asking for feedback, that's it. It's not supposed to be a finished thing.

Yeah, I gave it a glance, but I'm only interested in fucking traps, not being the trap.

The only thing I know about the 2hus is Awoo. So I haven't a friggen clue of what goes on in it. But a 2hu CYOA could go over well here.

Honestly, with the change to it mostly being about feminization, I've lost a lot of interest in it. Also, there's not a lot new that I really care for, so I ignored posting about it until now. All of the drawbacks remove the perks of being a girl(male) that I want, so I don't really have any comment on them because I would never take any of them. I don't really like any of the jobs, and I get nothing out of the lewdness put into them. Work's for work, not lewds, and I really don't want those to mix. The new trap companions are okay, but companions aren't terribly interesting to me most of the time It's why I never write them. Other than those, there's nothing new that I haven't commented on before now.

Gotta remember the lurkers, though. They might like everything, but will never say so.

Doesn't matter, unless you're planning on using MS paint.

>But a 2hu CYOA could go over well here.

If such a cyoa gets finished, I anticipate a shitstorm.

There's more than 1000 views on new Blood Magic, but I can count the number of builds I've seen on my two hands.

I imagine its similar with other CYOAs too. A great amount of lurkers who never post their builds, or just disinterested people. Don't let this bring you down, this is normal.

You know you don't have to take any drawbacks, right?

Thanks man. I know this spunds childish but it does kinda annoy me. I just want feedback, but half the responses are always 'I don't like this option, remove it'

Why would they post their builds here? /cyoag/ is a 24/7 shitshow.

I know, but they're most of the new content. I was explaining why I hadn't replied to the new post. I would never take any of them, so I didn't see the need to talk about them.

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The jumpchain thread is far worse.

It's Saturday in the only country that matters.

Lurkers outnumber user, user. Get used to it.

What?

Germany?

Either really common ones like ribbons and mob caps or unused ones like a horned helmet and baseball cap. Maybe both.

Two things: First, there's still the conflict between your D/S choices and your partner's description. Which takes precedence?

Second, it's usually poor design to give a lot less choice to one type of build - in this case, Dominants.

Case in point, picking it nullifies all but four of the jobs (Secretary, Cheerleader, Model, and Streamer), the entire Punishment section, and half the drawbacks.

The drawbacks aren't too bad as it stands (though I would like more general ones), but I would like more 'neutral' jobs (and maybe a dominant one - professional Dom/mes are a thing) as well as the option to apply punishments to your partner by paying half their cost or something.

If you're having trouble thinking of options, I can spitball a few for you.

>Thinking your irrelevant collapsing mess being flooded by the entire third world matters.

I think what they're trying to say is "I want even the WIPs in image format".

It's saturday in most of the world.

>Instant change
>Flat chest
>Bubble butt
>Average hips
>Average penis
>Cute face
>Normal mind
>Bisexual (no change)
>Equal (trap on top can be hot)
>Bullies

I assume I pick a partner? Or are these just the cast of characters in this world? I'll skip this part in the hopes of gangbangs.

>Streamer (doesn't involve people ordering me what the fuck to do like all the other jobs)

Drawbacks:
>No secret
>Feeble (eh, I'm a trap anyways)
>Statistic (again, if this is taking place in magical porn land, who gives a shit?)
>No waiting (fast growing hair is a drawback? I'd kill for that shit)
>Weak spot

So that leaves me with 9 power points
>Doesn't matter (that'll counteract "no secret"
>Sensitive
>Lazy (I have the points for it, why not)
>Youthful
>Well off (more like "fucking loaded", again I only got this because the spare points were so plentiful)
>Enjoyable (fuckin' SCORE)
>Acceptance (I'd rather just this be magical porn world, but since I have the spare points I'll buy it)
>Flexible
>Clean (god that'd be useful)

I don't care about the punishments.

There we go. Sounds like a pretty fun trap-life, while not being too godawful, and I still get to be me to some extent.

Ahahaha. Ha.

Okay so I'm actually going to start work on the Eldritch Abomination CYOA now. I know I said I would once I recovered from watching Welcome to the NHK, but that may have been an itsy bitsy lie. Generally I work on them when I have a spark of "genius" and decide to work on them for multiple hours straight. Unfortunately, I've not had that, so my solution is to read the Old Man Henderson writefaggotry again whilst listening to the OP for Haiyore W on repeat.

Expect for this to be done on Sunday. I promise.

And yet, somehow, it was easier to deal with. Granted, that's probably because it was more predictable.

I remember the Worm Drinking Game. Fun times.

>above average

How large is this supposed to be

I'm at that point where I can't read/watch something sad because my default mood is already bad enough that it puts me into the point of basically nonfunctionality.

The only reason you'd need to keep it in text is if you're going to use image software where you can't go back and edit the text after putting it in there.

Yeah, I've hit this too. I literally just sat there for about an hour after finishing it, and I had to take breaks half way through some of the episodes because I just couldn't finish it.

It does seem to be getting worse.

I don't want to be judgemental or a dick, but I honestly believe all the /d/ shit is causing more mental illnesss and pity party shitposting. Don't get me wrong, I appreciate Lewd options and fappable stuff as much as the next user, but there is quite a bit of OC that is way too specific. I'm never going to pay attention to the trap/gender switch/de-aging because it's so sexually niche I can't even do a theoretical build

>Worm Drinking Game

?

>Two things: First, there's still the conflict between your D/S choices and your partner's description. Which takes precedence?
Thank you, I'll clear this up in the next one

>Second, it's usually poor design to give a lot less choice to one type of build - in this case, Dominants.
It is a cyoa with an emphasis on submissiveness. Dominant options add flavour, but I never, nor plan to make the 2 the same level, or I'll totally have lost sight of what the cyoa was supposed to be.

>Case in point, picking it nullifies all but four of the jobs (Secretary, Cheerleader, Model, and Streamer), the entire Punishment section, and half the drawbacks.
Yeah it's not supposed to be a cypa about dominance, and all of what you listed are optional

>The drawbacks aren't too bad as it stands (though I would like more general ones), but I would like more 'neutral' jobs (and maybe a dominant one - professional Dom/mes are a thing) as well as the option to apply punishments to your partner by paying half their cost or something.
Look, I get it, you want to be dominant, but that's not what the CYOA is about. I really don't want to sound dismissive to criticism but I don't want to ignore what the cyoa is about and just make it a fetish collage.

>If you're having trouble thinking of options, I can spitball a few for you.
Yes please, go ahead.

Oh wait I'm retarded, fuck. I thought it was Sunday.

The paste isn't here to make builds and use, I'm asking for suggestions. Images are the 2nd step.

There's jump of Worm, the web serial novel.
There's a bunch of options for different powers.
For a while, it seemed like every problem someone had or ability someone was looking for could be solved/supplied by one of the powers in the Worm jump.
So people started drinking every time it was mentioned.

That's still not a reason to not use an image.