Ok, is it a game or a highschool paper your teacher required you to make at-least ninety pages?
11pt font, single spaced, narrow margins, please. Why would you want to add pages to an electronic document? Just to make people have to scroll, more often? It's needlessly, annoyingly long.
I did my best! I hope you enjoy playtesting it!
Formatting is not my strong suit, and I appreciate the feedback. Would you mind giving me your opinion on how to improve the skill chapter?
From what I've read so far I think the biggest thing you need is some layout and design, because otherwise this thing is great. I'm glad to see people on Veeky Forums are still making cool stuff, and I'd love to give this a play.
Please do, and any formatting advice is very welcome.
>11pt font
no
11pt is the standard, correct font size. Go be wrong elsewhere.
Here's some things that came to mind wth the little amount of it that I've had the time to read (I'm at work, so I haven't been able to pour over the whole thing yet.).
>1. Put the pre-section fiction (like the one before the Beast section) in a different font, or at least italics. Makes it easier to tell at a glance that it's something different than rules.
>2. Put the Rules section with different font as well, or if you have the option for very different text, put them in a differently colored box from the background, to make clear what are the core rules and what isnt.
>3.Honestly a lot of these font things you could also do with good use of bolding or italicizing the titles of things.
Just my preliminary thoughts though. Bolds, italics, and use of stuff like bullet points could really help with making this a bit more easy to read.
Thanks! I will do this for the next version!
on my quick read through i noticed one typo pg 12 - 13 break you switch how you are saying engage in cannabalism in the middle of the sentence, looks good ill try to browbeat some friends into a game
Thanks for spotting that one and I wish you more luck than I've had!