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Hey Virtue user, I finished the page you requested. Thanks for putting in the effort you did. Though I do wonder if a few parts are too vague.

This was a fun one. 1/3

2/3

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Indeed. I love CYOAs like that one. My ideal world would be something like the powers from Monster Hunter in a world like Hunter's Legacy with the threat level toned down, meaning no titans.

So does the Judgement Egg only have one use, or does it allow for multiple uses?

Nigga label your files, I almost thought that was something new.

I don't normally name the CYOAs I save.

How do you keep track of multipage cyoas?

Putting them all in particular named folders. The only problem usually comes when people decide to update certain pages or post a CYOA in the wrong order.

Every once in a century I sometimes decide to dig through and properly name CYOAs. But it's a rare occurrence.

Whatever works for you man, I keep multipage cyaos in folders too, but I also label, number them and slap on a version number if possible that way I can identify and categorize the old from the new versions.

If the newer version of a cyoa is just flat out better then the old one with more options and fixes I just replace them all entirely.

I was typing up a longer response but Veeky Forums crapped itself.
tl,dr can't pick anything but Patience, Kindness and Humility because the requirements ruin your life. You aren't allowed a moment's pause with either Diligence nor Chastity.
>Patience
Calm is basically a worse version of Chastity's Aura.
If I could live with Chastity's "you can never take a break or have sexual/envious thoughts etc." drawback, I'd pick that and travel the world bringing you. But I can't live with that. I don't think I'll live my life any differently.

>Rosary beads
Because I don't have any need for anything else.

Many of the gifts suck honestly. Universal Focus and Little Red Box can burn you badly, making them things you won't ever use. Utopia/The Sabbath defeats the point of this exercise. Same with Sanctuary. You've turned the CYOA into a Pocket Dimension CYOA.
I don't think Charity should be allowed a gift. That's the entire point of her Virtue.

requesting broken waifu cyoa

I was actually thinking about making soething like this but is hard to find images

>Universal Focus and Little Red Box can burn you badly
That's to prevent abusing it.

>Utopia/The Sabbath defeats the point of this exercise. Same with Sanctuary.
Not really; the Sins still exist, and they will still try and kill/rape/eat/rule/con the rest of humanity. Can you really live with yourself if that happened?

>I don't think Charity should be allowed a gift. That's the entire point of her Virtue.
And but that would make the cyoa even more unbalanced.

Not what i meant. i meant the broken waifu cyoa

is there one?

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Yes. That is why I requested the broken waifu cyoa.

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>That's to prevent abusing it.
You were too effective. I would never use them. It isn't worth it.
>Can you really live with yourself if that happened?
The people who would pick Sabbath/Utopia/Sanctuary don't give a shit. They won't care that the Earth burns when they can live in their Pocket Dimension.
>that would make the cyoa even more unbalanced.
It's still stupid to give Chastity, the Virtue about giving away everything she has, a gift.

Sorry user but I don't think this third page should have existed.
Diligence with White Chain is fucking broken.

>You were too effective.
Gonna stop you right there; I wasn't the one who made the text; I only arranged it into a nice looking picture for the author, since I just wanted it to exist and he probably has shit image manipulating skills. Just wanted to put that out there to prevent any further confusion.

>The people who would pick Sabbath/Utopia/Sanctuary don't give a shit.
Are you certain of that? Besides, what good would Utopia be if the Sins ruin it?

>It's still stupid to give Chastity
Charity
>the Virtue about giving away everything she has, a gift.
Stupid, perhaps. But that is your own opinion, and you are entitled to it.

>Diligence with White Chain is fucking broken.
How?

Pretty sure /d/ has an amputee thread. I don't know why they get off to it. I guess she can't run away if she doesn't have any legs?

>tfw my copy of the kazoo tree has an embedded file

Fug. Anyone got a copy to post?

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O ye, that's the stuff.

>it's like two kazoos but with 1 more
Jesus Christ, man... I didn't know SDA could be anything but smug.

SDA didn't make the kazoo tree, a fan did.

There's also a lewd tree.

Ah. That explains it. I couldn't wrap my head around it.

I really like the powerlevel idea of this one.

>Exterminator
>Precision (1), Endurance (1)
>Single shot rifle, Fiery one-handed sword.
>The Band

I'll have to check it out!

It's odd, but I think I've seen a different version of this page.

I know which one you mean, but I don't particularly like it, so I don't have it.

You're probably thinking about the older one, where each category had 18+2 spells instead of 9+1.

>All Leather Armor
>2 daggers, a cutlass, a recurve bow wand combo
>Shield Catalyst
>Hunter

>Abby (5)
>Jourdain (2)
>Thea (0)

An eclectic bunch, with a wide breadth of powers and expertise. I'd consider this to be a low level task force, sent into the unknown to asses and deal with threats. Thea, Jourdain, and myself are enough to deal with most anything, with Abby's fire magic as our back up firepower. I think we're meant to be a good influence on her as well, but we'll see how that goes.

All points into Shadow, drop Shard Storm so I can have Umbra.

So we have a Shadow Hunter, an Undead Lightning Forerunner, a Fire Vanguard, and a Nature Shadow Slayer. Maybe a bit much with two Shadows, low in Force and Divine, no real tank...but that's not the point. The point of this group is to quickly assess and kill threats beyond the reach of the main force. I'm also going to try and waifu the reformed succubus, because that's just the kind of man I am.

