Whoa

All of these strike me as halfway decent aphorisms but utterly incoherent poems.

Is this what passes for poetry now, or just some mediocre brain fart needlessly spread across several lines?

Is it both?

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4real?

Why haven't you folks picked up the book nu-males the world over are going crazy over?

You aren't sexist are you?

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how can mirrors
be real if
our eyes
aren't
real

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I'm not a sexist, no. But the poetry isn't good.

Why are we giving this girl all this attention?

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Is this serious? I can't believe this is actually published.

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holy... I want more

This is what you get when you google image search

she's a brown woman from Canada

that's why

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You are aware of the kind of society in which you live right? Commercial 'art' is of poor quality in all fields.

Justin Bieber is popular in music.
Cape shit is popular in film.
etc.

Why would poetry or literature be an exception? The general mass of consciousnesses that are produced in this mode of production do not cultivate an appreciation of high art

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the drawings make it twice as bad

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True, but I just can't comprehend how anyone besides an SJW reads this and considers it good.

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the piss is filling the cup

What makes you think anyone else reads it and considers it good?

Very good

It has more than 1300 reviews on amazon and a nearly 5 star rating.

That happens though

Holy Moley!

I don't know what that means.

Nor do I know why anyone would active seek this shit out to get outraged over. Stop being emotionally invested in shitty commercial pop-culture.

Well, i mean its decent advice, but its terrible fucking "poetry"

No, just no. Rousseau was such a hack

Is that from The Death Grips?

I don't think anyone is that outraged or emotionally invested, we're just laughing at a shitty poet.

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So what? People also shit themselves on occasion. Should we photograph that and sell it as artwork? It isn't artwork and it proves nothing.

I'm not outraged, I am amused and confused.

Who was taking the picture?

I'm tired of all this self-aggrandizing body positivity. Where are all the authors telling us that our bodies are shameful and repulsive?

why wont she capitalize anything REEEEE

New meme if real

OOH KIL CAPTIN ALEX

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Good question.

It's not even good advice damnit

This board is so God damn stuck up. Stop shitting on things that you dont understand.

We fucking get it, youre sheltered and privileged and can't relate to feminist art, maybe it just isnt for you then. Stop pretending it doesn't have artistic merit, because in a few decades time youll all see it for the revolutionary piece of work it is.

Also Id like to see you all write something even close to this.

>Piss
>coming from inside the vagina
Check out an anatomy book sometime.

I'm going to stop showering and tell my gf to fuck off if she thinks I smell

wjere does the peepee come from then

>youll all see it for the revolutionary piece of work it is.

You almost had me there for a second

What frightens me is that serious people in our culture will actually deem this a masterpiece of femlit

It's time to stop

first post best post

Women have a special appendage that unfurls from the vagina when they have to pee.

>feminist art
>art
...Hm...

>Stop pretending it doesn't have artistic merit
It doesn't

>in a few decades time youll all see it for the revolutionary piece of work it is
doubtful

but its not revolutionary, these types of lukewarm vague sentences have been clumsily made by teenagers since the dawn of the internet. There's nothing deep about them.

>2017
>feminist
>revolutionary

brah

thats hot

>tfw my mind is expanded with thoughts conceived mainly from white men

Is that what they call a feminine penis?

I mean, a lot of guys need to hear this particular one too.

Real

Eyes
Realize real

Lies

no it just looks like the pee from the dick in is filling up the cup in lighten up it's a funny little visual gag

Le high class man [|;^)

Meant to type "Coming from a penis inside the vagina" Face the wrong way. W/e

I know I know. I'm always light

Am I the only one who has serious doubts about butterface being female?

Are you mad that you have not reached the intellectual achievements that I have reached?

That would certainly explain the lack of "honey".

Sarah, I love you. Please be my gf.

>implying it's piss

I don't mind that you do. I never announced it back in the beginning. They dragged it out of me.

Saved for future use.

Should be able to adapt it for shitposting on /tv/ as well.

Thank you.

seconded

Bruh, this is such a waste of paper

this is huh, wow

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Will laugh so hard of this post is quoting the parody comics, I mean poems.

Unfortunately, I legitimately can't tell the difference.

That is a rather effay pepe, friendo

rupi kaur is kinda Veeky Forums

>omg she knows who Cervantes is
>must be Veeky Forums
le get the fuck out

These are literally eliiot Rodgers quotes what the fuck is happening

I don't understand what the point of enjambing "warn him to" and "again" even is.

This would unironically be a good poem if the lines were arranged differently.

She makes Cervantes look better? What is that supposed to mean?

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Continuing off of this, I sometimes have doubts that I'm a female too.

>/tv/
Go back there.

Trolls make tripfags

I'm glad I'm a woman.

When a
Woman
Has sex with a
Beautiful man
she probably feels like she is in
heaven.
But the world isn't supposed to be
heaven
For some humans
Feeling such heights of heavenly
pleasure is
selfish.

I'd like to see any of you guys try and create something better than pic related... it's simplistic and yet incredibly beautiful at the same time, that doesn't mean it is easy or that it is nonsense. Go ahead Veeky Forums, prove to me that you can do something better than this. Kaur truly is a modern master poet.

If you're really a lesbian then you're basically a man anyway.

when it rains
it poors
on the Moors
an old man snores
They sneer
As I peer
Off the pier
A pear
So There.
- Anonymous