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>my review
all of you are shit writers
>my content
one day i was walking
as i was walking i was talking
i tripped over a rock
fell down and clocked
my head on a cloud

>deep. meaningful. wise. genius.

First time posting content in such a thread. Short piece of naked dialogue between two teens in relationship A is the chick, S the guy, she lost a bet. Came up with it while I couldn't sleep and wonder if I should expand the scene.

Fuck my shit up, senpai.

pastebin.com/vVSrsYRT

Ah ahaha hahaha aha hha buuuuuuuuuuuurn!
This guy is hilarious.
XDDD

It's like a mix of White Noise and John Green, in a bad way

I walked and the neon signs stood out like cryptic messages from a distant God and the world felt very small.

>small
big. I meant big. fuck it all

hot i wanked off to this story

10 / out of fucking 10

This is hilarious - also, fuck you

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