It's this one. SDA wasn't a fan, so oh well. I miss my Umbral Wings, though

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then why did you respond now

Holy shit it happened, thanks. Though if it's possible could you change a couple things? The images for the gifts clash with eachother (shoulder angel in particular really stands out. Here's one that would be a good replacement). And the border of the lighter-part of the background near the top is uneven.

Other than that you did a good job getting a background that looks like the others; if you're not paying attention to it you probably wouldn't even notice it's different. Thanks, bro

Oh yeah, I remember figuring out the Seeking Shards/Snare combo before Snare was cut.

Good times.

>Armor
Knight Helmet
Aegis Cuirass
Leather Gloves
Knight Greaves

>Weapons & Shields
Warhammer (Mace)
One-Handed Spear
Recurve Bow
Square Shield
Shield Catalyst

>Mark
Vanguard

>Companions
Serf Bardol

>Mount
Undead Chariot

>Tier 1 Magic
Frost Armor
Frozen Heart
Summon Undead
Masochism

>Tier 2
Relentless Charge
Sanguine Essence

>Tier 3
Army of the Dead
Flash Decay

>Tier 4
Apocalypse

Smashfucker is back, fucker. This time, we’re going with the chariot because I don’t really need any other companions besides my point man Serf. Best part is I can switch from mobile weapons platform to footslogging battle beast depending on the situation. And of course, there’s the Frozen Heart-buffed undead army I bring along with me.

>And the border of the lighter-part of the background near the top is uneven.
I tried to make it even, but every attempt to do so resulted in overlap.

The reason the shoulder angel is like that is because I heard you guys like cute.

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Would a 2 handed morning star be counted as an unlisted or a hybrid weapon?

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>The Sabbath
>Sunday

Are you trying to troll us?

I remember that Veeky Forums thread when there was writefaggotry on how she gets a cyborg body and shit.

Good times.

And I did picture her to be cute... but it's mainly a matter of styles clashing. It looks out of place next to the soul gem and realistic rosary. Pure Holy Energy, The Reward, Utopia, and The Sabbath are all more concepts than things, but the rest are supposedly what the Gift actually looks like. Yviel is not a concept; she's an actual angel.

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Thanks, that brightened up my day.

You could also check gurochan if you have the stomach for it, I guess.

I guess you can call this the first original CYOA I've made. I just finished the intro to a Erotic-Cosmic Lovecraftian thing where you become the mother or father of monsters. I've gotta rush now, but I'll leave this here for appraisal/feedback.

Think of it like a movie trailer, but for a shitty CYOA instead.

CUTE

It would count as a Great Hammer.

>wellmarkmedownasscaredandhorny.gif

>Ir8
>shit/b8

Nothing of worth has ever been written that referred to a woman's genitals as
>her sex

Nice missed jackpot, sperg.

What's the problem with that?

Maybe my dream of Mother of Monsters from the Witch CYOA without the menopause will come true

>lewd tree
I demand it.

That reminds me of the Mother of Monsters WIP that never went anywhere.

How so

Staff with heavy head= great hammer

>would you believe that there are people on Veeky Forums that don't really pay attention to post numbers, much less care about trips?

It's the "lens flare" of badly written porn stories. Like the adjective "throbbing", it reminds you that the story is written with the lowest common denominator in mind.

But I don't want a hammer, I want a morning star. Also, the staff is used to cast magic and shit.

sab·bath
ˈsabəTH/
noun
noun: sabbath; plural noun: sabbaths; noun: the Sabbath; noun: witches' sabbath; plural noun: witches' sabbaths

1.
a day of religious observance and abstinence from work, kept by Jews from Friday evening to Saturday evening, and by most Christians on Sunday.

It probably could've been saturday, but the seven deadly sins, and by extension the virtues, are a product of the catholic church. Ergo sunday

A morning star's head is still heavy, it just has spikes on it as well.

Yeah, but it says you can choose a morning star as a mace. Is the difference between a morning star and great morning star (or whatever you wanna call it) the amount of arms you use to wield it and its weight?

Yes

Would it be 1 handed if you used it with the knight gauntlets then?

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Look at the picture for Great Hammer.
Maces, hammers, and (to a lesser extent) flails are in the same family, use the same skills, and are bought with the same option. Trying to argue otherwise is like wondering where the katana or kopesh option is.

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No, it will still be two-handed because most warriors use it with two hands. You'll just be wielding a two-handed weapon in one hand because you're stronger than most.

why's that last bottom right one all covered up?

So it is 1 handed, for you.

Apparently, user was booty bothered about whatever it happened to be.

But not for the costs.

>last bottom right one all covered up
Haha, someone was actually salty enough to do that.

I'm more trying to figure out if you can wield it with relative success if you're 1 handing it. It's not like all maces/hammer/flails are only 1 or 2 handed.

So long as you still pay two weapon slots, big guy.

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What do you get if you combine a wand and a staff?

Make way for comfy

Slightly longer, slightly weaker staff.

Catholics observe the Lord's Day - Sunday. Sabbath was never moved, or changed from being on Saturday, and still holds significant symbolic value relating to the End Times.

Sabbath - the day of rest.
The Lord's Day - the day of celebration.

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Why is it longer if it's weaker? Wouldn't combining the 2 augment your magic both regularly and greatly?

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Weaker in the sense of structural sturdiness.
More prone to snapping in half.

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It would be paying for both.

I'd say a longer, thinner staff that's a bit more fragile, but somewhat more potent.

It's like welding a knife blade onto the end of a sword. It's not going to make your sword perform better aside from the extra melee range.

It's a magic wandstaff, you're not gonna use it in melee combat.

Unless you mean it'll snap if half when you trip over your own foot or something.

what did you pick user?

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