CYOA General

I'm going to be a flaming skeleton.
My friends will be a cardboard suit of armor and a man with an amazing mullet.
Together, we will escape the IRS.

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I'll take "I don't know how galleries work" for 300, Alex.

You are the hero we need.

>Powers: Eye Lasers, Cardboard Armour
>Companions: SHAPESHIFTING BIOFORM OF DEEP STRIKES, Zen Skeleton
Precisely the power I need.

>Quests: Battle of the Bands, Fix the Past
All I really have to do is tell my past self three things.

>1. Those girls are into you, don't be a dense harem protagonist. Notice them.
>2. There is nothing wrong with asking Mom for college application fee money and/or prom ticket money, you're poor enough to be on free lunch.
>3. Learn how to tune that guitar. You'll thank me later.

>Another World, Perhaps
>Happy Childhood
>Best Ship

What could go wrong?

You're right, you clearly have no idea.

Creature type:
reptillian- we kaiju now
special abilities:
Increased defense- 2 tough 4 u
increased strength- swole AF
increased speed - even legends level DEX some
bio lasers- for firing
Drawback & missions:
budget rangers- who doesn't want to fight big robots
magical girl team- what Saturday morning cartoon monster is complete without one of these?
boss perks:
enhanced defense- because dying is for quitters
enhanced regeneration - dying is for quitters (x2)
gigantism- for the obligatory megamode robot/ super star power fairy combination thingy fights
band of mooks- what bad guy is without mooks? i can even give them themed costumes!

time to just tank my way through most fights/ be a recurring villain - probably defect if i find out anything too heinous is happening

I know precisely how galleries work. Genie person asks for pictures, puts them in a gallery template thing, posts the pictures that got in without the text (this is where SOME people, but NOT ALL, make their blind picks), and sometime later posts the finished gallery (which is when those that didn't make blind picks make their first choices).

>No Bully
>Boobarific
>Best Ship
Thicc Lolis are my dream. Am /pol/tard myself.

>The Perfect Male Body
>El Gigantes
>No Bully

Hit me

Let's enjoy some recently finished galleries while we wait for to be done.

>no bully
>bonkers
>another world perhaps

I choose the genie.

The author of this one said there'd be a v1.1 at some point.

These niggas know what's up.

Chyort! I only have 3 options left to write and I once again forgot to include the Genie

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When you gonna stop posting this each thread?

AAAAAAAAAnon, would you like to see my wip cyoa? It's a masterpiece.

If it's a masterpiece, it'll be perfection when it's finished. I want my first exposure to that CYOA to be in its complete form.

Sure. I don't really have a problem with those.

No. Dive off a cliff.

Obligatory Be the Girl
Another World, Perhaps
Happy Childhood

Here it is.

Looks like it fought in 'Nam.

Next page.

>Eyes
>AKU

>Flame Astronaut
>Cardboard Knight
tantarantaran-tan

I'll take down that barbarian monkey. How hard can it be? If worse comes to worst, I can just fling him far into the future WHERE I RULE SUPREME

It may dribble and stare listlessly but it survived!

And page 4, as far as I got.

looks like shit.

Thanks senpai.

>Dress Up Time
Limited shapeshifting is better than no shapeshifting. Just need to find the right outfit.
>Bounty Overflowing
Plenty of milk plus access to succulent sweet (sweater)meats? Not a bad deal at all. Will probably (at least try to) capitalize on the former, too.
>Mana From Heaven
So not only do I get indefinite youth and no longer require (additional) sustenance, but I can also keep my serfs alive for longer? Yes please.

Like i said, it fought in 'Nam.
It needs to be neutered. We can't risk it spreading.

Since I posted this as this thread was made, i'll post it here again.

Wouldn't you have to suck your own dick for the Mana From Heaven ability?

2/6

3/6

4/6

5/6

6/6

And we are done~

I like the idea user.
Here's some constructive criticism.
Perform some alignment, look for better fonts, give emphasis to titles and group things so it doesn't just look like blocks of text spread all over the area. Elaborate more on what you can expect from each type of mask, remove the "whatever you want" option.

You may want to introduce what a skinwalker is, rename the "Facial Recarving" store (it sounds silly)

The layout of the "You agree? I'm glad!" line is below the start of the second paragraph and it looks more like a label to the only picture you've got. Emphasize the types of masks with bold text and/or separate it into columns. Make the types with brief descriptions (including the blank one) into a "misc" type

Move the "how this is going to work" to be in the second page if possible. Put face and figure in different rows. Elaborations on each under each type.

Group doners and their characteristics in a consistent way if you can.

It'd be nice to see this worked on a bit more.

What's a good name for a short CYOA where you're a cartoonishly metal barbarian following in his or her father's footsteps?

Okay let's try this again!

Needs more semblances. I know I say that every time but it's seriously all I can think about when I see this.

