How perfect is the English in pic related? Also, spot grammatical error if any

How perfect is the English in pic related? Also, spot grammatical error if any.

>revert

i am guessing this was written by an Indian

You guess bad, pal.

i'm not your pal and you need to learn what an adverb is

if it wasn't written by an indian, it was written by someone who writes like an indian. indians commonly say "revert" when they mean "reply" or "respond".

Also the third sentence in the picture is completely hopeless

Hopeless? As in? What it should have been?

>What it should have been?

that's the point, it's impossible to tell.

>Last time when I asked WD, the person denied for not having rights to do so.

just look at it user. just look at it.

Impossible to tell what user?

The English is awkward and terrible. Do you really need all the errors pointed out?

It says when the person asked another person for the kits, it refused for not having rights to hand over the kits. It's that simple user.

>Do you really need all the errors pointed out?
Sure.

This is just a guess at what I think you're trying to express:

Can you please tell me who hands out kits in Mabel's absence? I need one, and the last time I asked WD, he/she (depending on who the fuck "WD" is) would not give me one, and told me I did not have the right to receive one. Please reply ASAP.

it clearly doesn't say that though
please read how to correctly use the verb "deny"

your post is better english than that in the original picture. but generally a person is not an "it".

>it clearly doesn't say that though
It does. Grow a fucking brain.

You sound like a third grade kid lol

>Grow a fucking brain.

bit unnecessarily aggressive there user

and you still can't use "deny" correctly

>and you still can't use "deny" correctly
I'm pretty sure the person used "deny" correctly but you lack the depth of perception.

>The English is awkward and terrible.
You can't be serious. Tell me you're not serious.

He's right.

How? Can you rectify?

jesus holy fuck

look at the original sentence
look at the meanings in your picture

the word is not being used correctly
"refused" is more appropriate in this context

if english is your first language you should be ashamed

>Grow a fucking brain.
Insult: The Post (EFL Edition)

>"refused" is more appropriate in this context
Similar meaning user.

SWEET FUCKING BABY CHRISTMAS CRACKERS

SIMILAR
BUT NOT THE SAME

>SIMILAR
>BUT NOT THE SAME
It doesn't have to be same, bub.

>You must feel ashame about it.
>You must feel abashe about it.
Both means the same. Just that you quite don't see a lot of people use the second sentence pretty often.

Is English your native language?

deny as in not allow always requires an indirect object

I have denied him x
i have denied giving x to him
The person denied me a kit because she didn't have the rights to do so
:^)

Some Anons here say the English in the pic is awkward and terrible but seem not to rectify the who thing. What happening, damn.

I will tell you why it's what's wrong with your shit after you answer

>me a kit
>because
>didn't have
That sounds pretty kiddish, user.

>I will tell you why it's what's wrong
>I will tell you what's wrong
I haven't slept at all.

Is English your native language?
Yes :^)

>Last time when I asked WD,

What in the fuck.

Who hands over the kits in the case of Mabel's absence? I'm in need of one. When I asked Wd , he refused to (hand them over), stating he didn't have the rights to do so. Please reply as soon as you read this

ETL here

Much better than OP's

but then, if WD refused to do not do something for lack of rights, it means his/her hands were tied., which would mean refused or denied couldn't be even be used

I'm pretty sure the person's grammar in the pic is perfect or similar to what you typed but he/she is being direct and quick compared to yours skipping

>"in the case of"
>I need one (is also correct)
Don't forget the person using "Last time" user.
>Implies the person has asked the unauthorized person before getting a negative feedback.

>Stating
Do we actually need such words in Business?

Much better but OP isn't incorrect either.

OPs last sentence is nonsensical.

What fuck?

Not him, but
>Don't forget the person using "Last time" user.
Unnecessary, the rest of the sentence expresses this already.

No, it makes sense. He/she is just being quick that is it.
>1) Last time when I asked WD,
>2) the person denied/refused for not having rights to do so
Implies the person went through the situation before(first phrase) where he got negative feedback (second phrase)

>the rest of the sentence expresses this already.
No.

No, OP's Last sentence.
>Please revert asa you read this
Native English speakers do not use the word revert in that manner.

Also, you're using feedback wrong.

Yes.

>Native English speakers do not use the word revert in that manner.
You need to understand that It's business English and not native English. There's a difference.

No, idiot.

even so, no native english speaker uses revert in business english like that either. respond or reply are used.

also, this is not business english. in business english it is not appropriate to use abbreviations such as "asa" in that way.

No, you need to understand that you don't understand what business English is.

Yes.

>no native english speaker uses revert in business english like that either
They do.
>in business english it is not appropriate to use abbreviations such as "asa" in that way.
Lolfag I'm done talking to you.

Fuck out my face retard.

i get the feeling you have no work experience whatsoever

shitposting doesn't count as work

Watch me pretend to care, nigger.

Ignore him, he's a gigantic faggot. Just let this thread die.

Your dad's a gigantic faggot goddamn burn