What is her best poem? what do you think of her body of work?

Who is she?

We get it you want attention

>everything about her seems constructed and artificial, like a carefully crafted distillation of teenage angst.

very well put, user. besides being totally in-authentic, there's something about it is just downright creepy.

youtube.com/watch?v=w6CCePrJlaU

you should all be ashamed of yourselves

i'd like to analyse her body of work if you know what i mean - nikolai gogol

seriously is it just 1 person making most of these shit threads

Where can I read some of her shit?

the trash

The Rev Jen is an even better poet. Here is her poem called "Space". It's from her poetry book "I'll Never Wash This Vagina Again"

Space
You say you want space,
So here it is, yours for the taking.
All of it.
All of the vast, cold, dark, heavy, oppressive space.
Outside of my vagina.

yes, and people reply anyway. like the jordan peterson shit. everyone wants to post but nobody makes quality OPs.

it makes me wanna puke and at the same time a relief that i'm hundreds, probably thousands, of miles away from that vagina

Boxxy, dozens of copycat-chans, Rose, Agatha, Ciara, the list goes on

She got the pretty little titties

Who dat?

She's another pretty face who will be replaced in a few years when the next one comes along.

it does, mate

>that
>pretty face
protip: there's a reason she wears so much makeup

Who is this whore?

that's not poetry...

THATS NOT POETRY AT ALL!

it's disconcerting that you guys are incapable of using google.

>Hi, I'm A Slut
>A Slam Poem

Didn't even wait around for her to begin speaking.

>The Rev Jen
sounds about right

youtube.com/watch?v=JS7et14ZXBs

Guess who is me....

....in the comments.

hnnnnnnng

what the fuck is her accent

who the fuck is that hack?
>believing she can writes poetry
kill yourself

>that slight English accent that slips in at the end of a word

I think she's cute, haven't read her poetry and don't have the interest to though. Don't like how she comes off in her videos either

I prefer her earlier work, it was a bit more raw.
youtube.com/watch?v=0FUGduS5FQ0

I hate how she has this idea lately that she needs to incorporate the "british" accent to sound legit.
I disliked her, but now I dislike her even more.

your comma usage is proof of literature's death m9

>like a british person trying to speak with an english accent
que?

the dress is absolute garbage

As others have mentioned, her accent, whatever she's doing with her voice, is annoying and really distracting. Poor girl's struggling with authenticity.
>virginity isn't real lmao, sex is whatever you want it to be lmao
Nice defense mechanism. Talk about a bad conscience.

I'd fuck her, if you know what I mean.

I don't get it

pls explain

just found out her boyfriend's a "filmmaker"
youtu.be/oSwItKu2Qz8
>that acting
>that tween story
>literally all his "films" are they same shit

do these teenage "artists" types ever realize that their echobox of "artsy" teenager fans are tasteless and that the real world is very different from their quirky wes anderson fantasy world?

She's a goddamn teenager, Not a single one of you wasn't an attention seeking angsty faggot at that age. At least your cringey phase wasn't under a public spotlight, so you didn't have to deal with the inevitable humiliation that she will have to when she grows out of it. You should pity this girl instead of judging her.

>She's a goddamn teenager, Not a single one of you wasn't an attention seeking angsty faggot at that age.
>Implying these aren't the very people who make these threads and post in them

ok, so the only reason they rag on people like her is because they're jealous that someone's famous for being an angsty faggot and it isn't them?

She's so perfect. She's the woman I see in my dreams every time I fall asleep.

>tfw no gf
Hurts so much more when you realize she's what your missing out on.

Isn't she in her 20s? Pretty sure it's fair game to make fun of anybody in their 20s.

