>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include the rimjob
Book has sex scene
Mason White
Gabriel Moore
You'd like Houellebecq then.
Owen Smith
>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include the waking up, crying, and furious masturbation
Dominic Turner
>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include pictures.
Robert King
>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include the queefs and farts
Gavin Brown
>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include the shame of lasting two minutes
>wow that was like ten minutes user
John Morris
Why would you cry from waking up after having sex?
Bentley Robinson
>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include link to porn he is revering to
just
Jose Torres
>book
>author doesn't include sex scene
wtf do i even pay you for?
Jacob Brown
the implication is that it was all just a dream ;_;
Zachary Parker
you should overthink the way you write, user
Justin Cruz
>sex scene
>doesn't include books
Ryan Watson
>sex
>doesn't include scene
Lucas Myers
unironically this
Liam Green
don't bully me
Owen Harris
that was constructive critique, not bullying
>there's a fine line between the two
Samuel Mitchell
>book has sex scene
>isn't about incest leading to pregnancy
why even call yourself an author
Noah Nguyen
>book has sex scene
>vagina isn't called "her sex"
Connor Kelly
>book has sex scene
>you don't
Isaiah Moore
...
Ryan Hughes
>book has sex scene
>author doesn't include feet
William Butler
>read a text-based porn game for the prose
>it sucks
Xavier Thomas
...
Xavier Robinson
>Book has sex scene
>Author includes farts