Speaking of galleries, here are my own.

i will become the ice cream lady

>Elaborate more on what you can expect from each type of mask, remove the "whatever you want" option.
This is basically a specialization unto the actual abilities. Like for instance with Shield of Nation, and a armoured still would have even better defensive abilities but would diminish elsewhere.

As for the layout, that's kind of troublesome! I only have Paint.net. ;( Can't be bothered, but thanks!

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If only you would fix that. But alas you would rather shitpost

cyoan the barbarian

Let's see how those blind picks of mine went!

>Happy Childhood
Oh dear.
>Another World, Perhaps
Hoo boy. Leaps of faith all around today.
>Best Ship
Such... such POWER.

Holy shit kek.

hearty kek.

Sub-zero kek.

Are you happy with the choices? I can't tell.

>seeoahn the barbarian

This is hands down the worst genie gallery I've ever seen.

Alright, how'd my blinds go:
>El Gigantes, Boobariffic, Obligatory Be the Girl.
Well, that's certainly a thing.
Can I BE the Big-tittied giantess with a big-tittied giantess gf?

my blind picks were
>peak male body
>no bully
>happy childhood
this turned out way more /ss/ than i thought.
i cannot say i am displeased, however. good work user, especially in such a quick amount of time. i commend your speed, effort and creativity.

shouldn't this page have some sort of a follow-up similar to the one from rapture cyoa?

>Perfect Male Body
Basically what I expected, added bonus, all the babes are amazons...
>El Gigantes
15 foot tall amazons...
>No Bully
That only fill out more by teasing me... There's no way this can end poorly.

I don't quite know what to do with these choices. They sound neat, but the portal especially does little to assuage my indecisiveness.

Fucking fine. But only because you told me to. It's not like I wanted to, or anything...

>Happy Childhood.
>Another World.
>Be the Girl.

>fifty_hues_of_megumi.swf - obligatory
>hyper_railgun.swf - elecrokinesis is op as hell
>Holdmeholdmelovemebaby.swf - spaceship with every possible feature

Boobariffic, El Gigantes, No Bully.

I wholly accept my fate. I have no ragrets.

Holy fuck my picks were perfect.

Bonkers was even better then I thought it would be, and a healthy dose of femdom doesn't hurt either. I just hope that the qt from school can tag along when going through the portal to another world. Otherwise thats one great picture wasted.

Not bad. I just wish the genie was in more of the choices.

Child of the Metal?

>chose the bottom row as blind picks

Eh, not bad. Not sure how my stalker's gonna react to my new body, but this could be interesting. I'm not really into big-tittied, wide-hipped, fat-bottomed girls, so here's hoping my stalker won't bully me too and will instead help keep the bullies away.

If I could trade No Bully for Happy Childhood I would.

No, because it says right there in the description:
>You luckily benefit from the effects without having to drink it yourself.

Oh hey...So, uh... Yeah.

Well I'm sorry user but I can't read!

Another World, No Bully, Bonkers

Since you asked nicely, yeah
Thanks man. Nice to hear it! Seriously. It's nice.
I can never tell with galleries, if people are happy or not.
Sorry, I wanted to leave portal open...
>my picks were perfect
Happiness intensifies!
>[option] even better than I thought it would be
Happiness goes supernova!
I know. I'm sorry. I keep forgetting about her...

Blind Picks:
>Be the Girl
>Wincest
>Bonkers

Hey, that's pretty good. My picks now would be Be the girl, Wincest, and Best Ship I think.

I slightly liked it you scrotum dipper. :DDDD

>I know. I'm sorry. I keep forgetting about her...

For the next gallery, you should keep her in mind. She doesn't have to be the first pic listed, or the last, just glance through once you've closed it up and see how you could work her in. Write that up first, before you forget, then do the rest normally.

Or alternatively you could make her into a mystery box choice, like holding up a picture frame in front of her. Maybe include some cheesy line. Or don't, it's your cyoa, you do what you want with it. You've been doing good so far.

user that posted the image for El Gigantes here. No disappointment, only smiles.

All of the options are really good. Nice work.

Blinds:
>The Perfect Male Body
>(W)incest
>Another World, Perhaps
Me a my (not) twin go through the portal. Whatever is there we'll take the risk. Don't really want to change my choices.

Arigato senpai. No smiles *down there*
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Oh my gosh user, are you coming on to me? I'll have you know I'm single~
I definitely wish to introduce her more if I make more (oh who am I kidding, of course I am and apparently It took me an hour?
And that's good advice! I usually write out an option, more on to the next then done! I don't go back but maybe I should?

>No smiles *down there*?
Obviously, but I didn't think I needed to advertise that.

user you should advertise that!
I set out to write a lewd gallery so If I didn't do *that' to you, I failed, right?

Also Spell-check user, please come out of the woodworks!

I don't have a clue. This was just how I found it.

Got the sauce on Boobariffic?

Like a smiling penis?

Any good new cyoas?

Not making one, leaving the thread, and living your life the best you can.