ITT: We pretend to be Rupi Kaur

>blank verse

found the pleb

Someone should attach some stupid line drawing to these and release them on tumblr and intagram

women are to
the world
what water is
to man

If you roll down
a hill
you meet an end

If you roll down
a mountain
you bring an avalanche
and still meet
an end.

I am sitting on the toilet taking

a shit and I couldn't fall asleep. I

have food allergies and something I ate

today has made me break out in hives. So

fucking itchy and antihistamines aren't

working.

Tumblr needs to remember this poem anyways?

body hair
is totally natural
if he doesn't like it
you don't
have to like him

some people think brothels are for weirdos
and maybe we are weird
maybe this music is weird
and the clubs are overrated

A girl is beauty
She doesn't need
To prove it
To herself
To her friends

The sky is blue
The birds
Don't know it
Because it is
All they see

a women holds
the power of healing and
growth right at her
breats

can
anyone
reccomend me
the best
collection of shakespeare's
works?
i'd like one
with a glossary and notes,
but not
excessive
notes.

This actually seems pretty legit did you steal it off her?

so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens

the scars on my arms
tell stories
that dead white men
could not dream of

The act of sex gives
human beings a tremendous
amount of pleasure.
Pleasure they don’t deserve.
No one deserves to
experience so much pleasure,
especially since some
humans get to experience
it while some are denied it.

i don't know
your
budget
or if it has any notes
or glossary
but this looks
pretty neat
nevertheless
biblio.co.uk/book/complete-works-includes-poems-sonnets-shakespeare/d/836390908?aid=frg&utm_source=google&utm_medium=product&utm_campaign=feed-details&gclid=CjwKEAiAkajDBRCRq8Czmdj-yFgSJADikZggTW8rN1xntmpO6AsTNXhqsNRKSxovKRbjQeE6eOPLxxoCXv_w_wcB

we should create our own rupi kaur. make a twitter account where we post similar shit tier poems and gain followers because our bio says "feminism + sisterhood [emoji]!!!!"

it is probably a lucrative idea

they flee horrors untold
yet you take that brick
and build that wall
you are comfortable now
-refugees

she has a slim figure
a pretty smile
broad shoulders
and angst inside
-a women

liking people like you
its natural
loving people like you
its the worst thing in the world
-love

i will be strong
bravery is my trait
loud i will speak
deep down i am weak
-women of color

what
you are reading
right now
is a sentence

there are no rules
they can't
tell you
what to do
you are
you
be to yourself
true

I think it should be time for a Veeky Forums-tan, we will use her as the alter ego. Not joking. I really think we should do this, I mean /v/ has their Vivian slut - so why can't we have ours?

What should we call her?
I propose Dolly Bell

kek

>Dolly Bell

not ethnic enough

it has to be more intersectional

something like Aadhya Chhabra

BLEED IN LOO

...

>not ethnic enough

this is true

it would also be fun if part of the name alluded to something more Veeky Forums aswell

Dolly Bell sounds to white we need a strong independent women of colour name to show how progressive we are.

I propose Latisha Black: A shy half nigger raised by her white mother but who identifies as black. She lives in an inner city apartment where she is trying to fulfill he dream to become a philosopher.

I would just like to add Black isn't her actual last name she just chose it because of how proud she is of her identity.

Luisa J. Borginos

Daevaki
Fawad
Wadhwani

I propose keeping your character, but propose the name be 'Fetisha Boniface'

we should make fake rupi kaur poetry images with Elliot Rodgers quotes in her style of free verse

When a woman has sex with a
beautiful man, she probably
feels like she is in heaven.
But the world isn't supposed to be heaven.
For some humans to actually
be able to feel such heights of heavenly pleasure is
selfish

you could just make an anagram of rupi kaur

Kira Upur

When a woman is ready
she opens her wounds the world
for sharp fingers will peer in
and look
at the yeast infection
please send me some cream
it itches; but is beautiful

too obvious
more like this please

Can't be. He used caps. Everyone knows pleb-tier feminist blank verse can't have caps.

just remember
when you hurt
that your pain is more valuable
because
it is yours
and humble

One need only look
at a woman’s shape
to discover that she is not
intended for either too much mental
or too much
physical
work

with girls
nature has had in view
what is called
in a dramatic sense
a striking effect

women
in truth
exist entirely for
the propagation
of the race
and
their destiny
ends here

beauty
is a knife
to cut girls
to break them down
it's a shell
and no one notices
what's inside

beautiful women are
what we are confronted with
and divided into
and the remainder ever
is proof of our
incommensurability

>AREN'T I STILL RILKE????????????????????????
lmao

check your priviliges, chess
fourteen male pieces longing to capture
the only female one
rape
whilst keeping the great male - the king -
safe
but if you check your prviliges,
check mate

check mate - Rupi Kaur

lovely

all a feminist poet
has to do to sell books
is write sentences about
how girls are strong
and oppressed
by men
and no one will notice
her poems are all the same
and take no effort
at all

I wish I could hear
your lips spluttering those heavenly
exciting filthy words, see your mouth making dirty sounds
and noises, feel your body wriggling under me, hear and smell the dirty fat
girlish
farts
going pop pop
out of your pretty bare girlish bum
and fuck fuck fuck fuck
my naughty little hot fuckbird's cunt
for ever.

haha, that's so gross and definitely not something im into

So what
I love
sex
So what
I am
a slut
So what
I fuck on camera

I am
still smart
I still
have existential
dread
I read
Sartre

Existentialism and Sex, Rupi Grey

my voice will be heard
until we stop teaching our kids shakespeare
until we stop telling people being healthy is good
until we stop complimenting people we don't know
until we stop telling our kids that god is a white male
until we stop standing in silence facing menspreading
my voice will be heard

my voice will be heard - Rupi Kaur

he told me to not be
so loud
so angry
so excitable
so
me

he thought be loved
a cloud yet he
was afraid of
storms

this is kind of what I had in mind, obviously they should be done better so that they don't look like obvious shops.

