Rules are simple:
Critique & Post
Don't reply to people who don't critique,
Someone buy me EU4 and I'll host,
Don't be a goddam freak
Critique Thread? Critique thread!
Christian Gomez
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Isaiah Russell
Not a part of anything just an excercise in writing a setting.
Will drop some crit for the next few posters
Easton Martinez
i was diddly-doo'ing
in my
diddly-doo
now my diddly
hoo
is covered in diddly-
boo
Jaxon Nelson
jillary billary
billary boo
jillary jillary
hillary who?
Luke Sanders
r8 pls
rickity bickity
bickity boo
theres only one fag in this thread
and that one is you
Joshua Roberts
jillary one is hands down the goat out of all three
>theres only one fag in this thread
and that one is you
I know it messes with the the flow a bit but
>theres only one fag in this thread
and that is you
just works better for me
Josiah Hill
A SECRET LIFE
A WONDERFUL LIFE
WHERE IS MY WIFE?
Henry Johnson
OP here, can confirm
Easton Watson
How's this for a short story
A soldier in Vietnam who has come to hate his country murders a comerade whose tour was almost over, and switches identities with him. Thereby faking his own death and stealing the dead soldier's ticket home.
And the story is written from the perspective of him telling his 20 something grandkid in the 90's, confessing for the first time.
Elijah Miller
no