Fuck lit is finally catching up, I must have posted about her accent in a dozen threads. She's an American who lives in London (maman et papa pay for her tuition) and like so many pretentious Americans, she has a quirky tea-and-crumpets idea of Britain as a hip, polka dot-filled fantasy land, so she puts on this utterly affected abortion of an accent. Don't be fooled, I'm a Londoner and I know several Americans who do exactly the same thing. She's actually not that bad a poet, I mean, her imagery isn't uniformly trite, the I'm A Slut poem is pretty good for a slam poem, particularly that prescient line about blowjob eyes. I think she's just the Boxxy of Veeky Forums, she's cute in a quirky, slightly infuriating way and the hate-boner she gives Veeky Forums is psychologically interesting enough that it makes people comment on all these threads. Like I'm doing.

top kek

why does she have a pop-tart tattooed on her arm?

fucking dropped

ayyy

It's almost as if modern identity politics are little more than fashion.

same

You can do better dude.

>Hurts so much more when you realize she's what your missing out on.

I honestly wouldn't want a relationship with her.

I'd love regular hook ups, sure, but not any kind of shared daily life. Her "brave Millennial artist" nonsense and her endless virtue signalling would get real tiresome real quick.

any gf is better than >no gf bruh

In this picture she looks like Laurie Penny.

Except Penny is infinitely superior desu.

There are degrees of gfs and you can still do better.

What went wrong?

>any gf is better than >no gf bruh

lol

do you seriously believe this

she became a slut

Probs never stuck in crazy.

He has yet to learn that some women are human in appearance only.

There are a lot of psychos out there.

What neat Cyrillic he has.

Are we over-generalizing about women again ITT? Some are as emotionally damaged as men, I hope we all know.

Since when do you still post here

>Some are as emotionally damaged as men, I hope we all know.

Yes, Butterfly. We all know. There are psychos on both sides of the gender fence. Clearly emotional derangement isn't an exclusively female quality.

Why do you insist on playing the tedious pedant every single second of your life?

I guess I just don't understand this obsession with not hurting anyone's feelings.

As long as the internet was up. I tool a long time off with the occasional drive-by. How's it goin', Bane?

Why do the frogs?

>As long as the internet was up [at my place now] (I thought I'd stop by some). I took a long time off

In Canada, in 2015, 604 murders were committed.

''Males make up the majority of both homicide victims and accused. In 2014, 72% of homicide victims and 87% of homicide accused were male, findings that have remained consistent over the past 10 years.''

''The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC)'s 2010 National Intimate Partner and Sexual Violence Survey reports on the lifetime prevalence of rape, physical violence or stalking by an intimate partner, focusing for the first time on victimization by sexual orientation. It finds a victimization prevalence of 43.8 percent for lesbians, making it the second most affected group after bisexual women (61.1 percent), ahead of bisexual men (37.3 percent), heterosexual women (35 percent), heterosexual men (29 percent) and homosexual men (26 percent).''

Trump won you fat dyke. Accept it already.

Stop bringing it back to this shit apropos of nothing.

Pfft. Please.

Her feelings say more than real statistics ever could.

Go and take your "statistics" elsewhere, you mansplaining oppressor.

what hath though thigh thine smallest titties doth feelith like?

None of the above won.
HRC got the popular, but by a hair, several hairs across the board, the Orange One seems to have gotten it through the electoral college. I'm sure Stein made a much bigger impact than is being allowed though. But hey, this is not a democracy. Not even a democratic-republic.
Donny Tiny-hands may be a good thing in the end.

The Hillary fags just keep on giving the salt. Still asspained enough to post about how not asspained you are. Sad!

It's not that bad, it looks really professional. I bet he could easily shit out another mumblecore movie.
Also someone post the copy pasta from the last thread.

