Ayo DFW back up in this mawfucka Bout to spit some PoMo Flow My Nigga Tommy P, get at me Prepare for hot bars of Doom Also, fuck you, Harold Bloom! Ayo, so, but then, it goes like this: Ayo my homie pass the Blotter Get my shit high. Epiphany: This Is Water Weed smoke to my dome, white banner flying, Thinkin of my Moms, The Bitch had me crying Fuck Harvard, yo, I dropped the fuck out That's when I met a new literary scout I wrote some shit, yeah, it was 'ight About some bitch and her crazy plight Now I'm finna unload my Best Shit's gonna cash, funny, a true Infinite Jest My prose is swag-central, Swag-O--Matic I wrote a potboiler, The Corrections, I told my homie Franzen he could have it I needa get my dick sucked to scratch an itch I got no love for hoes tho, I'll throw a table at a bitch Yo, girl, show me the tushy, let me at that Audience Pussy Blast your O-Ring with my load Orin is me, I still ain't no love for hoes Let me tell you again who I am: Davey Wallace, bitch, and this ends my jam
Gavin Wood
If you spent another hour editing it would have been funny.
Nathaniel Williams
You aren't funny.
Lincoln Carter
>haters
Jacob Long
also >implying I'd edit a post I spent a total of 2 minutes thinking up and typing
Ethan Reyes
Ya lad, we know how long you spent on it.
Cooper Wilson
that's not what he wrote. THIS is hat he wrote.
Hey my name is david foster wallace and I'm here to say I got the freshest lines, don't go away I can rhyme orange with door hinge fuck you dumbass ass niggas white people supreme bitch don't ream just cum and cream lick my dick suck out the cream this ain't no dream you sucking my cream right out my peen!
Asher Howard
ok maybe five minutes I'm sorry you lie about how much time you spend on things though
>projecting
Noah Martinez
I think you need to stop reading and reading about dfw
Josiah Reyes
Here's another that goes out to you from DFW's ghost it's called suck my dick, user
Yo, I'm getting sick if your spergy shit Stick your head in a bag and take a helium hit So not even your mother has to put up with your lack of wit Your rightful place: on a chink board Spewing your trite opinions on the written word Your second rightful place: down on your knees While I, Daddy Wallace, hit a blunt full of dem trees Mouth open, user, as I unsheathe my thing I call it Big Daddy, or The Pale King
David Adams
Couldn't get past the failed board and word rhyme. Not quite as bad blotter and water, but I'll just give you the benefit of the doubt and say: todo esta bien.
Kevin Cox
>what is a pedestrian analysis of lyrics/poetry
lmao wtf are you in grade 10 English class???
Ayo Coming at you again, you fucking dunce Near rhymes are rhymes too with their consonance What did I tell you, you pathetic fuck? You're out of your depth You're probably what they call: Beta Cuck Get down on them knees, as I told you before You spanish soon-to-be-used whore You stupid, idiotic young dope Start sucking while I meditate on this Bob Hope
Aaron Reed
trine
Dominic Gray
Ayo, you little fucking dunce Back at you again after some bumps Of that good shit, Bing up my nose To cast verbose hellfire and castrate your prose If you're writing is like most I've seen on this board You deserve to be committed to come Psych Ward For no-talents and pseuds alike I'll carve off your head to hoist it on a pike You can't phase me, kid, you never will, you spic Come back again after you finally read Moby Dick Or pick up some Bomb-Ass Borges Better yet, grab a hold of some archaic vernacular about The Old West Blood Meridian, there's cum on your chinagain Go back to your mommy, you punk-ass wannabe
Liam Long
I was rubbing The Pale King, erect I didn't even bother to check Auto-Correct
*To some Psych Ward
Ayden Williams
lmao
Connor Sanchez
Thanks for the keks, MC Kafkaesque. I wish you the best, that ain't even a Jest.
Austin Davis
>Veeky Forums thinks ironic raps are funny oh boy
Henry Sullivan
how about you all keep editing the original post instead of trying to "rap" ...might actually be more entertaining to see the end result.