Kek'ed that's so fucking true.

Typo aside, I would be completely unsurprised if I found that in her book.

two to the
one
and the one
to the three

I like good
pussy
and I like
good tree

This tugged a strangely genuine emotion from me user wtf

this is perfect, totally believable

So who's gonna compile all of these together and publish it under the title "Cream & Sugar"?

wtf is this gibberish nonsense, dont quote that tranny again

>"Cream & Sugar"
LOL

Fuck the spoken word scene tho.

I played as a drummer in one of their low level competitions. One girl did these pandering type of poems, and easily beat out the competition, many of them people who seemed put genuine effort in.

Also ton of the competition seemed like extremely white rap with no back track. was weird.

lines written by somebody
for the witless nobodies
put out for everybody
when read by anybody

they realize that

they could be somebody
writing for shallow nobodies
and then everybody
would cease to be amazed by anybody

writing meaningless lines
on instagram
dressed in milk and honey

Change last line to cream and sugar instead of milk and honey, so you get the useless name drop.

I think the idea of doing a character assassination with these is hilarious, but it's nothing time won't take care of itself when this lady's moment is gone and she doesn't find an SJW crowd to pander to anymore

Stop shitting up the board with your butthurt. Why don't you discuss good poets instead of getting butthurt over shit ones.

meant to reference

instead of whoops.

Feminism's goal
>Women can prove that they are capable of just the same ACTIVE STRIVING as men!
>We'll show men that their VIRTUE and VIGOUR through LIBERTY is the human condition!
>We'll show men that we don't neeed thm to dote on us, and that we are capable of Bildung and boldly facing the world, just as well as they!

Feminism's result
>my passive excretions are interesting
>my unearned appearance is interesting
>give me free money
>you should care that i'm sad and weak
>i'm weak and i feel bad feelings and it's your fault. look at this picture of my cooter

Please make it happen, we do not need much just 40 or so "poems", some bullshit doodles and a backstory about a mixed race girl with gender fluidity.
This could be our thing, what is more post-modern than white male conspiring to make this up.

...

Pretty much this. There can be great feminist writers like Virginia Woolf and Simone de Beauvoir, but the problem with most feminist literature today is that it gets its adherents to assume that just because they are a woman they are intrinsically interesting and deep.

Rupi Kaur is the perfect example of this. Her poetry is terrible and all on the same theme. If she wasn't a woman and a poc nobody would give her two seconds of attention. Instead her banal observations and platitudes land her a spot on the bestseller list and a ton of praise.

Just because an observation comes from a woman doesn't make it interesting. Just being a woman doesn't make you special or absolve you of responsibility for your decisions. And no, showing pictures of your period is not a revolutionary act.

Woolf and Austen are part of the canon because their work had value in and of itself. That's the only test that matters.

The reason that Woolf and Austen attained to that level was because men had brutally harsh standards for judging a woman's work, too.

Being overly judged is better than being overly assumed to be interesting.

Women are being kept in perpetual childhood by this. Society's reaction to Rupi Kaur is a parent's reaction to his five year old drawing a snowman with feet. Snowmen don't have feet, but we'll put it on the fridge anyway.

the clears tears
from my face
reflect
the red tears
from my womanhood

I went and got started with the cover image.

JOYCE REINCARNATED!

True, but he could have added some because he did not notice it.

Hi Rupi Joyce!

when it rains
it pours
they say
why can't love
pour
like rain

How about this, something sweeter is needed.

Needed a pun

we should juxtapose images related to the poems like she did, but with memes and pastebin watermarked shit

stop complaining about rupi kaur. her concepts of her poems didn't need to be original because i didn't know that rape and molestation had to be an original concept.

That was genuinely
amazing
well done
sir

Because its funny faegot

Rape is a sexy concept.

How did it go from Jane Eyre to this, the worst thing is hat the ones that read Jane Eyre STILL act like this!

literally no one brought into question the integrity of her poetry.

it's undercooked tumblr
sophistry with
line breaks and
no
discernable
talent
targeted towards the most
gullible fucks
i'm the history of
the
internet

That isn't blank verse. Blank verse is unrhymed iambic pentameter. You're thinking of free verse.

this, this and this!

she writes from personal experiences and some quite hard topics and it's really kind of fucking rude for you to think it's garbage and an insult to good writing. intellectual bullshit

Keep in mind that this will be the name of Veeky Forums's mascot, I think we might need to come up with a Veeky Forums name and change it around so it becomes more foreign.