We've got a prose one up, but the poetry thread died.
My piece, still working on a title:
In a grey mountain land, searching for God, I happened on a cave, toothy and cold. Shouting, anguished, within. I turned to my guide, facing somber dissent. Heedless, I entered. Where the small den halted, bleak light fell through the rock, on a thin brackish pool, in which a figure lay. That tormented wraith writhed, bones in black water, endless life lamenting— one it could not take. An ending I offered, a fool's pity. It shrank from me in fear— by this I left.
Returning to the guide, I bid us continue the search. Met with my ignorance, their gaze sought the ground in dismay.
Nolan Nguyen
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Ryder Ramirez
It is equal to living in a tragic land To live in a tragic time. Regard now the sloping, mountainous rocks And the river that batters its way over stones, Regard the hovels of those that live in this land.
That was what I painted behind the loaf, The rocks not even touched by snow, The pines along the river and the dry men blown Brown as the bread, thinking of birds Flying from burning countries and brown sand shores,
Birds that came like dirty water in waves Flowing above the rocks, flowing over the sky, As if the sky was a current that bore them along, Spreading them as waves spread flat on the shore, One after another washing the mountains bare.
It was the battering of drums I heard It was hunger, it was the hungry that cried And the waves, the waves were soldiers moving, Marching and marching in a tragic time Below me, on the asphalt, under the trees.
It was soldiers went marching over the rocks And still the birds came, came in watery flocks, Because it was spring and the birds had to come. No doubt that soldiers had to be marching And that drums had to be rolling, rolling, rolling.
Isaac Rivera
I like this. The last four lines especially remind me of the feeling of not remembering your dreams, but knowing that they happened.
Hudson Martinez
This has a fantastic flow to it, the only line I'm not quite getting is "That was what I painted behind the loaf," but this may just be a result of me not considering the poem for long enough.
Grayson Scott
Because you've never been desperately poor and hungry. It's a poem by Wallace Stevens, who is probably one of the best poets of the last century. You just confirmed that you're a pleb, that's all. The only reason I posted it was to see if some user would be like, "tipsssz fedora so shiit xdxdxd hehe huhu ha"
Kayden Rivera
You're right, I've never been desperately poor and hungry, and I haven't studied anything by Stevens.
Glad I could help you jack off your ego-fueled metaphorical hard-on, but these threads really do work better if people post their own work.
Ryder Taylor
Lol, shut up you waste of semen. You have nothing worth posting. Your attempt is full of cliches, and not in a good way.
If the internet didn't exist to coddle you, you'd be working your 9-5 and talking about flat pack furniture with your fat and fucking ugly wife right now, instead of daydreaming about being a "writer" because you think it's cool to be an "artist"
Suck me off, you cunt. Stop posting here.
Jace Rodriguez
he didn't even post anything?
James Hughes
He's the OP
Levi Reed
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Asher Cook
Anime is for fucking losers too Pathetic
Jackson Perez
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Nicholas Ward
this is the truth of my love perhaps forever untold:
i am attracted to other feminine forms in a purely transient manner and i abstain from action which i believe could hurt
after that? you, my love my angel, my house mate my lover, my partner
born somehow in this cosmos to the side of me and i to the side of you i would wed thee. for now i see a beauty in you that grows beyond the sublime beauty i initially glimpsed
the only thing that causes me concern: my fantasies my jealousies
but my love burns true to the thought of you i would explore this world with you i would grow old with you i would laugh with you i would play with you i would plan with you i would pray with you i would create with you raising children consciousness peace and laughter
my strangely addictive fantasies i don't know what it is i seek if it comes to a choice you win a million times
sexual union deepening connection i want to live and love and i want to invite you to come with me
how intertwined these threads of existence are yet i would not dare unpick this knot my entireity, i dream it remains forever entangled with yours
Oh what responsibility to have another tied to me i hope i can fly so you can soar free
Oh dance dance with me
Jeremiah Long
The was a goat, young and stout. Who turned his head, upon a shout. 'Allahu Ackbar!' yelled an ape, from a mountain. Who grabbed goat nape, and gushed like fountain. The goat's eye froze with fear, solid as glass. Then Abu Hajaar, fucked the goat in the ass. And so goat cried, 'Baaaah! Baaaaah!' The man plowing hard, screaming, 'Allaaaaah!' And just when goat, thought it most hurt. Came rolling thunder, in dreaded 'BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTT' The desert winds, carried no sound. For pink mist and chunks, lay on the ground. Where goat and Hajaar, were never found. Bodycount.
Jason Fisher
How do I write short poetry? Are there rules?
Jose Rivera
read lots and lots of haiku understand why you want to write short poetry understand many people will be unimpressed even if you write the next 'world of dew' or 'lighght'
Nicholas Green
I wasn't planning on sharing it with others. But I'm curious as to why others would be unimpressed
Christian Gutierrez
because short works are rarely held in the same esteem as longer (read: usually bloated) works and stuff like Saroyan is labeled 'pretentious garbage' by people who refuse to acknowledge anything shorter than a sonnet is a poem capable of greatness.
Zachary Mitchell
I hardly hear them now. Just auditory clues, cues to signal– keys to slot in neuropaths and drafts to notes to sheets to this music. Peace in the pieces– where I sit but don't listen. These songs that tend to sidle step in, change some stone to flesh and numb law to love. I want rest but instead this sly test sets in for the night. I hardly hear them now.
Joseph Ward
>Saroyan is good and lighght isn't everything wrong with top-down establishment-dictated poetry
Christian Baker
lighght is beautiful one of the prettiest words ever made right behind Joyce's endlessnessnessness