Adam Cooper
Fuck jokes, fuck cynicism and laughs When I step up the whole place gets class True sentiment, Im putting the man back in human I remember you bitches, I showed up and you ran.
Damn this Dave is KURAZY
Easton Bell
lmfao 8/10
Ian White
shut up, bitch
Nathan Cook
aww, that's real cute kiddo. you kiss mommy with that mouth?
Gabriel Cooper
Ayo ayo DJ Bloom on the mic 'Bout to scalp this bandana-wearin' dyke We agree on one point, for you said it best Your whole oevre is an infinite jest You try to play it off as autistically gallant But I find that your work lacks discernable talent
Liam Bailey
oeuvre*
Come at me.
Anthony Miller
...
Brayden Young
what was he reading???
Landon Cruz
i actually believed this was real because of 'girl with weird hair'
Evan Davis
This guy is just a meme here right? I read Brief Interviews with Hideous Men and I was actually embarrassed by how bad and juvenile it was.
Leo Morales
So much buttthurt in this thread.
>tfw half of this board doesn't read and the other half jizzes when referring to themselves as ""literati"" and take themselves far too seriously
Hunter Ross
Looking For Alaska
Andrew Young
I'm posting this for you. It's a fair use excerpt. It's by a famous writer. You've probably never heard of him.
The book of my enemy has been remaindered And I am pleased. In vast quantities it has been remaindered Like a van-load of counterfeit that has been seized And sits in piles in a police warehouse, My enemy's much-prized effort sits in piles In the kind of bookshop where remaindering occurs. Great, square stacks of rejected books and, between them, aisles One passes down reflecting on life's vanities, Pausing to remember all those thoughtful reviews Lavished to no avail upon one's enemy's book -- For behold, here is that book Among these ranks and banks of duds, These ponderous and seeminly irreducible cairns Of complete stiffs.
Xavier Mitchell
You're a massive faggot.
Jose Gomez
Tell me about the Victor Frankl guy from Hideous Men.
Dominic Miller
I don't remember who that is. I read the book years ago. Aside from the first story with the kid on the diving board, it was fucking terrible and, beyond that, cringe-inducing/embarrassing.
Landon Jenkins
That's what I thought.
Dominic Perry
You thought I wouldn't remember every aspect of a book I read half a decade ago and disliked? Wow, very prescient. Look I know you think you're not a faggot, but you really are. You can change though, but you probably won't.
Daniel Allen
You don't deserve to read, idiot.
Brayden Reed
I'm sorry you like a shit, no-talent, hack user. Maybe you'll develop taste someday.
Caleb Adams
Hahahahahaha
Do you even understand the nuances of syntactical analysis, the carrying cadence of rhythmic prose? Do you not understand he was writing against a salacious culture that had embedded itself in him?
Or do you just take Veeky Forums Bloom drivel as your creed?
I bet your writing is shit btw
Nathaniel King
I definitely don't write. You keep outing yourself as a massive faggot though, The Bloom reference was a joke. Stop taking yourself so seriously, okay?
Ryan Richardson
>haha I was just pretending to be retarded
Do you live your whole life spazzing out as you're backed into a corner?
Way to project by the way, faggot.
Hunter Perry
I think you should take a good look at which one of us is 'spazzing' right now. You're embarrassing yourself pretty good.
Oliver Cook
I'm withholding my anger Though I'd like to be the strangler Of this punk ass little pussy's puny neck It's my right to insist That he acknowledge my existence But he just displays complete lack of respect" That's what he says to himself As he use his magazines to trash me As he sits with both his feet up at his desk Smokes a bag of his weed And starts imagining things And he just can't see that he's manically depressed And in his jealousy and envy It just whirls him in a frenzy As he turns on MTV and sees my face He don't exist in this world So he just twists and he twirls Spirals and spins till he hurls himself into rage And it's destroying him slowly Cause he does not even know me Even though he sees me everywhere he goes So he just tortures himself He has no fortune and wealth So he extorts someone else to get his dough And now he's acting like a bully So he tries to push and pull me But he knows that he can't fool me so he's mad He has no choice but to scream And raise his voice up at me Cause it annoys him to see that I ain't scared