I'm a woman gotta take pictures of my face constantly have to keep taking pictures with my face in them I have three different websites just to post pictures of me looking cute for my family friends and total strangers did you see me wearing this new clothing did you see me standing in front of this building one time I went to the library and just so you know that I went there I took fifteen pictures of myself standing next to it and looking cute haha look at this one it's of a burger I ate that I wanted to show everyone and also 80% of the frame is my face can you believe the cutesy affected expression I'm making don't I look cute when I'm doing absolutely everything that I ever do on a daily basis that I photograph myself doing have you seen these 214 pictures of me visiting Madrid for one day have you seen how I stood next to all the things and my face was there and I was cute hang on don't take a picture of me let me make sure I'm posing my facial muscles in a way that perfectly makes me look youthful and girlish and attractive in a series of gestures and expressions that are half-conscious because I'm a narcissist but also half-unconscious because I've simply introjected a constant need to be posing and preening and peacocking in every moment of my fucking life and everything I do is just a vehicle for appending my face to it because I'm a woman WOW excuse me are you misogynistic or something it's not like I do this for you are you kidding me you actually think that I spend all day every day every hour of my entire waking life specifically accentuating all the secondary sex characteristics you find attractive and posing my face to look cute and young for YOU are you delusional I do this for me and nobody else I just like to feel attractive nevermind the fact that attractive presupposes the question to whom I do it for me and nobody else now excuse me while I take a picture of myself factitiously soullessly smirking in a way that I've unconsciously learned makes me look Dorky-Cute Variant #81 while I try on sunglasses in a fucking Walmart

Uhh, no. I hate her guts. Glad she isn't president. That fucking party threw my vote away.
I never trusted the media before, but this past year has been extremely disgusting.

I think it's funny.

Not every poem needs to be an expansion upon millennia of arcane exegetical buggery.

Sometimes someone can say "MY VAGINA" and you can let it go, or simply enjoy that the poem took literally 7 seconds to read all of, caused a feeling, and then move on.

Here, I wrote a poem:

I said I'd write a poem
to this I'm now committed
I must maintain my stature
amongst the bedeviled beshitted

so simple it is to moan!
Each whore can do it nightly
At least they each get paid
Peon critic does not, rightly

And in their mire I sit
A critic of critics! To my eyeballs in shit!
Awaiting user's complaint
To make me a martyr, perhaps a saint!

But really I'm writing for writing's sake
and not for retard reader's pate
and as I've now just finished my plate
I'll summarily fuck off.

Look at that
do you hate me now?
Guess what: I'm published, too.
I hope you're boiling in your own juices, babe.

Bottom line, contribute to the state of the art or at least complain in a demi-articulate manner, perhaps in the form of critique, satire, or competitive work.

have you never been on Veeky Forums,
men are equally as vain, fuck you

I didn't like your poem (there's a few places where your poem doesn't scan, and the mix of slant and perfect, masculine and feminine end-rhymes is off-putting to me personally, but then I take an orthodox approach), but that's okay, because you're expressing yourself creatively. Congratulations on being published by the way.

However, the anons you responded to were phrasing their concerns from the majority opinion of the board as dictated by the general culture. The community on Veeky Forums, similarly to any community of critics, is partly defined by a slowly evolving palate of universally understood but rarely spoken tastes. In a community of critics which has developed a distaste for, say, cheaply produced horror films, no exegesis, synthesis, analysis, or discussion is required in the review of cheaply produced horror films, other than the observation that such a work adheres to the norm. A community of music critics who dislike glam metal need only remark that a song sounds like Motley Crue in order to dismiss it. Likewise, Veeky Forums has developed a strong aversion to slam poetry and related forms. To the majority opinion of Veeky Forums, there is nothing particularly revolutionary or new in "Space". Its only noteworthy in that it exemplifies this particular fashion of writing poetry, which has already been deemed worthless as a subject of discussion within the community. Were Veeky Forums arguing this view in opposition to an outside source, their reasoning for such a harsh critique would have to be defended in a "demi-articulate manner," -- but otherwise, their complaints are understood by default.
and were simply signalling their adherence to the normative opinion -- a form of criticism no less valid than clapping, booing, jeering, or cheering.

Ah, I'm in a gore thread.

I suppose I'll shut down and jeer instead next time.

I'm not actually published, I simply enjoy the persona, however I'm working on publishing zines at the moment.

I'm actually quite terrible at poetry. As I've recently stopped taking adderall, I'm trying to relearn writing, and I figured I never truly "understood" poetry so I'd start writing a poem a day.

