>Wild eyes were another sign. It is something I have seldom seen — the expression of an ecstatic state — though much is foolishly written of them, as if they grew like Jerusalem artichokes along the road. The eyes are black, right enough, whatever their normal color is; they are black because their perception is condensed to a coal, because the touch and taste and perfume of the lover, the outcry of a dirty word, a welcome river, have been reduced in the heat of passion to a black ash, and this unburnt residue of oxidation, this calyx, replaces the pupil so it no longer receives but sends, and every hair is on end, though perhaps only outspread on a pillow, and the nostrils are flared, mouth agape, cheeks sucked so the whole face seems as squeezed as a juiced fruit; I know, for once Lou went into that wildness while we were absorbing one another, trying to kiss, not merely forcefully, not the skull of our skeleton, but the skull and all the bones on which the essential self is hung, kiss so the shape of the soul is stirred too, that's what is called the ultimate French, the furtherest fuck, when a cock makes a concept cry out and climax; I know, for more than once, though not often, I shuddered into that other region, when a mouth drew me through its generosity into the realm of unravel, and every sensation lay extended as a lake, every tie was loosed, and the glue of things dissolved. I knew I wore the wild look then. The greatest gift you can give another human being is to let them warm you till, in passing beyond pleasure, your defenses fall, your ego surrenders, its structure melts, its towers topple, lies, fancies, vanities, blow away in no wind, and you return, not to the clay you came from — the unfired vessel — but to the original moment of inspiration, when you were the unabbreviated breath of God.
one and a half sentences in and I'm already annoyed by his too-frequent alliteration
also fuck off Gassposter
Aaron Garcia
McCarthy does it better
David Moore
too try hard
Jordan Gomez
William Gass looks like a human penis
Adam Gonzalez
I love The recent gain in gassposting (it wasn't fun being the only person who had good things things to say about him), but I recommend providing a wider variety of excerpts for people to sample. Awful criticisms. There are a couple questionable things in that passage, none of which are even close to what you said. Awful taste.
Eli Thompson
You not foolin anyoooone (avril lavigne voice)
Hunter Edwards
get over yourself, faggot
Josiah Jenkins
Bit gay honestly.
Parker Hill
>The greatest gift you can give another human being is to let them warm you till, in passing beyond pleasure, your defenses fall, your ego surrenders, its structure melts, its towers topple, lies, fancies, vanities, blow away in no wind, and you return, not to the clay you came from — the unfired vessel — but to the original moment of inspiration, when you were the unabbreviated breath of God
i fuck with this
i fuck with this hard
Ryan Hill
>Implying there is more than one Gassposter
Do you think the "tour of American lit" thread was an inside job?
Owen Powell
ugh you would
Juan Bailey
assposters please go
Owen Reed
I'm going to buy one book tomorrow. Should it be Gaddis's JR or one of Gass's things?
Landon Stewart
Get Omensetter's Luck and one of Gaddis' cheaper books, like The Recognitions.
Justin Wood
I already have The Recognitions. And I was thinking of starting with In the Heart of the Heart of the country with Gass.
Gavin James
That's fine too. Pederson Kid is possibly the greatest short story ever written, and more than makes getting the whole book worth it.
Cameron Diaz
it truly, truly is.
David Hughes
is the rest of the book as good, or is this cherrypicked?
Dominic Cox
I leave for a couple months and come back to this. Every single reply is retarded. Have we moved on to post-sincerity and I missed the memo? Or is Veeky Forums the dumb board now?
Lincoln Barnes
it's scary of how quickly it degenerated after that reddit post.
Wyatt Garcia
Inform me, friend. I've been gone a while.
Jace Ward
What reddit post?
Lucas Taylor
It is beautiful but also self-indulgent and 'try-hard', just like McCarthy (except better, I'll give him that). Must be an American thing. He should have tried his hand at poetry, and thus restraint, because I can't see myself reading this kind of mind-juice as it spills over hundreds of pages.
Zachary Miller
the Veeky Forums rec charts were posted on reddit and got like a million views.
Angel Gonzalez
It seems to impossible to find a torrent of The Tunnel.
At first I wanted to give it a shot, then people said it was some pomo nonsense and I couldnt find a copy to check, and then you post this.
Seems pretty good but it will have to be balanced. Also his interviews talking about musical harmony is pretty wack.
Brody Jenkins
Because they liked it?
Is reddit that bad?
Kayden Garcia
>pomo nonsense Kill you are self to be honest family.
Luke Wilson
it's obvious that a lot of people got curious and started browsing Veeky Forums, and yes, reddit is that bad. not all subreddits, admittedly, but i'm pretty sure this one was posted on one of the bad ones.
I'm sure a lot of the comments in these threads are just trolls, though.
Brayden Stewart
his interviews are great, what the fuck?
Jayden Jackson
People on Veeky Forums said that, I didn't
Also what the fuck is this sentence
>Kill you are self to be honest family.
Die orphan.
Juan Gomez
simple memes, get with the times, my familiar.
Jonathan Nguyen
I dislike novels or short stories that try to add ridiculous patterns to their works.
The idea that the 12 chapters would line up with a harmony is just stupid. It reminds me of House of Leaves level of gimmicks.
Aiden Bennett
Newfag alert.
Eli Myers
"Kill yourself tbqh senpai" is a meme
You typing too quickly isn't
Camden Gonzalez
...
Christian Campbell
it was a way to describe the structure, because actually doing it would be impossible.
Dominic Johnson
>he isn't privy to the "kill you are self" meme of yore
Owen Clark
In his interview with Silverblatt, host of bookworm, he clearly says that he went into the project consciously trying to make it work towards this structure
i have seen it, and i recall him saying that it wasn't perfect at all.
Sebastian Green
I can understand not getting it down 100%
My problem is what the fuck is the point in the first place
Same thing with House of Leaves. It feels like these guys are role playing in D&D and it isn't enough that their story is mythical but that the actual novel is some mythical artifact.
Jaxson Sullivan
Can someone please explain the "he thought it was a garden, but he had hurt himself by accident" sentence to me, what's so good about it? Is it that it just goes left and has a kind of comedic effect, or am i missing something big?
Luke Ward
>Oh God, it's like Beethoven!
Hudson Cox
anyone?
Jackson Russell
The rest of the book is better. This is a meh-tier passage.
Brody Gray
That's what he did in all his early writing.
Jace Hernandez
What about Invisible Cities? That book uses structure to great effect, although it is really simple, and a good way to interleaf the parables.
Lucas Flores
picked the fuck up then
Jace Edwards
"Things I regretted doing" -You, 2k17
Andrew Sanders
I love this interview. No clue. There is a reason why Stein isn't very popular--her fiction is hard as fuck to figure out. It's called symbolism/allegory, bruh, not a gimmick.
Lucas Morales
Fat Fuck
Jace Foster
An update. I actually went a bit crazy after finding out JR was out of print and spending all day trying to hunt down a copy for a sane price. I didn't find one, but now I have every other Gaddis novel and a few Hawkes hardcovers that I snagged on the cheap (9 bucks was the most I paid) which is cool because Hawkes is my all time favorite.
Jeremiah Garcia
That's somewhat true, but it does a great job highlighting Gass's writing, warts and all.
Ayden Mitchell
best Stein book to start with?
David Young
Pick one at random and start in the middle. It's ok.