Hey Veeky Forums

Yeah, hence the word "might."

this is a bad idea

It could be a masterpiece, or it could be gore erotica. You need to express the depth of his actions and his psychological brokenness to convey your message. Otherwise, you'll have a bunch of perverts jerking off to it.

Come to think of it, you'll make significantly more money if it turns out to be erotica. Your choice.

>I have this idea for a short story. Basically guy is emotionally crippled by his parents, lives a shitty life (emotionally) and decides he will kidnap a woman and amputate parts of her to sort of send a message to the world of visible and invisible handicaps. Story also touches questions of god's existence, his (in)activity and male(manifest) and female(latent) power in society.

The most pretentious /r9k/ garbage I have ever heard.

>God gave me the parents I got. Also, he brought him onto her path

That has nothing to do with the existence of God, but rather with predestination/destiny. Completely different topic.