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Fuck off anime degenerate pedo scum
I'm not writing anything, I'm mucking around and trying to gather inspiration from looking at beautiful trees. It's not helping.
WHAT DID I SAY?! NO BULLY!
Write something stupid. Write a quick story about a man who struggles with communism.
I wasn't attacking you, I was posting my latest writing
>he writes hateful things
May I give you my critique?
>the narrator is the same as the author
Please go, pedo
Ye know... me pappy used'tah tell me ye can always tell a lot about a man by how young his wife is and how old his kids're... and'y can tell a lot 'bout a girl by how young she is'nd how old'er momma is... and me?... well... I'm damn near 50, and me pappy in yer fancy terms'd be called a 'statutory rapist'... well, we jus called him 'paw'... and his wifey, well... she wu'nt no statue... so we just called 'maw', or 'Luanne'...
Now... Luanne was just barely a girl when paw got'er. an' she damn near caused Judgement Day the way she screamed when she'd me and me two other triplets... or at least that's what the vid'er recordin made it sound like.
And her pappy...?...well....... he was one o'em 'mehicans' Trump is warnin' about... and her momma was damn near 50 too when she got a half breed in'er belly... but i ought'nt speak 'bout me momma that way, considerin' a quarter breed seems't be worth less than a half breed... but that's all down to perspective y'see...
Now... that's probably 'nuff'bout me parents... i suppose y'came t'me to hear me story... did'nt'ye?...
Now... this all began durin' the fifties... it was'a real good time to be white folk... 'nd we're just white enough...
Now... they say y'can ne'er stand in the same river twice... but that's all down to perspective y'see... but in our case... we're always movin' down stream... when me gran'pappy came to visit, and he did enough for a man've his reputation... well... he always said it's cause our mehican spirit wants'te be closer to its traditional burial grounds the older its body gets... but paw jus wouldn't stop screwin' girls right when we got right and settled... but I said I'd stop talking 'bout me parents so I ought'a...
Now... as I wus sayin... ye'cn ne'er stand in the same river twice... well... ive stood in a lot of rivers.. fishin' y'see on account'v me paw bein' too busy screwin girls t'work 'nd me maw bein' too young t'work and bein' part of all kinds of mehican rituals considerin' she was the only mehican girl where'e'er we went... but now... i damn said I would stop talkin' bout me parents...
Now... fishin... that's'a real sport... nuthin like them near-freezin waters t'chill you 'wake...'nd the taste of fresh fish caught wit' yr own hands 'nd still bloody... y'see we couldn't afford no tools or matches'n'wood on account of our paw goin' off screwin' girls all over town 'n spendin what'e'er money he had payin' off 'er pappy... 'nd're maw always off doin'em mehican fertility rituals... but damn it now... I said I'd stop talkin' bout me parents...
Nuthin like a fresh fish... still bloody'n'sweet...its som'thn me 'nd me brothers thought of as a ritual... and as we got older... we got into a bunch more rituals... not like the fertility rituals maw wus in... but damn it now.. I'd said I'd stop talkin' bout me parents...
Now... the first of these rituals happen'd bout the time we collectively turned 12... we called it 'winky-dink'...
pls r8
5/10
First paragraph made me lol. Then I got bored