Poetry rate thread

>I just roll my eyes whenever poem or poetry is included in a poem.
DUDE

An Idaho red belly man with a red nose
Guffawing and sloshing out his garret

A dizzy spell this time spun round into that gutter
with a splash and slip

Comrades red nosed guffawing splatter
A shoe lace tied slipped lickity split

Mates mates you drank too much
on the side of the road
now lying in the slush

I like it. Keep writing religious poetry.

And so!

Frightened by suspense; on my wall sits man.

And on the shelf thy father.

but its my real life all we do is read poetry and watch movies

Oh God.
Oh God.
Oh God.

I wish these words were more than hyperbole,
more than accents I’ve learned punctuate my vocabulary with.
Why was I not blessed with your gift of ignorance?

chekd

8/10