Discerning "bad" writing

>This is material for a newspaper if some famous person died, not a novel.

>The deafening claps of thunder and the dazzling flashes of lightning which lit up the ghastly scene testified that the artillery of heaven had lent its supernatural pomp to the already gruesome spectacle.

>dazzling flashes
>ghastly scene
>gruesome spectacle
After his Hellish job, the sad man walked home to his decrepit abode.

good post, thanks for the contribution m8

>have to get quints on Veeky Forums to add it to my list
>see random Bateman thread for some reason

Welcome to my quints collection.

i was trying for this in another thread.

>quints on a dead board

Nice.

Very nice.

i'm convinced this cunt is mot and he only posts here to steal our gets. nice get