I've been reading a lot of poetry and I have about 30 or 40 poems written on hand. Most are awful. Genuine dreck, like above described. However by virtue of my reading and writing more, I'm improving in self-expression and focus off stimulants in spite of my... retardation?

Ah, I've digressed.

No, I frequent this board in cycles. I have for years. Soon, I will self-publish little cheaply-made booklets to get some confidence. I intend to do all the formatting and creation, all the distribution myself at first. I have a lot to learn in each of these areas, however developing the source material is step one.

Why the fuck am I typing all of this out?

Do you have leads on other online literary communities? I need some correspondence. This one has lead me down some good paths in the past, but I'm in need of diversification. The recent uptick in nationalists and propaganda (last couple of years) has been ruinous to the community.

youtu.be/Y2g1uHCarfc
>a film made 60 years ago on a shitty developing country is better than a film made by some upper middle class brit in 2016

Really makes you think.

jesus, I'm utterly incapable or reading this shit. congrats if that was your intention

no

for vvhat pvrpose

you can easily find out who we're talking about by using op's image and google

fycj, you're still here?

Do you know what happened to Feminister and REI?

>I'm sure Stein made a much bigger impact than is being allowed though.

If you count embezzling millions of dollars from disenfranchised Democrat voters to be making an "impact" then sure.

>Donny Tiny-hands may be a good thing in the end.

He is going to wind up being a competent (and potentially somewhat successful) economic reformer. That's about it. Which is a good thing, btw. It's exactly what the nation needs right now.

The hysteria coming from people thinking he's the spiritual descendant of Hitler is naive alarmist crap from people who are too easily hoodwinked by globalist propaganda.

There aren't many online literary communities with quality discussion. Even fewer that I'm aware of. Historically, truly great movements have arisen from small, highly localized enclaves of artists rather than disparate and impersonal webs of correspondence, though the internet is still young in literary terms, so who knows. I've recently found my own local cultured in-group. Most of those taking part are unpublished, unknown, struggling, and are likely to fail. Yet, there's a genuine free flow of ideas. People readily share thoughts without fear of deviating from social conventions or the law. Real creative work gets done. Its the closest I've ever felt to Voltaire in the Salon, Sartre sipping coffee across from de Bouvoir in the Quartier Latin, Burroughs lounging in the Beat Hotel, Joyce drinking with Hemingway and Fitzgerald in a hotel barroom. But of course without all the surrounding Paris-ness.

My advice to you is to invite yourself into your local scene as a productive writer. If you don't live in a city, either consign yourself to nothing but your work, move, or die (either in a metaphorical or literal sense). And don't lie about being published. People won't trust you, and trust is worth more than silver or gold or your work in a hick magazine.

Lay off the adderall, m8.

>don't lie on an anonymous board

While I may construct random fictions here to suit whatever point I want to make, it's something I seldom do. Your honest response beget my honest response.

Fair enough. I've always lived in/around large cities. I'm near a liberalish hotbed right now, one in flux. It's pretty interesting, quite a few artists. Most mediocre, some very good. I may get bored or anxious here soon. But I'm in a place that's inspiring me now. I simply need friends, which is why I'm debating a return to school.

I wish you luck.

>Guess what: I'm published, too.
>I hope you're boiling in your own juices, babe.

>I'm not actually published, I simply enjoy the persona

uh... okay? I guess you got Veeky Forums real good then? ...

>I must maintain my stature
>amongst the bedeviled beshitted

This made me laugh though.

Burn out? Maybe/hopefully something good came along to distract them, as I was temporarily.
What's fycj?

I like the guy he's chosen for dealing with China, but that's about it. He and his crew are going to embezzle and cheat the already working poor, and fail to bring enough J-O-Bs back. Trashing the minimum wage, privatizing Social Security, will make people very very angry. This is not going to go over well. The next financial meltdown is likely to happen in the next four years too. Accelerationism here we come.